Any Old Song

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    ONE POET PER TITLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Okay, so I'm loving these song title contests! Here's one from me. These titles don't necessarily mean I like the song...just the title.

    First off rules:
    NO cussing ( not even the "little" words )
    NO sexuality ( that's for the bedroom )
    NO religion ( helps me judge fairly )
    NO cutting, suicide, or dark poetry.
    MUST RHYME!!!
    ONE TITLE PER POET!

    Okay...here's your titles!

    Makes Me Wonder
    1.
    2.

    Never Again
    1. Happiness Is Just a Gash Away DONE
    2.

    Thanks For the Memories
    1. Disturbed One
    2. Bryan DONE

    Girlfriend
    1.
    2.

    Big Girls Don't Cry
    1. Lush.Fcuk-*
    2.

    How Do I Breathe
    1.
    2.

    Over It
    1.
    2.

    The Sweet Escape
    1.
    2.

    HAVE FUN!!!!
    MUST RESERVE!!!

  • Bryan
    17 years ago

    Thanks for the memories please

  • disturbed one
    17 years ago

    Thanks for the memories plz

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Big Girls Don't Cry!

    I love this song.
    :]

    And is it one per person, Dear?

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    Yeah, one per person!
    Sorry!!!
    Charisma*

  • Midnight Sun
    17 years ago

    So big girls don't cry is full?

  • Midnight Sun
    17 years ago

    But she said you could only have one. So which one are you choosing?

  • BREEawNUHH
    17 years ago

    Actually.
    She did say one per person.

    "Yeah, one per person!
    Sorry!!!
    Charisma*".

    :]

  • BREEawNUHH
    17 years ago

    I'm not sure if you were asking for opinions or not, but if you were;

    Personally, I think "Never Again" was the better poem. I really liked the story behind it.

    & to the thread creator; my apologies for going off topic. :]

  • Midnight Sun
    17 years ago

    Are you seriously that upset because I asked you to pick one?! And sense I did read the rules and her REPONSE TO YOU I'd appreciate it if you had all the facts before you started getting on my case. ~Midnight Sun

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    I am sorry to all those involved that I didn't state one per title until later...but it gets too complicated for me if everyone does two. And it allows more entries from other people, so there's more to choose from.
    I do not appreciate the rudeness from Happiness Is Just A Gash away directed towards anyone. And I don't think it is nice to say that no one says you can only do just one poem, because I DID. Those are MY rules. And besides that...Big Girls Don't Cry was reserved before you so you can keep Never Again, but you may NOT submit two poems. That goes for everyone!
    I am sorry for any inconvenience this has caused. I will go and repost ONE TITLE PER POET up at the top to stop any further problems.
    Thank you...
    Charisma*

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    I appreciate that Happiness Is Just a Gash Away, but there is a line in your poem that is from a song.
    "But it's like pouring raindrops back into a cloud" is from a Carrie Underwood song. So if you could change that...it would be much appreciated!
    Charisma*

  • Bryan
    17 years ago

    Thanks For The Memories

    Time stands still as she sits here and writes,
    pouring rain, while the moon shines down light.

    Locked up for weeks, the whole time she has wept,
    spending every second thinking of promises unkept.

    He said that he loved her, and this he had swore,
    that he will never hurt her as he had done before.

    But he is good at this, he knows how to pretend,
    how to break her heart so, and do it over again.

    But this time he has done it, he has gone too far,
    as the background plays "Teardrops On My Guitar".

    She writes him a poem, it's her final goodbye,
    she wipes the tears, as they begin to fill her eyes.

    Swallowing that pill, the last line comes to a summary,
    in large letters for all to read, Thanks For The Memories.

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    Thanks for the post! Hope to see more entrants soon!
    Charisma*

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    Thank you!
    Charisma*

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    Due to lack of interest this contest will be closed. I apologize to all those who did enter. I'm hoping to start up a new one that will catch some more attention. Sometimes these things just flop.....
    Charisma*