SoSickOfTears's Three Round Contest Round Three!

Winners from the second round are:

With Love x3
xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
Carrie

Round Three.
Take one of my poems and transform it into your own.

~Rules~
Don't take a poem in the sad category.
Do not transform it into a self harm, suicide etc poem
Tell me which poem you used

Prizes-1st Place-15 comments and votes

The remaining participants will each get four comments each on poems of their choice.

I'm giving you plenty of time on this one, the closing date will be: 30th August.

have fun!
xxx

Thanks for letting me continue Jenni! ((Ciao!)) Sorry I was so slow last time. Question: Do we use the same title, or do we read one of yours and make it our own? Just slightly confused. ;)

Oh wow, thank you so much!
But, I have a question.
Should we twist the /idea/ of the poem, or can we just use a title and make it our own? I hope that makes sense... =/.
Thanks! =]]

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

You can do either, I'm not fussy =)

I'll take Guilty Pleasures then. :)

hehe.

Hold on. I keep changing my mind.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Okay, after changing my mind 93587349572978 times, I've decided, I want "Time To Heal A Broken Heart (Yeah, Right)".
Excellent title. =]

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

I think I am going to go with "Emotional Kingdom"

*waves poem in the air* I finished it, but it's explicit... am I allowed to post that in here...? Oh, well, here goes nothing. :]]

a little background on this, my boyfriend's a plumber and does really dirty work, usually in really tight crawlspaces. So I thought I would throw that in here :)
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Guilty Pleasures

My baby's stuck inside a crawlspace,
There's not much that he can see -
But once he finally gets out,
He'll be too busy thinking of me.

His phone has some naughty pictures,
I'm almost pracatically nude!
And if anybody should find them,
I'm betting my ass that we're screwed.

He likes all the ones that I send him;
He tells me all the things he could do -
And once I get back from vacation,
You can bet your sweet ass that I'm screwed.

His fantasies make me want him,
And it's too bad it's over the phone.
Because once I see my baby,
He's guaranteed to make me moan.

The pool table's our special thing -
The felt on the table is green.
And once he has me up on there,
He can see many things left unseen.

He always starts off nice and slow,
But the anticipation always grows -
Until each of us are really happy;
We never know how far it'll go.

Each time it gets a little bit worse,
But the moments I'll always treasure.
My baby and his skillful tongue
Are just some of my Guilty Pleasures.

Emotional Kingdom

High on a thrown of truth,
Buried in a den of lies,
We all have our own burdens,
We all wear some disguise.

Love that's drowning in hurt,
Drips poison with every word,
Forgotten moments of worth,
Amnesia you don't want cured.

Happiness within reach,
Fear never far behind,
Passion keeps driving you forward,
Sadness leaves you confined.

Alive in a world full of death,
Time is both friend and foe,
Inside this emotional kingdom,
Lay the secrets we all want to know.

EoS is the only one left and I haven't seen her,,, I hope that she is okay :]

I'm doing okay, but suffering heavily from writers block and a lot has happened..
I'm really sorry it's taking so long.. I'll try to write something now, but I won't promise anything.
Thanks for understading. xpx

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

It's not over till august 30th dear! Take your time, I was just hoping that you were okay :]

Oh, aha!
Good.
And thank you so much for your care. <3

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

I'll be taking a leave of absence due to personal reasons for a while, I'll get to judging upon my return.

Thank you for your understanding.
xxx

I'm baaaaaaaack!

I'm gonna be judging this within the next few days

xxx

Okay guys, I've asked someone to judge these for me, I didn't want to do it myself as I was finding it impossibly HARD!

Hopefully they will reply soon, and then I will let you know!
xxx

Here are the results!

1st Place-Carrie-Emotional Kingdom
2nd Place- Ciao-Guilty Pleasures

If you PM your poems to me, I'll get on them asap!

xxx