Your love.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    I'm in a lovey-dovey, mushy-gushy mood.

    You have an hour to write a love poem about the one who takes your breathe away, the one you love, the one you find irrestible!

    Just 1 hour.

    So have fun.

    Yes, I'd prefer new.

  • nikki
    17 years ago

    Can we enter in this, even though the hour has gone?

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    Uhm. Hour is still ticking. Maybe, depends on whether or not I still wanna read a mushy poem.

    But if you want, deadline is tmara at 4 pm.

    However, if I get 10 submissions by this hour, i'm stopping.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    It has been extended. Until ten entries, how's that?

    Tootles, my dearies.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    I'd do it if I can enter an old one I wrote. It's the best I've ever written and I could never top how it explains how I feel for the one I love. If you won't allow an old one, I won't be able to do it. =[

    Thanks. =]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • nikki
    17 years ago

    Yeah i have a few old one's i'll see if i get some time to write a new one

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Me and Marcus wrote this together =) We take turns in each stanza =)

    Xx Angel On My Shoulder xX

    She is the drive inside of me
    That lasts until I'm older
    She's the wall of steel that keeps me strong
    The angel on my shoulder

    He's the boy that keeps me sane
    The one I love with all my heart
    He keeps me going when I'm down
    And I'm about to break apart

    She looks after me when I'm ill
    Helps me up when I'm feeling low
    She never has to ask what's wrong
    She always seems to know

    He's the guy so sensitive
    To the emotions that I'm feeling
    He does his best to cheer me up
    'Til my smile reaches the ceiling

    She loves every part of me
    And accepts the way I am
    She encourages my hopes and dreams
    And calls herself my biggest fan

    He loves me for who I am
    Loves all of my pro's and con's
    He plays me tunes on his guitar
    And writes me gorgeous poems and songs

    She's the girl who makes me smile
    The one who resides in my heart
    She loves me no matter what
    And holds me tight in the dark

    He's my soul mate, my true love
    The other half of me
    He's the one who makes me feel
    As happy as a girl could be

    She's my beautiful special girl
    We connect in so many ways
    She's the only girl out there for me
    This could never be just a phase

    He makes me feel on top of the world
    And calls me beautiful all the time
    He calls me 'Kitten' to make me smile
    He's the only thing on my mind

    I'm so happy to be engaged
    To the one true love of my life
    She's the girl I used to dream
    Of becoming my wife

    I'm proud to be engaged to him
    The one I'll still be with when I'm older
    He's the one true love of my life
    The angel of my shoulder

    *Gem and Marcus*
    Copyright©GemarcusStott2007

    <3

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    Ecstasy, you may.

    a few more hours. =]

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    My Everything
    By:Charisma*

    A million other faces
    Two million other eyes
    So many want my heart
    So many wasted tries.

    I belong to someone.
    I'm his and his alone.
    Nobody can change that.
    My heart has a home.

    I'm nestled in his arms
    Secured by his strength.
    Heaven couldn't replace
    What he means to me.

    Happiness is with him
    In the moments we have.
    And knowing when he's gone
    He will always come back.

    He's inspiration to laughter
    A shoulder for my tears,
    A long, sweet conversation
    A hero to my fears.

    An everything to anything
    The answer to it all.
    My one and only love
    That made it worth the fall.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    Checking the time with this post.

    remember, 4.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    Let's Play Truth or Dare

    You've got the sun singing to me, but that's not what I'm after;
    I'd prefer your voice over any orchestra.
    The violins are sweating notes as your fingers dance over the strings,
    And your smile resembles that of safety like comfort no other brings.

    Nature's beautiful with no flaws, but you could win this fight; I'd rather sink into those eyes.
    The fireflies will show us something no other's have seen that entertain and seduce the night,
    But baby you don't need to move; you could change the color of the sunset with your smile, it's true,
    And even if the stars giggle down upon us, we'll simply laugh knowing they can't have the moon like I have you.

    That string quartet is playing but the melody they're strumming is nothing to your voice
    And those whispers you sneak in the air around me won't be lost; they'll melt into mine.
    We'll turn up that music to feed our souls and move to the tune of our lips;
    We'll slow dance to this disaster [we'll call it love that shakes our hips].

    You can break my composure with one word and just a kiss could steal what breath I have,
    But I'm no one to complain; your eighth note rhythm is mingling with the melody of my chords;
    You are turning my composed, soft music of love from whole notes to eighth notes that take your breath away.
    Your kiss is a short cut to my heart and I'll kiss them with every note; I'm dancing too fast, but I've barely began to care;
    Whisper anything you want into my lips; baby let's play truth or dare.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Darling, I Love You

    My Dearest Andrew,

    I have a little letter that's written from my heart -
    We really have no beginning, so I didn't know where to start.
    The past is kind of fuzzy, where the days begin and end,
    But through it all, I could always call you my friend

    Andrew, I've wanted to tell you how much you mean to me.
    What would I do without you? Where would I be?
    These feelings I had have been kept quite hidden,
    And I'm questioning myself if they are forbidden.

    Your big blue eyes, so caring, they understand;
    Calmness brought on by the touch of your hand.
    No matter what's wrong, you're there to hold me tight.
    To help me get through those dark, stormy nights.

    Spending countless hours on the phone, I can't even keep track;
    Helping me move on and not letting me look back.
    Words can't describe how I feel about you -
    But, I do know that they're nothing but true.

    If I could shout it so the whole world could hear,
    Or whisper it softly to anyone near,
    Then they would know what I'm feeling inside -
    And maybe they could begin to help me describe.

    My heart has endured almost its limit on pain -
    But you make it disappear like the sun with the rain.
    Three little words can't sum up my heart,
    But I guess that's the best place to start.

    Andrew, I love you, the cliche lost on me.
    Saying that to you is so easy.
    Never have I spoken more true words,
    Nor has there been any others I've heard.

    There are no words to describe how I feel.
    Never in my life have I felt anything this real.
    As I sit here and try to make words come to mind,
    I'm realizing that there are not any to find.

    All the words that I know don't fit that mold.
    Apparently, there are some, or so I am told.
    So I guess for now, those three will have to do.
    Andrew, Baby, Darling, I Love You.

    Love,
    Me

  • Sweet Fragility
    17 years ago

    My Only One
    By: Sweet Fragility

    You are the only one that I truly love,
    You are my soul mate sent from above.
    The only one who can make me laugh,
    The one who will stand up for me on my behalf.

    Your touch causes shivers to run up and down my spine,
    My body is here but my mind is on cloud nine.
    When you are with me I still can't believe
    That you love me too and don't plan to leave.

    For us to last forever I will put up a fight
    If these feelings are wrong I don't want to be right.
    We were meant to be together, to be apart, never
    We will be able to make it through whatever.

    Always and forever, you will be my only one
    A love so passionate, it can't be undone.
    I knew from the first moment our eyes met
    You are the only choice I will never regret.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    Ok. This is over, and if anyone went over the time limit I don't really care.

    I'll just this soon.

    and HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY TO ALL THE AMERICANS!

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    1- 3 comments
    2- 2 comments
    3- 1 comment

    1- angel on my shoulder
    2- off to war, soldier
    3- my everything

    ---
    Let me know what you want.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    I will comment the poems later. <3

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Wow, cheers. My three latest please =)

  • Joseph
    17 years ago

    Too bad i missed this

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    Haha. Nice.

    I'm going to do them now.

    Now what other comments am I doing?

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    Wow! Thanks...you can comment my most recent!
    Thanks a bunch!
    Charisma*