Terra's Titled Contest

Contest Now Closed

TAKE ALL THE TITLES YOU WANT!

Tiles:

1. The Time Of Your Life
2. Happiness
3. Discoveries
4. Life
5. Share
6. Remember
7. Stop and Smell the Roses
8. Laugh
9. Special Memories
10. Observations
11. My Favorite One
12. Delightful
13. Fabulous
14. Seize Every Opportunity
15. Smile Done By: Happiness is just a gash away
16. As Good As IT Gets
17. What if...
18. Remember When...
19. Laugh as much as possible
20. trust
21. always & Forever
22. Laugh
23. Live Life to the Fullest
24. Family Comes First
25. Carefree & Easy
26. Wonderful
27. Expectations
28. The Simple Things
29. Children as Life's Treasures
30. Smiles
31. Special Moments

When you go into contests they are packed with rules now-a-days. When I joined they weren't so packed. So this contest is only going to have two rules.

-No stories... (less then 25 lines)
-HAVE SOME FUN WRITING!

FINALLY THE DUE DATE:

July 4th (the outage slowed me down a bit. sorry)

My Favorite One, please. :]

Posted :) hope you all have a grandioly time.

Well I had it as one title per person. but after the day i had. ima say as many titles as you want.

Remember when please if i am to late, just delete it.

Remember when we were happy

by Nikki

Remember when we were happy
When all we ever did was smile
They said we would never make it
But we made it worthwhile

Remember when we were happy
All those special times we shared
And our new found love for each other
That beautiful day we declared

Remember when we were happy
When we liked to be together
You always said we would be
Unconditionally, always and forever

Remember when we were happy
When I once did believe
How did I actually fall for you?
Why was I so naive?

Remember when we were happy
When we would stand side by side
Now when we are close
It is like our love has died

Remember when we were happy
I really miss those days
But when the memories replay in my head
It portrays the memory of happiness I once felt

Okay. because of the outage of poems and quotes i am moving the deadline until the 4th.

I will be closing this in two hours any other contestants please get your poems in quickly

Okay well i am just waiting for Jenna to come online and i will begin judging when she is. :)

Ohhh darn... and I thought I still had time! :-/

You have a 1/2 hour dear

Jenna was supposed to be onlione a 1/2 hour ago with her poem. so when she is online and gives it to me the contest will be closed. until then. people can still put thier poems in :)

I have waited two hours past my time... haha well i am closing this contest although jenna has not got her poem to me. i will have the results up soon

-i am judging by poem not by poet.

This contest I am judging harshly. Cause my dad was reading it and said I was to gentle. Lol.

Remember When We Were Happy:
You came off with a good start. It wasn’t strong but it wasn’t week either. I still wanted to read on. I liked how the first line followed all the way through to the end. Good work on that part. But the last two lines were not as well put together. It turned me away from the poem. I needed to read it a few times before I got it into my head.

Family Comes First:
I didn’t really feel this poem much. It seems as if you have a lot of wrong words in it. The ending didn’t really make much sense to me either. You seemed everywhere in this poem. But it has potential to be better. Read over it.

Special Memories:
I liked the way you put this poem together. It was simple yet held a strong meaning that everyone can understand. It could mean anything for anyone.
Good work. I liked it

Children As Life’s Treasures
This poem almost made me cry. There is so much truth in your words. Good work. But one line threw me off “dying just a little more inside every day” otherwise I loved it.

Happiness (The Shaper Side Of The Blade)
Wow. I don’t really know what to say about this poem. It is craziness I mean. Seeing as I went through sorta the same thing a while back. Haha. With a different man. Well anywhos. You poem doesn’t really have any structure to it. Besides the retentiveness of happiness. Abcb efgh ibjb klmml …

Always & Forever:
I liked this poem. It was a good read good work dear. Well.. that was short.

Remember:
This was another good poem. I really felt it. you did good work on this one. Awesome job. Made me cry a bit

Smile:
And this poem was also a good poem. I enjoyed reading it. played with my heart strings a bit. Good work.

now i am judging this contest diffrent. if you get lots of comments. and you made it to my faves. you got first

if you got lots of comments you did second place

if you got a few comments you got third

if you got one comment you got HM

Ok so who won?

That is the beauty of this contest. everyone won. haha just in diffrent ways. i will be doing all the comments when i get home tonight sense i didn't judge till almost mindnight last night.

i would normally have actual prizes for everyone. but right now i have alot to do with work and such. so i am going to do the best prizes i can with out falling behind on everything.