Mountain Dews 2 word titles

UPDATE: im taking off the limit of people per title

Rules:
1 No acrostic
2 updated
3 2 poems per person
4 more then 4 lines
5 spelling doesnt lose points and neither does grammar but it is nice to have and helps the poem
6 Flow is major

7 RHYME SCHEME BOTHERS ME, KEEP IT CONSISTANT THROUGHOUT THE POEM: DONT HAVE 4 LINES 2 LINES 5 LINES 8 LINES 2 LINES UNLESS YOU CONTINUES IT THROUGHOUT THE POEM

8 contest should end July 14th depending on how many people enter

Titles:

Broken Fairytale
-Porcelain Angels Shatter
-Memories
-Bryan
-Yuna

His Cinderella
-Teria
-Charisma

Lonely Heart
-Racheal

Pastel Rainbow
-Porcelain Angels Shatter.
-Wings of flame

Burning Passion
-Yuna

Picture Frame
-Britt
-Hellon

Thin Ice
-livin in a lonely hell

Only Me
-livin in a lonely hell

Shooting Star
-Charisma

Prizes:
1st 6 r/r/c
2nd 5 r/r/c
3rd 4 r/r/c
4th 3 r/r/c

May I reserve: Picture frame and broken fairytale please :D

His Cinderella

His Cinderella.

His voice sends chills
throughout each dream.
And, little does this best friend,
know what I mean.

Everytime I say,
" I wish you were here."
For, he's the only one
who's broken my fear.

My fear of love
silently lingering above.
OH, his cinderella- what I want to be.
Only if he knew and fell in love with me.

His Cinderella and Shooting Star plz!
Charisma*

UPDATE: I took off the limit of 2 people per title

Pastel Rainbow

The sky crosses blood,
The earth dry as dust,
Hate filled hearts live,
While love turns to lust,

Clouds hang in despair,
As acid falls to ache,
The brave scared of dying,
And tears never fake,

Pity falls from angels,
And perished are we all,
Gold turns to rust,
And the running beg to crawl,

Blades of grass are bitter,
And thinned of all so pure,
Blackened by the flames,
While searching for the cure,

The life lifted from us,
As Ice cuts the skin,
Brutal are these words,
As our sanity turns thin,

Bush called for the bomb,
And we ordered it to send,
The scar we have given,
Was our own that won't mend.

Broken Fairytale

Shooting Star
By: Charisma*

I don't believe in dreams anymore.
For what happens when I wake up?
You are gone, away from my heart.
A false pretense that you were in love.

I don't believe in soul mates anymore.
We were just alike, but you're not mine.
The circumstances gave us perfection
But all of my devotion you declined.

I don't believe in fairytales anymore.
Happily-ever-after...what a lie.
The damsel in distress is still in the tower
'Cause her prince had wandering eyes.

I don't believe in meant-to-be's anymore.
Was I really meant to hurt like I do?
I won't accept the pain I'm feeling
As part of a plan for me and you.

I don't believe in shooting stars anymore.
Where do they take the wishes I send?
Maybe into a pile of other hopeful wishes
That will never see a happy end.

May I please reserve: Broken Fairytale and Burning Passion?
Thanx

I have my poem for Broken Fairytale (the other one is coming soon).

Broken Fairytale

A tear fell down my cold, red cheek,
Laying in the snow, so weak,
I felt alone, stranded, only me,
No longer did I want to seek,
For someone to cure my heart, so meek.

When I finally looked up to see,
If someone cared to hold the key,
To open my eyes and save,
What is left of my fairytale that once was free.
There you were, with eyes like the sea.

Like a needle and thread so brave,
You stitched up my broken soul and gave,
A shimmer of hope and so much more,
To me, the one who had been merely a slave,
To the witchery and darkness that fills every cave.

As you mended the scars that I cannot ignore,
The sky grew bright as never before,
For the first time in 7 long years, a smile finally grew.
My wings that were damaged, learned to soar,
Soar once more, forever to explore.

7 years in the past, any dream I had, I would pursue,
But then the accident came devastatingly true,
And I lost my arm, half my sight and became full of fright.
When people saw me, they laughed and threw,
Crude remarks, harsh words, and pain that never withdrew.

Now you know what happened to my fairytale that night,
When it was shattered, rejected, no longer a light.
When you finished mending my soul, after those years,
A part of me remained scarred, no longer right,
I wanted to give up, the long, hard fight.

