Boys Like Girls

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

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    I don't know how many people like Boys Like Girls, but I happen to love them. These titles will be from them.

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    01. The Great Escape
    02. Five Minutes To Midnight -- [DONE]
    03. Hero / Heroine
    04. On Top Of The World
    05. Thunder -- [DONE]
    06. Me, You And My Medication -- [DONE]
    07. Up Against The Wall -- [DONE]
    08. Dance Hall Drug
    09. Learning To Fall -- [DONE]
    10. Heels Over Head
    11. Broken Man -- [DONE]
    12. Holiday

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    01. Reserve and COMPLETE by deadline
    02. Must have some sort of rhyme scheme
    03. No minumum line length
    04. Maximum 40 lines
    05. NO CUTTING/SUICIDAL poems
    06. If it's a style, explain the style afterward
    07. If you want to change the title, ask
    08. Maximum two per title
    09. Maximum three per person.
    10. Deadline: July 15, Judging: July 16

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    01. Britt: Me, You And My Medication
    02. Sheena: Five Minutes To Midnight ; Me, You And My Medication ; Hero / Heroine
    03. Teria: Broken Man ; Learning To Fall
    04. Secluded: Broken Man
    12. Terra<3: On Top of the World

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    01. Britt: Five Minutes to Midnight
    04. Secluded: Dance Hall Drug
    05. Carrie: Up Against the Wall
    06. skater girl: Up Against the Wall
    07. poetess: Thunder
    08. Espoir*failed: Learning To Fall
    09. Jordan: Learning To Fall
    10. Gem: Thunder
    11. Hey Italy: The Great Escape
    12. Terra<3: Heels Over Head
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    Have fun
    :]

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    [Giggles like a school girl getting all giddy like.]
    Heeeheeeeheeeehee.
    Ok.
    Can I have "Hero/Heroine"
    But change it to
    "The Hero/Heroine of Heroin".
    Yes!

    Then I want.
    "Five Minutes to Midnight"
    And
    "Me, You, and My Medication".

    But.
    I may change the last one later if I can think up something excellent for "The Great Escape".
    So.
    I hope that wasn't too scary. =]]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    I'll take
    Broken Man
    &&
    Learning To Fall.

    xDThanks.

  • dollwithafrown
    17 years ago

    "Dance Hall Drug" and "Broken Man".

    Thanks.

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    "Up Against The Wall" please

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    Up Against The Wall

    Up against the wall,
    You've pushed me way too far,
    I'm never giving in,
    I don't care who you are.

    If you loved me just an ounce,
    You'd let me go right now,
    Before it goes much further,
    Turn and take your bow.

    Exit from this stage,
    This act left with the sun,
    We can't hold onto nothing,
    The hurt can't be undone.

    I know we're all we know,
    But the poison runs too deep,
    You're tainted in my eyes,
    There's nothing left to keep.

    Memories are all I'll hold,
    The love has faded out,
    Too many times you tore me down,
    And filled me up with doubt.

    My heart breaks with every step,
    But I have to turn away,
    If I don't, I know I'll come,
    To hate you more each day.

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    Can i just say, i love this band. xxx

  • StormyStar
    17 years ago

    Can i have Up Against The Wall?
    thank you!

  • dollwithafrown
    17 years ago

    Dance Hall Drug
    by SecludedSerendipity

    The dance hall inside is jumpin';
    A real wild night they've got goin' on,
    And it's only just left ten-thirty,
    They'll be going on 'til way past dawn.

    The arms in the air are swingin',
    The music has taken control.
    Not a single person is tiring,
    Eager to reach their party goal.

    The music is keeping them up,
    It's their nightly dance hall drug.
    Everybody's happy, smiling, dancing,
    Full of kisses and big strong hugs.

    The party's only really gettin' started,
    Nearing twelve it'll be on full swing.
    Friendships being made, maybe a little more,
    This could even be the start of a naughty fling!

