I think my poem is stupid.. any one agree?

JustPlainMe:
I'll really keep that definition of "pimple poetry" in mind. I hope mine isnt one of those. I would be honored if you could examine some of my poems since you seem to have alot of knowlege of poetry. Please write something about what I could be doing better in my poems. (probably the rythm isnt all that well in some of my poems)

Ahley:
If you want me to be honest: No I dont like your poem. It's too simple and it's about something that has been written about for ages. There is one typing error btw.

"Pimple Poetry"

From which dictionary reference did you find that?

Poetry is what ever you want it to be! Its your personal expression - just keep it up all you can do is continue to write so your poems get better as will your confidence in your writing and your ideas :o)

Hay, your poems are awsome seriously...check out mine ifyou have a chance thanx