Hard Contest.

Mkay. Hard contest; let's see who can actually do it. :]]

READ THE RULES ALL THE WAY THROUGH.

Rules:
o1. Do NOT use the words that begin with H, C, F, or G.
o2. do NOT use the words OR, FROM, and AND.
o3. Don't care about the length, keep it decent though.
o4. Profanity IS ALLOWED, but I'd appreciate if you kept it at a low. But, you don't HAVE to.
o5. It HAS TO rhyme, some way some how. Don't care if it's only two words in the entire poem, it has to rhyme; tell me EXACTLY how it rhymes after the poem.
o6. Love poems are hard to write and come out good. If you do that, I'm sure you'll place.
o7. I love dark, fantasy poems.. THAT ARE GOOD.
o8. The title must be in the poem at least once.
o9. You must complete this poem.
1o. Must be new.
11. Two poems per person; two people per poem.

Titles:
o1. There's this star, you see.
--xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex [Reserved]
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o2. Eternity isn't allowed unless you're around.
-- EndOfTheBeginning [Done]
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o3. Lotion in the soul.
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o4. Surrender to myself.
--Kitty. [Done]
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o5. You stole all I received.
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o6. What's left is yours, I promise.
--disturbed one [Reserved]
--Sarah [Done]
o7. Did you know it's impossible to breathe.
--xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex [Reserved]
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o8. Rock' n Roll Memories.
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o9. The Bible Within The Mirror.
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1o. Dandelioned yard.
--Anna Shkuratoff [Done]
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Due Date:
July 29th.

Prizes:
First Place: 20 Comments.
Second Place: 15 Comments.
Third Place: 10 comments.

Wow. Maybe I'll give it a try.

For now I'l reserve Surrender to Myself.

Thanks.

Asgajsgljsdla!
Must....try....contest... [eye twitches].
Love...titles....want...all [twitch].
Okay. I'm done. But dode. You made this hard on me, didn't you? Only two titles, pffff.
Alright, you want love or dark mostly, so I'll pick basing it off that.
I HAVE to have:
"There's A Star, You See?"
And between the other two I was debating, I'll choose:
"Did You Know It's Impossible To Breathe?"

And, since it's already impossible [haha] would you give lead way to using only /part/ of the title in the poem instead of all of it? Tell me asap! I'm trying to write now. =]]]

Anyways.
Yay!
I'll try my best... It'll be hard not using all those letters and such, but I'll try my best. Don't kill me if I don't finish, okay? =//

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

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Double post.
That's embarrassing. -.-''

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

I'll take Whats left is yours, I promise please..this sounds fun

Surrender to Myself

Droplets pierce my skin,
As I order a storm to pour
Down through this thick atmosphere,
Into my soul's back door.

Streaks of lightning scrape my windows,
Rain thrashes against my walls;
Almost every door is bolted shut,
So no one enters at all.

Each lock secured tightly,
Shielding in all my emotions,
Slowly loosening in this shower,
Despair and Aversion blacken.

Thunder ripples through the sky,
Mustering up Zeus's deadly bolts,
Now ramming my back door
Simultaneously with threatening jolts.

Quivers, Bangs, and Roars
Envelope my inner secrets,
Lashing them out into the open,
Allowing a Hell of a blitz.

Fingers lace across my scalp,
Digging nails deeply through,
Broiling back all those emotions,
Romping around like animals of the Zoo.

No matter what I do,
Nothing keeps them at ease;
They break through barriers
Simply as the monsters please.

My power over them
Begins to diminish,
As I Surrender to Myself
With one last bow to finish.

What's left is yours, I promise. please

What's left is yours, I promise

Whisper in my ear, tell me its okay
I need to know why you don't want to stay
I didn't think you would just leave me like this
Your kisses so sweet, is something I'll miss

As you walk out the door, leaving me stranded
I know you will be going to see her, its what you wanted
You always wanted her, you never loved me
I was just blinded by your lies, I just didn't see

All the pieces fell, after you said you were leaving I was wordless
I'll pick up what I can but what's left is yours, I promise
I will move on, not love you one day
Now is this the time that you walk away
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Not my best

Oh. Since I won't be hear the day of the judging, I want to tell you all Good Luck and Congradulations to the winners! =]

Okay, one more day.