The final thing I ask, is to leave the pieces and tears,
Of my shattered soul, for when you leaves, my pain reappears.
You saw another, who needed your help,
She was my sister, who had a thousand fears.
Even when it's a matter of life and death, she interferes.

A tear fell down my cold, red cheek,
Laying in the snow, so weak,
I felt alone, stranded, only me,
No longer did I want to seek,
For someone to cure my heart, so meek.

There it is :D... The rhyming pattern is: aabaa, bbcbb, ccdcc, and so on for seven stanza's. The last stanza is a repeat of the beginning stanza.

Good Luck everyone

^^ENTER!! :D

Can i get
only me

Thin Ice

I had a dream
In the mid of the night
It was cold and silent
With hardly any light

I was on
A frozen lake
The ice was frigid
My soul it seemed to take

I stumbled and slipped
And fell to the floor
The ice touched my body
And I froze to the core

It was there on the floor
I realized it then
The ice under me
Was getting so thin

I didn't even have
Enough time to scream
I fell into the water
In this horrible dream

Under the water
I started to drown
My life flashed before me
As I went further down

All I could see
Were the tears I cried
Then things went black
I realized I died

I awoke in tears
It was my life
It was there in my dream
I noticed me, skating on thin ice

( As long as you are still breathing it is never too late to change your life)

Only Me

Why am I so empty,
Why is my heart so torn,
I know I should be happy,
But I just feel so worn,

I am too young,
To be so broken and hurt,
People say I am golden,
But yet I feel like dirt,

So many things
Are wrong about me,
People must be blind,
Because they seem not to see,

Someone come and fill me
Fill this empty shell,
Please come now,
I promise not to tell,

AH! I'm sorry... are you able to take my name of of "picture frame"?? Thank you so much!

Good luck everyone

1 week till this contest ends

Broken Fairytales (Sonnet VI)

I sit here reading broken fairytales,
I feel like everyone of them I live,
no happy ending, pain is all I dwell,
and sadness is all that I have to give.

If I had proved my love would she be here?
to hold me close, to tear my pain apart,
would my loneliness start to disappear?
as I write sonnets to my broken heart.

Time stands still as I gaze at her blushed face,
my happy ending starts to become true,
to see her walking with such flawless grace,
but my love for her she had never knew.

Broken Fairytales, its ending now known,
Spending the rest of life dying alone.

probably my last of this set of sonnets,
if you paid attention to my sequel, you will have noticed a line I use in this sequence of sonnets, look at line 8, if you read in the rest of my sonnets that sentenced is repeated, there may be a few words different but its pretty much the same line, it ties the whole set together, i probably will start a new set in the future.

His Cinderella

I'm watching this romantic movie
And it leads to thoughts of you
I thought that I was over it
But I guess that I'm not through.

Cuz here I sit with tears pouring
Just streaming down my face
I can't seem to let you go
But yet you are going away.

I've loved you for a secret year
And you proposed to her
Now I'm supposed to be over it
Trust me, that's what I prefer

But since I've held on so long
My grip is just too tight.
How can I let you slip away?
To me, it doesn't feel right.

No one seems to understand
Why I loved you so much
They said there's things I can't see
My mind shuts off to such

It's not that I ignored them all
I can see their side of it too
But they aren't struggling with
The way I feel about you.

The desperation that I've felt
The pulling at my heart
The knowing that my world
Is quickly crumbling apart

And inside I'm sort of happy
And then again I'm not
I hope the best for you both
But I have to force those thoughts.

I'm in hate with love right now
It's beaten me to the ground
When I think of getting up
It pushes me back down.

So until I find another man
Who makes me feel like this.
I'm forced to live in agony
While you live in marriage bliss.

And it haunts my every moment
Of every single day
That I've lost the love of my life
And watch him walk away.

So as I finish this fairytale movie
Where the best friend loses the game
And she isn't his cinderella
I know that I'm just the same.

By: Charisma*

Does anyone that reserved need an extension on theres?

Okay I'll start judging tonight everyone

thanks for entering

1st place= His Cinderella by Charisma

2nd place = Only me by livin in a lonely hell

3rd place= Picture Frame by Hellon

4th place= Pastel Rainbow by Jordan

Congrats winners, oh and I messaged all of them

WOW! Thank you so much. I too enjoyed so many of the entries that were posted! I really appreciate 1st ... it means a lot! I'd love my most recent 6 to be commented!
Thanks!
Charisma*