New Contest [[Round One Of Three.]]

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    The way this contest will go is :
    First round = at least 20 people.
    Second round= Half of those people.
    Third round = Half of round two people.

    Rules:
    o1. Be creative.
    o2. Must be new.
    o3. I want a decent size poem, but not a book, please.
    o4. Amazing love poems blow me away.
    o5. I'm not to fond of suicidal/cutting poems, but whatever floats your boat. - - If it's good, it's good.
    o6. I'm extremely honest. Though, I like most poetry I judge fairly, and extremely harsh.
    o7. When I judge I don't do it by name, so please do not put your name in your post. I copy it to wordpad or something, and print.

    Titles:
    o1. Final Years Of The Invasion.
    o4. INner Resentment.
    o5. Attitude Adjustment.
    o6. Pride Problem.
    o7. Why are you bragging?
    o8. The Lord's Anger.
    o9. Future Citizens.
    11. Love In Action.
    12. Like Father, Like Son?
    13. Like Mother, Like Daughter?
    15. Afterward, I Will Return.
    16. Cursing And Bitterness.
    17. From The Ruins, I Shall Rebuild.
    21. Stone By Living Water.
    22. Parellel Reference.

    If these all get filled I'll surely do more. xD

    Prizes:
    How ever many people enter the last contest is how many comments you will get.
    Say the last contest consists of 7 people.
    First Place will get 7 comments.
    And the TWO HM will get 3 comments and 1 rating.

    So, the more the better. xD

    - - - - -
    Reserved:
    2o. One Sacrifice. - - Xgeekdreamgonewrong
    18. No One Does Good. - - Sam Azam
    19. In My Anger I Made A Vow. - - xXx Jenni xXx
    1o. Extraordinary But True. - - Raveena
    14. Discover Your True Purpose. - - *Gem*
    o2. The One Who Gave You Success. - - HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    - - - - -
    Done:
    o3. Half- Hearted Obedience. - - Britt.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    The One Who Gave You Success, please. :]

  • Xgeekdreamgonewrong
    17 years ago

    One Sacrifice, please.

  • Sam Azam
    17 years ago

    No one does good. Cheers.

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    In my anger I made a vow, please!

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Discover your true purpose please

  • Lonesomeme
    17 years ago

    Is this closed?

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    No it is not closed.
    Sorry, I've been extremely busy lately, I'm not ignoring this contest.

    Anyone else?

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    In My Anger I Made A Vow

    Tears have now given way to rage
    Look in my eyes, you'll see spite
    Seems I'm succumbing to revenge
    For I'm now tired of lonely nights.

    Cruelty, it seems is your specialty
    Wondering if you're made of human parts
    For it appears that you get of on hurt
    Come to the conclusion you have no heart.

    Didn't want to sink your level
    Now you've left me with no choice
    May have seemed weak, helpless to you
    But now you're going to hear my voice.

    For once hurt vanished, only anger was left
    Tried not to dwell, but it grows each day
    Wondering how you managed to take me in
    For every line you used on me was cliche.

    Rage is slowly eating away at my heart
    Beginning to destroy, devour my soul
    So now it's time for you to hurt
    Form now on I'll be the one in control.

    Giving into these vengeful desires
    For a long time I didn't know how
    Now promising that you'll pay
    For in my anger I made a vow.

  • LovelyDivine
    17 years ago

    I would like to reserve "From the Ruins, I Shall Rebuild"
    Thanks

  • dollwithafrown
    17 years ago

    "Why Are You Bragging?", please.

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    "Afterward, I Will Return", please and thanx.

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    Afterward, I Will Return
    By: Twisted Heart

    The quaking thunder in the distance
    has shocked my ears from silent lore
    Upon the sounds of war's persistence
    fear grips my soul like n'er before.

    The clashing sounds of unsheathed swords
    in battle comes the will to fight
    A land that's claimed by ugly wars
    gains strength upon this tepid night.

    Mere mortals rise in deafening flight
    beseeching all their screams of pain
    To strike against the foe in sight
    another foot of freedom gained.

    From trenches flee the sole remains
    as cannons strike their fury's tune
    Scattered spirits fall from the strain
    to lie among the fists of doom.

    As sudden comes the quiet bloom
    in ashes swell the fevered burn
    The soldier's weakened form entombed
    beside me not to be returned.

    Silent steps the mind that's churned
    against this night as freedom rings
    But from the death a lesson learned
    a chasten to the soul it brings.

    Now screams the mind inside it sings
    voiceless mangles its refrain
    A shrieking sound with wordless flings
    as it passes o'er the ash again.

    No humble course to hide the pain
    inside the broken battle blue
    Not but a cry or breath remain
    Upon the winds in dusty hue

    Silent thumping no longer true
    but surely is my will to live
    So that I may return to you
    and to you all my love I'll give.

    Now silent beats the war relived
    as crimson runs from heart that's torn
    Upon the wake of dawn's first kiss
    my spirit from the ash is born.

  • Adelle
    17 years ago

    Not sure how this works I have never entred a compation befor Im guessing we chose the title we want from your list wirte the poem and then post it. Who decided who wins ok well I will do
    INner Resentment.

  • Adelle
    17 years ago

    Inner resentment
    By Adele Moulton

    Turning my eyes inward
    What do I see inside?
    A dark soul full of lies
    Grieving for who I used to be

    Not wanting it this way
    Trying to change again today
    Good intensions crumbling
    Grieving for who I used to be

    My heart deceives even me
    My soul cries in the darkness
    Hating who Iv'e become again
    Grieving for who I used to be

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Is this still happening?

  • Prophecies In Kodak
    17 years ago

    Teria regretted being my friend in the "I regret" post....

    So I offed her.

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    Lmfao.
    You certainly did.

    And, unfortunatly [sp] I did forget about this.

    I'm so sorry.
    JUDGINGNOW.

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    Mm.
    Prizes will change.
    And, next round ONE person will be taken out.

    Britt.
    Anna.
    Twisted Heart.

    [In no certain order]]

    I will have the next contest posted sometime tonight.