Good charlotte!!!!

Ok, here are the names to some good charlotte songs............

1.The Young and the Hopeless
Lush.Fuck-*

2.Good Morning Revival

3.Foot Loose

4.Secrets
synthetic tears, Britt

5.We Belive

6.Little Things

7.The Anthem

8. Life Styles of the Rich and Famous

9.I Just Wanna Live
end of the beginning/XxRomancing the Darker SidexX

10.S.O.S
Asuspicious76--DONE

11.Bloody Valentine
slavetothemusic

12. Day that I Die
xxTruth Within Liesxx
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So reserve a song and write me a poem from the song title, this ends on JULY 18

P.S--winner recieves 20 comments
2nd place gets 15
and 3rd place gets 10

PLEASE NO NATURE poems

all other poem types are aloud

The Young and the Hopeless! :]

For "day that i die" could i change 'i' to 'she' ??
if so i would like to reserve it :)

I would reserve bloody valentine but isnt the song 'my bloody valentine'?

Yea, do u want to reserve the song then?

Yes

Thank you :)

Can I do I Just Wanna Live even though someone else is?

Yea, two people can be assigned to the same song. so i will assign u to it

Ok, well i changed the date to

JULY 18th instead of the 20th

this may change again

I would like S.O.S please...... Thanks! :-)

Every morning I get out of bed,
Smack the clock, scratch my head...
Stumble to the entry door
To get my paper and read of war.
I fix my coffee and try to cook,
While the phone keeps ringing off the hook.
Then it's off to work again,
To write reports and hand them in...
With the same old people pi**ing me off,
One of which I call the boss!
Then five o'clock finally rolls around,
I lock the door and hit the town.
Come two a.m. I call it a night,
Stumble home, turn out the lights.

And in the morning I'll get out of bed,
Smack the clock, scratch my head.
Stumble again to the entry door,
Get my paper, read of war.
I'll fix my coffee and try to cook,
While the phone keeps ringing off the hook.
Then I'll be off to work again...
Cause it's the same old s*&#,
It never ends!

So I need a vacation, just a small little break
To lay in the sun and enjoy a steak...
I'd drink margarita's and tell a few jokes,
Laugh like a loon and forget that I'm broke.
This is my plea, my shout to the world,
My S.O.S.... My message unfurled.
Cause....
Every morning I get out of bed,
Smack the clock, scratch my head...
I fix my coffee and try to cook,
While the phone keeps ringing off the hook.
And just in case I didn't say it before....
I'M SICK OF THIS CRAP! MY LIFE IS A BORE!

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If this is NOT okay, please let me know. I starred things out so I wouldn't have bad words :-P

Yea

Yea, it has to be new

Welcome

Any one else?

Omg i think i have to withdraw from this contest... lack of time and severe writers block... so sorry.......

I will have my poem in by tomorow :)

sorry about the wait. been really busy

Could I please have "Bloody Valentine"

Thanks alot~mel

Day That She Dies (Sedoka)

Walking down the street
She turns into an ally
And freezes in pure horror

Waiting Silently
He points the gun towards her
And whispers to her... 'You're dead'

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The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following
syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the
same subject from differing perspectives.

CLOSED_______~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`

This has finally ended and seeing as there was only 3 entries made. The results are as follows

First Place---XoX TruthWithinLiesOxO

Second Place--- Auspicious76

Third Place---XxX SyntheticTearsRunDryXxX

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Please private message me the poems you would like commented on

First Place--20 comments

Second Place--15 comments

Third Place--10 comments