Titled Contest!

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    CLOSED FOR JUDGING CLOSED FOR JUDGING!

    Prizes
    1st place-6 comments and votes
    2nd place-5 comments and votes

  • Run out of words
    17 years ago

    Could I do nothing left to say but good bye? Thx..

  • Mo
    17 years ago

    I'd like to reserve One Way Love Affair (its a collab between myself and Sam but we can split the prize if we win)... :o)

    Thanks
    xx

  • Bryan
    17 years ago

    Give You My Heart

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    I Give You My Heart, please.

    :]

  • Vanessa
    17 years ago

    Compromising posisitions please

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Darn. I wanted I Give You My Heart. :[ Lol
    I'll take... One Way Love Affair, please. :]

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    "Nothing Left to Say But Goodbye", Please.

    Thanks,
    Jeannie

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    Nothing Left To Say But Goodbye
    By: Twisted Heart

    Each day we pass in the halls of our home
    Not a word do we share it's like living alone

    You on your way to a job that you hate
    I'm driving the carpool and we're all running late.

    Too many times we just passed for we knew
    That the distance between was too big and too true

    Late nights all alone when you called on the phone
    Working late once again and you wouldn't be home.

    But I know you are lying It's a truth I must face
    I've seen you with her, I have now been replaced.

    The reflection of tears that are seen in my eyes
    Is the pain of a heartache that lives in your lies.

    As shadows cross over the love that we knew
    Lost in the depths of two lives black and blue

    No longer a semblance of what we once shared
    Just scars from the wounds of pain that we wear.

    Still I wait in darkness as tears fill my eyes
    Knowing nothing is left but to say our goodbyes.

  • Vanessa
    17 years ago

    Compromising positions
    By Vanessa

    Opening the door, I am filled with dread
    Anger intense, for the woman in our bed
    Bodies bare, twisted, and tangled
    Our love once vibrant has now been strangled

    Hate is blazing in my tourtorted soul
    This sercet I wish I did not know
    For I can not just turn and walk away
    I am at a loss, I have nothing to say

    Thanks to compromising positions, I have seen
    It has to be the end, the end of everything
    My hate and my anger are now so strong
    I have feared this, for so damn long

    That I am in an idle state, a trance
    Mourning for our lost romance
    And evrything inside me is now dead
    Except anger intense, for the woman in our bed

    Thanks to compromising positions, I have seen
    It has to be the end, the end of everything
    My hate and my anger are now so strong
    I have feared this, for so damn long

    I know that is not my best but here it is

  • Run out of words
    17 years ago

    Nothing left to say but goodbye

    It's much like a storm,
    that comes and goes.
    And after the storm comes silence,
    Eventually the sun gives in and shows.

    Sometimes too much happens,
    and it's quite hard to just swallow.
    Sometimes you just need to give up,
    sometimes you just fall asleep to see tomorrow.

    When the love of your life,
    just realized he was too busy.
    Or he spent some time thinking,
    and decided love would bring misery.

    When you look all around,
    with tears filling your eyes.
    And there's not a sound,
    no one to wipe the wounds of the lies.

    When things have gone too far,
    to know they'll never turn back.
    And there's no point hoping for more hope,
    no one's going to cut you any slack.

    Open your eyes and wipe off those tears,
    If he had any love at all he'd have shown it these past years.
    Open your eyes and realize,
    that when you're love is built on just a lie,
    Sometimes there is nothing left to say,
    Nothing left to say but goodbye.

  • Mo
    17 years ago

    One Sided Love Affair
    Poets - Mo & Sam (Collab)

    He writes flawless words for her
    Verses that past a great land
    For her face he does not know
    And his love, I shall not understand

    He wraps sonnets in mementos
    Gifts of which we cannot see
    For we do not have his lovers eyes
    For we do not hold loves serenity

    He sows words of utter beauty
    Weaves tales of how he'll pursue
    For his eyes are ablaze with passion
    And his quill is his tongue of virtue

    He ponders his lilies in essence
    Making sure that they are all pure
    For his love deserves perfection
    And his heart is all but demure

    And after the sands of time passes
    He pines his life to the bones
    Awaiting that perfect moment
    To secure himself in the unknown

    This man he has loved wholly
    And his love is but a moment away
    But he will never feel her touch
    His heart did his shyness betray

  • CondescendingHeart
    17 years ago

    One last kiss please.

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    1st Place-Mo and Sam (Collab)
    2nd Place-Twisted Heart

    If you guys can pm me the poems you want doing, I will get to them asap!
    xxx