My Daddy's Favourites[Round 1]

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I saw so many 3 round contests..so I decided to make mine..I chose titles as my daddy's favourite songs..My dad is into writing poems too..But his english isn't good enough to do it in english..but he will help me judge this

Here are the titles;

.:Autumn Leaves-Nat King Cole:.[Dixie Daisy]
.:Sway-Dean Martin:.[Twisted Heart]+
.:Endlesslove-Luther Vandross ft.Mariah Carey:.[Bryan]
.:Sorrow-Mort Schumann:.[Mooie]+
.:Unbreak My Heart-Toni Braxton:.[Jenna]
.:If You Go Away-Terry Jacks:.[Sarah]+
.:Green Fields-Vogues:.[Teria]
.:Oh Carol-Paul Anka:.
.:Jesus To A Child-George Michael:.[Sheena]+
.:Stop-Sam Brown:.
.:Sealed With A Kiss-Bobby Vinton:.[Jordan] +
.:All I Have To Do Is Dream-Roy Orbison:.[Nikki]+
.:I Can't Give You Anything(But My Love)-The Stylistics:.[Poetess] +

Rules:
-Must be new
-Must rhyme
-Reserve
-One title per poet
-Actually plan on doing it
-Please don't do changes about the title

Ending Date:
17th Of Aug

Prizes:
The winner for the second part four will get 4 comments and rates

Cheers,
Laura

Oh weeeh Autumn Leaves please.....
BTW Great Idea and I love the fact dad will help with the contest. Thats awesome

Unbreak My Heart, please. :}

[Mouth drops open.]
Jesus To A Child, please!

And.
I really think that is sweet. Your dad is helping you judge and that he writes poetry too, that's adorable. =] I'm glad to see that poetry doesn't die with age.=]

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Thanks,I'm happy that you guys appreciated it -smiles-

And Sheena,he loves to write and I hear the song you chose whenever I go to see him..He listens to it so much that I memorized every second of it :]]

Endless Love

Thanks all that entered so far

Come on guys..choose a title

Green Fields-Vogues, pleaseee.

Okay guys...I'm sorry but I have to extend this thing for kay...I was a little bit late to tell this I know..but thank god that I found this

And mooie,you can do it for sorrow..it really doesn't matter

This will be closed on the last day of July

And if anyone wants to enter..just select one

Cheers,

.:Laura:.

I'm getting my written tonight or tomorrow.. so I'm doing my best! =]

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If you go away please.

Sway- Dean Martin, please. Poem is forth coming.

Thanks

Sway
By: Twisted Heart

Beneath the branches of the palm
On sandy beach thus we lay
As moonlight dips into the sea
Our bodies start to sway.

The sound of ebb tide's melody
Comes to our ears in sweet refrain
As distant to our breath is held
Illusions to the night is claimed.

Two bodies held in sweet embrace
As stars cross o'er the sea of dreams
Among the shadows of the night
We sway in time and space it seems.

The tremble of a passion's kiss
To hold the embers of desire
That shakes us from our revalry
And sate the tempted fire.

Among mere song of whispered words
To our ears the music swells
Two souls that sway into the night
Tranquil hearts now tell the tale.

This came out as like a country song, I'm aware, so it's the first time I've written something like this, but I thought your dad might like it. I hope. =] I wrote this type espically for you guys. =] Enjoy.
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Jesus To A Child

When you here the angels singing there's no second guessing it,
You just listen with your heart and open those tiny eyes,
Because there's a memory passing and God doesn't let me forget
With you by her side, my baby's sailing in the great blue sky.

Jesus, please tell her that she'll be okay and you'll take care of her;
And remind me one more time, why you had to take my baby girl away.
On these cold winter nights, I remember the hard times,
But I still look up to the Heaven's and sometimes I believe I hear my baby pray,

"Send Mr. Bear my best wishes, with a smile on your face,
Tell him I miss you both; but I can see you every night from this view;
It's beautiful up here, Daddy; I get to play with the angels;
But remember, you'll always be in my heart and I'll always need you.

Daddy, you don't need to worry on this cold winter night,
God's got me by his side, and there's no need to fret, Mommy's up here too;
We're watching over you; don't be frightened, it'll be okay,
And Daddy know, I'll alway remember you."

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If i may reserve can i have all i have to do is dream

All i have to do is dream

by Nikki

When I want to see you
I know all I have to do
Is lay there and close my eyes
I know you will be there with no disguise

I cannot find you when I am awake
You were taken and I now have heart ache
Death stole you far too soon
But my love for you still shines as bright as the moon

I see you gorgeous smile
I get to hold you, if only for a while
I remember what it is like being in your arms
And I remember your tender loving charms

You still look perfect to me
As gorgeous as can be
I whisper in your ear I love you
And you whisper I love you to

My dreams are my heaven
To keep you with me, I am beggin
I hear a funny noise while I lay in your arms
I open my eyes to find, it is just my alarm

Until tonight my darling, same time same place
You are the my only one I could never erase
I shall see you tonight until than my heart shall scream
But I know to see you, all I have to do is dream

If you go away

Whispering sweet words in my ear
As we walk along the beach at night
Hand in hand, our love is true
Oh such a beautiful sight

When I look into his eyes
I see how much he loves me at no cost
I know he will always be there
To help me when I'm lost

So I'm sitting here now
With you by my side
If you go away now or ever
My heart will subside

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Not my best.

Thanks for the ones that entered..but the ones who didn't get in with their poems
I'm giving you all a week from today
Otherwise I will start to judge without your poems

Cheers;
Laura

Teria,Jenna And Bryan,Kay
I'm sorry but I have waited too long for you

It's closed now
The results will be done two days later

I understand and thanks. Good Luck to the others.

[The Four That Will Get To The Second Round]

1.Sheena With Jesus To A Child
[Why I Liked It]
-I liked the story,It was so touching,it almost made me cry

2.Twisted Heart With Sway
[Why I Liked It]
-The sweet feeling caressed me all along this
And I really liked the flow.So fluently

3.Anna With Sorrow
[Why I Liked It]
-I liked her thoughts so much...and ending did it so much

4.Jordan With Sealed With A Kiss
[Why I Liked It]
-It was so creative...She managed to use her imaginery and created something so different-in a good way- than a title can say

I will give all's 4 comments asap
And wait for the second round you four

Cheers and congrats
Laura

Awe, thank you for the first!
I'm so glad you liked it.. it was change of write for me!

Anyways, congradulations to everyone else!
xox

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