Write me a....(contest)---disturbed one

RESULTS AT THE BOTTOM!!!

P.S
im not like...a professional musician so none of these will go on the radio or anything...no harm no foul no plagiarism

I WANT TO TRY!
I may have to unreserve though Dear,
But I will definately give it a go

I'd like to try as well

Question:
Do we post the lyrics here?

I kind of wanna give it a shot!

I'll reserve, please and thanks.

Haha its good...i didnt even read it as if it was a poem i tried singing it haha =D

its fine just the way it is

Riz: yes you post the lyrics here, but if there is lots of swearing and you dont feel comfortable posting it here you can PM it to me

(Sorry if it isn't much)

May My Soul Be Free

{VERSE 1}
YOU THINK THAT YOU COULD GET AWAY
YOU THINK THAT YOU COULD RUN AWAY
YOU THINK THAT YOU COULD HIDE AWAY
YOU THINK I COULD’NT FIND YOU
YOU THINK I COULD’NT KILL YOU
YOU THINK I COULD’NT BEAT YOU
You think that I couldn’t do so stop THINKING
Because it won’t be long until you stop BREATHING
You won’t be able to see the light ANYMORE
You’ll be bleeding on the FLOOR (cuz I’m coming)
YOU WANNA PROVE ME WRONG
LET’S SEE HOW LONG YOUR DEATH PROLONGS

{CHORUS}
BECAUSE OF YOU
The nightmares won’t GO AWAY
BECAUSE OF YOU
I had to cry every night AND DAY!
BECAUSE OF YOU
THE WORLD KEEPS SPINNING
AND IT WON’T STOP SPINNING
BECAUSE OF YOU
I CAN’T SMILE ANYMORE
I CAN’T BE WHO I WAS
I CAN’T BE THE PERSON I WANT TO BE
OH MAY… MY… SOUL… BE FREE

{VERSE 2}
YOU THINK THAT YOU COULD RUN
AND NOW YOU’RE HAVING FUN
But you know I’m not yet done
I WILL FIND YOU
I WILL KILL YOU
For all the things, you put me through
You think that you could just FUCK ME
You think that you could LEAVE ME here and. LET. ME. BE
So now, have fun with your last night and breath (cuz I’m coming)
I... WILL... BRING YOU TO DEATH!

{Bridge}
The whispers…the cries
The screams…the murders
That you commit
Won’t be left…LIKE THIS

{Repeat Chorus 2x}

{whisper}
May my soul be free…

Does it have to be new? I could give you something new, but this is good too, I hope.

oh, yeah, and everything in // // is supposed to be back-up vocals.

I See A lot of F--ked Up Shit Going Down in the Next Book
by Hey Italy

{Intro/Chorus 1}
I want to meet your eyes
At equal par with mine
I want to make you pay
For not giving me my way
But there's NOT ENOUGH HATE!!

{Verse 1}
I want to get inside your mind
Twist and pull on every weakness I can find
Turn my suffering onto you in kind
//Take you to a place//
where everyone you love is left behind

{Verse 2}
But to you I can do nothing
Save a slight malicious grin
For you alone are my reason
For remaining here
I want to be worth something you can appreciate
And I will do anything to prove we can relate

{Chorus 2}
But you won't listen
You don't believe in fate
I want to bring you down
but there's just NOT ENOUGH HATE!!

{Verse 3}
You don't give a damn about me
And don't hear a word I say
But you just had to let me live
You couldn't give in and hurt me
You just showed your godd-mn perfect mercy
//Eyes burning red//
As I felt my heart decay

{Bridge/Chorus 3}
In another life, could you have been mine?
I taste your bitter breath as your teeth gnash into my face
Your words fall upon my head worse than
The weight of the rain, "There's just
not enough hate"
You say
"There's just NOT ENOUGH HATE!!"
Before you turn and walk away

{Outro}
Leaving me to writhe in my unrequited pain
To comtemplate the reasons why
And try to win you back again

{Repeat}
THERE'S JUST NOT ENOUGH HATE
NOT ENOUGH HATE!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaahahahhaaaaa
F-ck.

btw, can I like PM you with my name so I can atleast get credit for the lyrics?

Yep, I can't come up with anything for this....sorry.

I'm gonna unreserve.

To Hey Italy: what do you mean can you send me your name?

is there anyone else who wants to enter? do it please...you know ya wanna

Ive changed the due date for this

It's just a funny thing I have about copyright/credit...if you end up using the song any time in the future. or not. I like being safe. than sorry.

Dont worry...i probably even ever look at this post anyways...lol

anyways im gonna start the results

Okay here we go, i wanted to make this like multiple winners but i figured out a winner then i came back to read this for voting and i liked a different one so...im only gonna have 1 winner and the rest are honourable mentions.

And the winner is!!!

RIZ!!!! woot lol

1st-5 r/c
hm-2 r/c

please pm me the titles you want read