A Death-grip On Yesterday [Round 3 of 4]

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Congrats to all, with one dropped entry; you all go on. I will send out PM's and let you know the next round is up incase you never seen the last post and have completely forgot about this contest. I know it took me a long time to judge, and my apologies go out. A lot has been happening and I needed some time, but I am back now and judging my contests. Anyways, here are the new titles...

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    - Our Sick Story (Thus Far)

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    `*Sheena
    `*Ciao
    `*Emma
    `*Bob
    `*Dixie Daisy
    `*Gabriella
    `*Hidden Soul

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    The deadline for this round will be August 26.
    Only 6 will move on to the final round, good luck.

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    `Dixie - - Your Private War [DONE]
    `Bob - - We Stand Up [DONE]
    `Emma - - The Theft
    `Gabriella - - Creature [DONE]
    `Secluded - - My Fork in the Road, Your Knife in my Back [DONE]
    `Ciao - - Ex`s and Oh`s [DONE]

  • Daisy if you do
    17 years ago

    Ex's and oh's please

  • Wings Of Flames
    17 years ago

    The theft please.
    and thank you for finishing the last round you posted

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    Creature plz

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    Creature

    even in the depths of my mind
    i never knew
    someone, anyone, could hold this loathing
    nothing matches it
    this hate
    it's unbreakable

    i didn't think i could hate
    hate something so much
    until i get cold from the ferocity
    of this...this feeling
    why?
    why me?

    it's so cold
    i cannot breathe, it suffocates my mind
    my heart, body, what is wrong?
    it's me isn't it.
    i'm wrong
    just freezing myself

    floating in this endless darkness
    every light gets snuffed out
    i cannot stand it
    no longer
    but i can't escape
    these pools of darkness

    surrounding me
    eating away at me
    until i no longer exist
    this cold, cold hatred
    turned towards myself
    i cannot love what i will become

    can anyone?
    unloved is this creature
    crawling across the floor
    squish it, break it
    until it can no longer cry
    make this creature happy

    for no one can love a monster
    not even the world
    erase it from this world
    take pity,
    forget what needs to be forgotten
    her tears will fall no more.

  • dollwithafrown
    17 years ago

    "My Fork in the Road, Your Knife in my Back", thank you muchly. =)

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Darnit!! I wanted Ex's and Oh's lol but I guess I will take Our Sick Story (Thus Far)

    Heartcha love! <3

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Ciao, if you want Ex`s and Oh`s; Dixie has sent me a PM saying she would switch, so I can switch those up if you want. Just let me know.

    :]

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Yes, I would like that one. Thank you Dixie!! :)
    So I'll take Ex's and Oh's :)
    I hope I can do it some justice.

    heartcha Jenna! <33

  • Daisy if you do
    17 years ago

    In lieu of ex's and oh's may I please have your private war.......Thank you and sorry for any confusion.

  • Daisy if you do
    17 years ago

    Your Private War

    Biting tongue in two
    With bitter words unspoken
    Hatred boiling deep
    Your ties that bind lay broken

    Voices in your head
    Rule out your common sense
    Desperate measures of a man
    Is your lone defense

    Holy water thinner
    Than our blood was thick
    Absurd to burn a candle
    When there is no wick

    Fighting off the urges
    Succumbing to attack
    Private war, your hell
    Everything fades to black

    Melinda Kay Smith

  • dollwithafrown
    17 years ago

    My Fork in the Road, Your Knife in my Back
    by SecludedSerendipity

    I was driving down the loneliest road I'd ever driven,
    As my word changed to Hell, from a delicate serene Heaven.
    Realisation fell upon me, as I knew I had to make
    A decision of a future, which showed of burning heartache.

    That shining silver knife which you held up so high,
    Sliced right through my back as my world fell from the sky.
    You pleaded and you begged for forgiveness of your sins,
    Now I'm torn into turmoil, don't now where I end nor begin.

    A decision lays ahead of me, should you stay or should you go;
    It breaks my heart even further when I say I do not know.
    I'm broken and I'm scarred, little beauty inside remains,
    And I can't help but feel that I'm the one to blame.

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Ex's and Oh's

    There's this sad love song that everyone knows -
    The words, the melody; it's quite sad and slow.
    The pain-filled chorus is like a long-held sigh -
    Each word just trying to prolong the inevitable goodbye.

    It's just like a black and white movie from years past -
    Each of them trying so hard to make love last;
    But life throws curves balls and sometimes, you're out,
    You're stuck all alone with tears cast about.

    So she signs her letters with Ex's and Oh's -
    Trying so hard, yet everyone knows.
    They know she's hurting but they just don't care,
    She is forced to live her life on a prayer.

    "Goodbye, My Love." is about all she could say -
    It wasn't her fault that she had to walk away.
    With tears down her cheeks, she takes a last glance -
    Her one last shot at an almost romance.

    You watch her, counting each step that she takes;
    Wishing and willing her to see this mistake.
    But in a few minutes, she's disappeared from sight,
    As you crumble to the ground, too heartbroken to fight.

    So she signs her letters with Ex's and Oh's -
    Trying so hard, yet everyone knows.
    They know she's hurting but they just don't care,
    She is forced to live her life on a prayer

    She's settled down now, in a place far away -
    Her mind keeps traveling back to that day.
    The day she was forced to leave her love behind -
    Now she can't get the thought of him from her mind.

    The letters she writes you are filled with such sorrow -
    You are never sure if she will live for tomorrow.
    She's fighting a war no one was meant to fight -
    You know it is wrong, but to her, it is right.

    Your baby left on that airplane, so many months ago,
    It seems like time is ticking by so slow.
    The letters are few and so far in between -
    You're just wondering what her virgin eyes have seen.

    The fighting she's seeing is nothing compared
    To the nights all alone when she's cold and she's scared.
    She could never tell you what she's really feeling;
    So she prays to God that somehow, you are dealing.

    So she signs her letters with Ex's and Oh's -
    Trying so hard, yet everyone knows.
    They know she's hurting but they just don't care,
    She is forced to live her life on a prayer.

    One day, hopefully soon, she'll be back in your arms -
    Away from the fighting and away from all harm;
    But for now, she's lost to the world no one really knows -
    As she signs her last letter with Ex's and Oh's.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    This is supposed to be over end of tonight... I may extend it one more day. PM`s are going out to those who do not have theirs in.