    The dance hall inside is jumpin';
    A real wild night they've got goin' on,
    And it's only just left ten-thirty,
    They'll be going on 'til way past dawn.

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    Learning to fall please, thanking muchly
    xx

  • Espoirfailed
    17 years ago

    You were looking for love,
    But you found me instead.
    And let's face it, familiarity really does breed contempt.
    Because I was expecting you to breathe life into me,
    Like the air we breathe in the summer mist,
    And all the nights spent with you
    And the youth that I missed.

    I wasn't hoping for us to grow old.
    Sitting here all I feel is cold, and
    It's not the type you can cure with a heater.

    I know you like a book I've read one too many times,
    I know you'll cross your heart as the clock in the backroom chimes.
    And as you cross mine, make sure you seal it this time.

    Each minute becomes another year,
    And I'm still sitting here,
    With you in one seat and me in the other.
    We had some good times but you were never my lover.

    I could have left but I was too afraid to lose it all,
    But I should have just learnt to fall.
    I was scared because
    The ground didnt look all that friendly,
    But hindsight tells me it was better than this.
    So now at my grand age, we'll end it with a kiss.

    I'm jumping and letting go.
    I'm learning to fall.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    Learning To Fly
    Was just above you with Espoir or something like that. =/.
    You might want to read.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    No, sweetie. Espoir has Learning To Fly and so does that other girl. That's two, then. He just didn't title it.=/.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Yes, Sheena is right. There were already two with it, since I wasn't on the ball and didn't write full beside the title, I will let it slide. Sorry about the misunderstanding.

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Thunder please

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Xx Thunder xX

    The air feels warm with tension
    As we come to the end of day
    The black clouds start to gather
    The storm is on its way

    The wind is picking up
    And the sky is growing dark
    A rumble of low thunder
    Announces it's about to start

    A flash of lighting cracks
    And the heavens begin to bawl
    Another roll of thunder
    Escorts the harsh rainfall

    The sheet of rain speeds up
    As the thunder grumbles through
    A fork of blue light flashes
    And splits the sky in two

    It shows no sign of stopping
    As it rages through the night
    Pitch black with rumbling noise
    Lit up with sparks of light

    As the morning approaches
    The thunder becomes a quiet sound
    The storm clouds start to disappear
    As the rain starts to die down

    *Gem*
    Copyright©GemmaStott2007

    (Not my best, lol)

  • AGirlWorthFightingFor
    17 years ago

    The Great Escape

    There is an emotional strain
    That comes from living day to day
    Forcing yourself to pay attention
    To every lesson after lecture

    The skater boy with the lip ring and tattoos
    Asked if he could share a seat with you
    In Home Economics, you completely fail at cooking
    So make your escape when the teacher isn't looking

    Hanging by the lockers
    Meet up with friends who could get away with murder
    If they had the motivation
    But today is for the moment

    To do something spontaneous for once
    You can feel the synapses
    Fire clap between your senses
    FANTASTIC!
    EXPLODING!
    INEVITABLE!

    Drag you out into the parking lot
    You'll come with us
    If you already know what we're about
    Here's to following your heart
    And never getting caught

  • dollwithafrown
    17 years ago

    Broken Man
    by SecludedSerendipity

    Wrinkles on his tender skin,
    Eyes that are blue and yellow.
    Thin lips that no longer manage a smile;
    He's just a sorry, broken fellow.

    Family: deceased, for quite some time, he's
    Living out the remaining years alone.
    He's the image of a teddy, lost in the dark;
    Battered with age and so very worn.

    He sits in an armchair all night and day,
    Watching as life passes on by.
    Trying to be positive, could life really be this bad?
    Yet all he achieves is tears in his eyes.

    Through the elderly years that he has lived,
    To make it happy, he's done all that he can,
    Yet all he's managed to do, all he's become
    Is a tired and lonely broken man.

