Things left unsaid (ends July 31st)

Rules:
1 No acrostic
2 2 poems per person
3 more then 4 lines
4 spelling doesnt lose points and neither does grammar but it is nice to have and helps the poem
5 Flow is major

6 RHYME SCHEME BOTHERS ME, KEEP IT CONSISTANT THROUGHOUT THE POEM:
DONT HAVE
4 LINES
2 LINES
5 LINES
8 LINES
2 LINES
UNLESS YOU CONTINUES IT THROUGHOUT THE POEM

7 Deadline= July 31st

Titles:

Always have & always will
Baby, don't make me cry
Screaming Silence
Break the skin
Emerald Eyes
My nightmare
Candy Coated lies
Things Left Unsaid
My end of the line
Date with disaster
Ventriloquist
Deceptively Simple
My Apology
Say Nothing
Where's my miracle

Prizes:
1st 6 r/r/c
2nd 5 r/r/c
3rd 4 r/r/c
4th 3 r/r/c

Deceptively Simple, please. :]

My Nightmare please!

~Things Left Unsaid~

Nostrils tingle, beginning to breathe.
Air is expelled, aiming to deceive.
Externally stable, as he inherently seethes.
Emotions tabled, he receives no reprieve.

Loquacious lips, tongue tied in a knot,
overbearing, yet inside overwrought,
a feeble facade, that could go for not,
for the truth could be found, if it were sought.

Words enkindle, his throat is inflamed;
an empty frame, with the interior maimed.
Demeaning disclosures, feeling defamed,
yet with one honest mutter, he is acclaimed.

Abounding lungs, an inflated chest,
inordinately full of emotions suppressed.
With an innate ability to cope with unrest,
he awaits his implosion, forever depressed.

~Will Hunting~

Ventriloquist please

My Nightmare
Brittney Schmelter

Bone-jarring shrieks stagger the night.
Bloody hands and rusted knives.
Scarred soul with hate in-threaded,
Through the night he's stealing lives.

Death-filled whispers of insanity,
In the ears of innocent children.
Chuckles escaping a dry mouth,
The calling of those who cannot win.

Scraping across the eerie floor.
Wide-eyed terror; hands uplifted.
Sense gracefully leaves the room.
Blank eyes - cold hands - body rigid.

Ascending out of lifeless room,
Gasping at life, corpse is shaking.
Dropping the knife; sight unsteady,
Our corrupt master is now awaking.

Body invaded with foreign sense,
Drowning in the waves of ecstasy.
Giggling silently he tiptoes on.
Not a single thought of mercy.

Dancing with his chaotic fantasies,
He marches on through his parade.
He only stops at a quiet house.
The party goes on as rain cascades.

The saddest thing of this story is...
I can only call it: A dream that's there.
Reality and Fantasy are now one.
Though I wish it was just My Nightmare.

Copyright Brittney Schmelter

Always Have & Always Will please (:

Break The SKin

Baby, don't make me cry.
Please. :]]]]

I can't wait to see Phily's.
Get it in dear. :]
Soooon.

Edit

Always Have & Always Will

Late April day,
when my eyes first saw you.
From that moment on I was yours.

Traveling through the years,
pursuing you with hope,
but continually met with disappointment.

Never give up was my attitude,
you were one worth my time,
I wasn't going to lose you after so long.

Love wasn't quite it.
Call it deep rooted admiration,
until that night...

Star filled sky lit your eyes,
while your hand found mine,
for the very first time.

A whisper filled the air.
Love sprung up without asking,
"Will you be mine" with always be remembered.

I have always looked up to you.
You now my heart, and I have yours.
And I will always love you with all I've got

Things left unsaid please

Xx Things Left Unsaid xX

I've got so many unsaid things
You really need to know
I have to try and tell you
Before you tell me to go

The truth is that I love you
I never meant to make you cry
I never meant to push you
Towards saying goodbye

It is true, I treated 'us'
With not a lot of care
But I never saw the day
That you wouldn't be there

I really need to tell you this
Before I lose my nerve
I'm sorry I never gave you
The love that you deserve

But I want to set things right
And show you we're meant to be
If you'll just give me a chance
And say you still love me...

*Gem*
Copyright©GemmaStott2007

Baby, don't make me cry.

Precise commendations break apart our lives,
and involuntary illnesses scream unbearably loud,
as uncovered statistics rise and fall so rapidly,
freeing oneself from terrifying take backs,
and " I love you," turns into an unknown fact,
learning the consequences of your own actions,
is handicapped for nightmares drifting above,
and our love is not but a release from brittle fears,
so, baby, don't make me cry- - I beg of you not to.

Um, someone else has already selceted

ventrilaquist

i was wondering if i could so that one to, and if so i would like to do it then

Ventriloquist(sp)

You control me
this cant be

i wanna be real
i wanna feel

Never again do i want to do what you say
Never again not tomorrow not today

I don't wanna be ruled by you
but what else can i do

I will break free
I will make you see

I am real,not just a doll
You, and your reign will fall

I will bring you down
No longer on my face will i wear a frown

It will be a big wide smile
while all the while

I will rule you
now, what can you do

Yes, more than one person can enter per title

Philly don't you read the rules?

