Lilly Allen [Round one]

These titles are from Lilly Allens album.
The next round will be a different singer/band.

Titles:
-Smile [Done-Krazy]
-Knock 'Em Out [Reserved-Teria]
-LDN [Done-Wings Of Flames]
-Everything's Just Wonderful [Done-x Hunni Bunches Of Oats x]
-Not Big
-Friday Night [Done-nikki]
-Shame For You
-Littlest Things [Done-XxX Synthetic Tears Run DryXxX]
-Take What You Take
-Friend Of Mine [Reserved-CondescendingHeart]
-Alfie

Rules:
-Must be new
-Prefer rhyme
-Any form of poetry
-One person per title
-May reserve

End date will be the end of July.
People who don't go through to the next round will get one comment.

O0o first pick!! Everything's Just wonderful plzzzz!!! =]

.Ciao.

FRIEND OF MINE
PLEASSSSE!

Friday night, if i may reserve.

I hope this one is ok.

Friday night

I saw her Friday night
I wish it was a dream but I know I am right
she is trying it again
to take away every womans man

So girls hold on to your guys
she has so many desires
she has gone through so many men before
now she over the last one and she wants more

The clothes she is wearing
Every mans heart strings are tearing
The all stare at her as she dances over there
The way she is, is so unfair

She has a way with the men
going to bury another one again
but one thing I have to define
that is she better stay away from mine.

Can i reserve smile?

Smile

To see that smile,
is to feel joy unknown,
tiny dimples found at either side

You will never see a face so dazzling.
Brightly shinning vibrant blue eyes,
against pale silky smooth skin.

Tiny toes wiggling in happiness,
tickles dragging out giggles with cheerfulness,
spilling from two subtly curved lips.

Never to find a smile so pure,
harms of the world yet to overwhelm her.
Beauty at such a young age.

To see that smile
is to feel joy unknown.
A simply statuesque face.

Everything's Just Wonderful [Lyrics]

(Chorus)
Everything's just wonderful now.
Shna-na-nana-na-naa-na
Shna-na-nana-na-naa-na
Please just tell me everything is wonderful now
Shna-na-nana-na-naa-na

(Verse 1)
I picked up my guitar, with every intention to say:
How beautiful life is and my, what a lovely day!
But things keep getting moved and plans are changed;
Suddenly, life just becomes so rearranged.
Times are lost and they can't be saved,
Then schedules claim us all as slaves.
Why can't life be simple, like it used to be?
Is it because we life in the 21st Century?

(Chorus)

(Verse 2)
I wanna be able to catch a breathe of fresh air,
But when I breathe, there doesn't seem to be any there.
Life has to slow down, we're all moving too fast.
Pretty soon, nothing in life will last.
What happened to lazy afternoons, sipping iced tea?
Is it because we life in the 21st Century?

(Chorus)

(Bridge)
I finally catch a minute to strum a few strings,
As I sit and reflect about everything.
How so many things were once so pretty;
What happened to so many of the cities?

(Chorus)

(Verse 3)
As I pick the notes, a melody is made,
But with it, the harmony begins to fade.
With a little help, it seems to fall apart.
Then, of course, it's back to the start.
Why can't things just be wonderful like they used to be?
Is it because we life in the 21st Century?

(Chorus) 2x

Shna-na-nana-na-naa-na
repeat until fade.

Is this still going?

I don't know, maybe

Yes it is.

LDN please

LDN

I'm what you stand for,
Something you wont know,
Take the warmth from summer,
Take the lightest glow,

He shall stand in vain,
Thou in tainted tear,
Thus to the principles,
Of He who is unclear,

Rain pounds the ashes,
And you all turn to mud,
Stone graves carved,
Upon the darkest bud,

White is the canvas,
Sacrifice the red,
Start the storm with thunder,
Echo what is bled,

Deep in reflection,
The glass shimmers cold,
Hating all I am,
As my life will unfold,

Staring at the shimmer,
As crystals rain,
Lying underneath it,
For the ending of the pain.

When will this be done?

I might end it soon.

Knock 'Em Out.

I'll do it soon as I get home from work tomorrow.
[[I get home at one]]

Deal?
xD

Is this done?

I don't know if it is over, it should be so when will it be judged?

Sorry I havent been on here much lately.
I will judge it this weekend.

Since there was only 5 entries, only two people will go to the next round.

1) x Hunni Bunches Of Oats x - Everything's just wonderful
2) Wings Of Flames- LDN

Everyone else will get one comment each.