  • StormyStar
    17 years ago

    Im sorry that i didnt enter mine.. the computer hasnt been letting me on in a while.. is it too late to enter? ill post it on here.. but if it is.. then dont bother looking at it..

    GOOD LUCK TO EVERYONE!

  • StormyStar
    17 years ago

    Up Against the Wall

    You took my hand and led me away
    Together forever you said that day
    By my side is where you'll stay
    But you lied to me and thats not okay

    Pushed me up against the wall
    You stood above me, you stood so tall
    The way you kissed me it felt so wrong
    My feelings for you are gone
    we've been together for too long

    You cant push me around anymore
    You wont let me go out that door
    Holding me back from things I need
    Why don't you see, you cant love me

    Just let me go be happy with him
    You mean nothing to me not even as friend
    Your grip was too tight
    I'm sick of you get out of my sight

    i could not breath so i need to go
    your not who i want and Ive let you know
    we cant go on this way anymore
    i once loved you but now your a bore

    I'm moving on so you should too
    find a new girl that will be good for you
    good bye forever my old best friend
    you wont care, so you'll pretend

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Damn, thanks for reminding me Hun. I will allow it and I am going to extend this now. PM's will go out to those with reserves. I've been so busy but I promise you guys I will get all of my contests done and judged lol.

  • Mommy And Me
    17 years ago

    Heals Over Head

    Trailing through the thickets, pulling flowers from her hair
    She dashes from the meadow screaming "this isn't fair"
    Another night of bruises, another night of booze
    Her body is so injured, she doesn't feel her own blood ooze

    Her golden sunshine hair, is now in peaces on the floor
    He yanks her around, even as she screams "no more"
    He gets off on her pain, seeing the tears fill her eyes
    Another night of black and blue, another midnight lie.

    Come morning light, the ivory concealer covers up the truth
    Painting on her face, she looked like she was back in her youth
    With her midnight black liner, and her deep blue eye shadow
    She hides who she really is, and tucks her true self down below

    She searches for her smile, and pastes on some laughs
    But with in her eyes, you can always see her two halves
    A side where she's smiling, but she hanging by a thread
    Or the other... where her heals are already over her head

  • Mommy And Me
    17 years ago

    --edit.. double post

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    Not my best, but here. =]
    And I'm working on the other two. They're really hard for certain reasons, plus I'm just getting out of a bought of writers block.
    I'll try to meet the deadline. =/.
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    The Heroine of Heroin

    You've got yourself showers of disappointment
    And the thunders rock what little judgment you have left.
    Poison rain touches your lashes that burn away good decisions,
    And you fight for happiness, or what's left of your vision.

    We'll sip from the cup that we'll call a safe bet,
    And we'll remember the times we gave to life [cheers!].
    A few times we'll remember the illusions we assume,
    But that won't scare us enough; we love to inhale those toxic fumes.

    Down the peppered lances of powered we'll walk,
    The ones you're so afraid to let go of.
    And we'll push up to breathe in the confrontations of tomorrow we can't touch,
    We'll take showers of heroin with a touch of ambition that's way too much.

    The showers of disappointment are rocking your boat,
    And Jonah's sinking the whale with a bit of lost faith,
    We'll throw our hope and whistle while we work;
    You've got yourself left with poison rain and a pale little smirk.

    xTheEcstaysofSuicidex

  • StormyStar
    17 years ago

    Wasn't this supposed to be jugded?

  • Mommy And Me
    17 years ago

    It was. but she has been busy dear. she will get to this contest soon enough :-)

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Judging starts now. Thanks for the patience.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    This was really tough to judge, you all did a great job.

    First - Terra [8]
    Second - Sheena [6]
    Third - SecludedSerendipity (Broken Man) [4]
    HM - Gem [2]

    PM me your titles please and I will get them done when I can. Also try to make sure the titles you give me are ones I haven`t commented on before or are for another of my contests that I haven`t yet judged. Thanks, and good job to all; you`re all very talented. :]