You're not allowed to bump on the contest forum
you're gonna get my contest deleted sheesh

Glad to see everyones enjoying the titles, i dont read the poems untill the end and i read them anonymously.

so keep them coming =]

Please reserve "Emerald Eyes"

Thanks.

Emerald Eyes
By: Twisted Heart

On dusty shelf in darkness rests
Porcelain skin and satin dress
Gold spun curls, fancy ties
Two bright gems, her emerald eyes.

Once loved by all now she's alone
Inside this house once called a home
But tragedy came late that night
She witnessed all through emerald eyes.

Little girl in fluffy flannel gown
Nestled close in sheets and pillow down
Awoke so startled with periled cries
Shattered innocence saw by emerald eyes.

Dark shadows fell upon tainted bed
As little girl gasped for her final breaths
No movement at all, not even a sigh
Tormented death saw through emerald eyes.

All went silent and still in air of gloom
A single shot heard down the hall in his room
Now quiet comes painful upon this sad night
As tears crack the face that holds emerald eyes.

Just a warning contest ends soon, the 30th i'll be sending a reminder to anyone who hasnt submitted their reserved poem

thanks
Mountain dew

Always have & always will- Krazy/Raveena
Baby, don't make me cry- Teria
Screaming Silence- XxX Synthetic Tears Run DryXxX
Break the skin- Wings Of Flames/SilverKiss
Emerald Eyes- Twisted Heart
My nightmare- Brittney Schmelter/Rose not your average
Candy Coated lies- XxX Synthetic Tears Run DryXxX
Things Left Unsaid- Will Hunting/Gem/Raveena
My end of the line
Date with disaster
Ventriloquist- Bryan/Stephanie Naylor
Deceptively Simple- Lush.Fcuk-*
My Apology
Say Nothing- ImplementsOfOuch
Where's my miracle

lol.. I wanted to put this here because I wanted to see what was taken.. and I keep coming back to look at it..

I'll take Break the Skin.

Break the Skin

Pushed down, shoved aside
Gasping, bubbling
Dead inside
Move, breathe, talk, live
Don't falter, never give

Bad, good, sit, stay
If I'm your dog,
keep hands away
Teeth sharp, eyes bold
Tempt me, tease me, die cold

Beat me, break me
take me, tame me
You always look and never see
So do come closer, foolish kin
A single gnash will break the skin

Ok

My nightmare.

Everything is dark,
All you here is a bark.
It is a nightmare.

Then something hits you,
It was something huge.
It is a nightmare.

You feel a knife,
Knowing it may take your life.
It is a nightmare.

You feel it stabbing your flesh.
And feel your blood, its fresh.
It is a nightmare.

You here its bloody voice,
You cannot rejoice.
It is a nightmare.

You see its face,
Then you are in a chase.
It is a nightmare.

But all I can think of,
Is the person face!
It is a nightmare.

The eyes that kill,
It gives me a chill.
It is a nightmare.

The lips that pierce your skin,
I know he will win.
It is a nightmare.

I feel his cold hands,
There like wristbands.
It is a nightmare.

They rap around my neck,
And I turn into a reck.
It is a nightmare
I gasp for air,
I send up a prayer,
It is a nightmare.

I know this is the final moments of my life,
As I feel that knife.
It is a nightmare.

I cannot speak,
I feel so weak.
It is a nightmare.

Then I am in my bed,
I am not dead.
It was a nightmare

(thats oen of mine ill pm it 2 u also)

When will this be judged?

Ok so heres the deal this contest is closed to anyone who hasn't already reserved

I have 3 names who still need to enter

Synthetic- Screaming Silence-no
Lush-Deceptively Simple-maybe
Bryan-Ventriloquist-done

When I get those 3 to answer I will judge
I am PM'ing them now

Im so so sorry bout this, forgot all bout it

Ventriloquist (Acrostic/Rondel Hybrid)
Bryan

Violins play in the background sweet melodies
Everyone dances, not a sad soul in sight
No sorrow lingers, happiness fills the night
Times stands still, everyone is in tranquility
Reminiscing on these enchanting memories
In-secluded love fills the room tonight
Laughing and talking, so easy to see
Over the disguise for-shown in the light
Questions still linger, no guarantees
Unanswered heartaches giving a fight
Instantly the clouds begin to recite
Showing the magic under the mist
This is the sorrowed life of a ventriloquist

a style that i thought would be cool, it uses the rondel rhyme scheme ABBAABABABBAA, and spells out a word or sentence like the acrostic style, hope yall like it!!!

Ok judging now

Results-

1st place- Emerald Eyes - Twisted Heart
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2nd place (Tie) Say Nothing- Philly
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Candy Coated Lies- Jordan
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3rd place- Things Left Unsaid- Will Hunting
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4th place- My Nightmare-Brittney Schmelter
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Thanks to all those that entered and congrats to all those that won

This was hard to judge sorry it took so long