Anyone else interested?

I did my best for trying to get out of writers block. I hope you like it. I'm going to work on the other one now.. or at least try. =/
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There's This Star, You See

Soothing stars breathe their amnesty through impurity;
They tell you, "Lick the salty tears off your lips."
You run teaming with your religious wishes,
But they whisper, "You needn't run away, we're praying you trip."

You breathe a different story every time you pray,
But there's something about you, so the angel keeps whispering,
"As long as you regard me, I'll save you one day."

There's this star, you see, looking down upon you,
But don't look too quickly; you might stir dust to your eyes.
They talk to you regardless of the moon's last wishes;
"She's worthless, nothing more than a regret to the past."

You breathe a different story every time you pray,
But there's something about you, so the angel keeps whispering,
"As long as you regard me, I'll save you one day."

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Rhyme: abcd, EFE, ghij, EFE.

I really, really want to change mine because when I took "Did You Know It's Impossible To Breathe" I wasn't having problems with my girlfriend and could have written it, save for writers block.
I'd like to change it to, "What's Left Is Yours, I Promise." I do realize that it's already taken, but today's the last day, and if he doesn't get his in, I hope mine will be counted... Thanks. I'll write it now.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

I had to change a lot, but I really liked the outcome. I hope you do too. =]
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What's Left Is Yours, I Promise

Yet there's no waiting; bottles mark the place where we walk,
But, what's left is yours, I promise, though who would bet on that.
Silent echoes beat across your mind; you're lost, I see;
Tripping so delicately, blinking; lost in what?
Take that deep breath the Savior promised that would be breathed for you;
You're bound to need it sometime, but maybe not just yet.
Might've you mistaken them as a kind soul?
They'll tell you, "Now, don't you appear better?"
A sunset touches your eye, but you don't see it; why?
Too much on your mind -- such taste to be seen?
Yet there's no waiting; bottles mark the place where we walk,
But, what's left is yours, I promise, though who would bet on that.

Silent echoes beat across your mind; you're lost, I see;
Tripping so delicately, blinking; lost in what?
Lost in love? Love was never there, my dear child
It was a lie. It was all a lie.
Take a deep breath that the Savior promised that would be breathed for you;
Let the air tickle your lungs; there, doesn't that taste better?
Let the water trickle onto what lips you've left;
Remember, you must breathe once in awhile.
Those skies muster what you won't take; you shutter away,
There's nothing left you're lost amoungst the broken rays.
Yet there's no waiting; bottles mark the place where we walk,
But, what's left is yours, I promise, though who would want to bet on that?

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Rhyme: a,b,c,d,e,f,g,h,i,j,k,l, m,n,o,p,q,r,s,t,u,v,v,w
(This was hard to count, so if I'm off I hope you dont' kill me.)

Lol. If he doesn't get his in yours will count, dear.

Today's the last day, everyone.
So,I'll judge tomorrow.

Theres this star u see. plz

GOOD LUCK!

Theres this star you see,
and it makes me feel so free.
Theres this star you see,
That star is you.

When I look up in the sky,
And see that twinkle of light.
I think of you.
And the twinkle in you eye.

You are the star that shines the brightest,
That twinkles the most,
I do not mean to boast.
But theres this star you see!

I want to hold it,
I want to be held!
By that star,
That single star!

It's only been a day; give her time. =/.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Hey. wussup?

Hey?

Sorry guys, I've been extremely busy lately with work, and my uncle just had open heart surgery, and all this crap.

I'll start judging now.

Have them in by monday.
MKay?

Alright. =] I hope life gets more relaxing for you. =]