Jelloo

Well, since I'm bored and got nothing else to, might as well introduce myself to the community even though I've been here already for like 1 week or something. So yeah! Hello, I'm known as intoxicated beauty but whatever. I love poems and related stuffs. So please read some of my poems. As always, I would really appreciate constructive criticisms.

Kthxbye.

Hello! I'll read some of your poems i guess... Even though i am stupid when it comes to critcism >_<

But i will try.

Thanks! Well the criticism part doesn't need to be good or something. All I need is to be able to know the problems of my poems, what it lacks and stuff.