To Add or Not to Add... Opinions please!

Read my poem 'And, At Last...' if you feel like it and tell me, should I add on or leave it like it is. I can't decide and I've gotten a comment saying that a reader felt like the poem was leading up to something and just cut off. Was it just her or are a lot of people getting that feeling?

This belongs in the "Request to Read/Comment" section, regardless of the fact that you are asking a question =]

Yeah, i figured it might. ^^