Beauty in Her Tears (round 2) ^__^

Five people have moved into this round:
~hollywoodxbangbang
~teria
~her cliche life
~synthetic tears run dry
~wings of flames

and so there will be five poems:

reserved:
laughter in my soul~teria
butterfly~hollywoodxbangbang:DONE
tears of silver starlight~terra
don't dream about happiness~jordan:DONE
crushed~wings of flames:DONE

okay.
prizes:
1st place: 5r/r/c
2nd: 4 r/r/c
3rd: 3r/r/c
all who place get in my favorites.
everyone else gets a r/r/c as well though.
good luck!!!

OHH.
Yay. xD
Love the titles
-Thinks-
Ummmmmm.
Goooodness. How about I take Laughter In My Soul.

Thanks!

Yay!

Butterfly, please. :]

And thanks for letting me move on! :]

^you deserved to move on.
:P

DANG YOU JENNA AND YOUR PICKING THE TITLES BEFORE ME!!! haha jk. i love you dear.

silver tears of starlight please (i think that was the title. i will double check but i know it has something to do with that!! haha)

good luck everyone :-)

^hehe
it's actually tears of silver starlight
^.^

I'm sorry!!!!!!
they're sorta long aren't they.
:(

Butterfly [ZaniLa Rhyme]

Take a tortured butterfly by the wings;
Hold your hands up high and cry,
Because you lost it all in the end,
You know it, the pain`s in your blue eyes.

Hold a wingless butterfly in your hands;
And know that you ripped it apart,
In the end, you lost it all because -
You took a dagger to its pure heart.

Throw a dying butterfly away now,
Kick your feet up and walk alone,
Because you lost it all in the end;
And there`s no place for you to call home.

Forget all about the butterfly,
It`s what`s meant to be, you know;
In the end, you lost it all because -
Your lies started to pathetically show.

-Jenna Elphick

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The ZaniLa Rhyme, a form created by Laura Lamarca, consists 4 lines per stanza. The rhyme scheme for this form is abcb and a syllable count of 9/7/9/9 per stanza. Line 3 contains internal rhyme and is repeated in each odd numbered stanza. Even stanzas contain the same line but swapped.

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The butterfly, if it`s too confusing, is metaphorical for the relationship that was killed with lies and fights.

Okay, i'm back btw

I've sent a pm to everyone who hasn't yet put in their poem or wtf, and so i'm just telling everyone that the deadline is september 7th. this friday.
have fun!!!

Lol i didnt even know i got through! awesome! lol

well i guess my poem will be on here tomorrow. or maybe tonight right nwo i have no inspiration... :P

Crushed

A flutter in my heart,
A token of our grace,
Take my hand in pity,
And I'll fall back into place,

Any day now,
You'll see the pain,
Any day now,
You'll see the rain,

I'm not in love,
Only of a lost soul,
Dear was your mind,
Now anger has stole,

Take my words now,
Rip them, pull them down,
Please know I'm here,
And I won't let you drown,

My eyes are so pleading,
I pray you must see,
I'm not losing another friend,
All because of me.

If the other two poems aren't in by tonight, i will delay this contest one day. but if they still aren't by then i will continue with the judging.

WINNERS!!!!!
soooooo
since not everyone ended up posting their poems, everyone who had ended up placing.

1st: HollywoodxBangbang
2nd: Lace My Words In Vodka
3rd: wings of flames

Wow, thanks for the placing and
the comments, :]

I STILL LOVE YOU....
I look in the mirror
don't like what I see
someone who is hurt
I can't believe it's me

Crying and yelling
for someone to help
but no one is here
I'm all by myself

My eyes got huge
and very red while,
through my mind
I think of the words you said

You dumped me
and left me like trash
My heart is still here
but its broken and smashed

I know that to my heart
you were never true
But for some reason
I still love you

Im looking
the love that we had
am i convincing myself that im ok without you?
that what we are before is through
is it really over for the two of us?
or we can save this relationship and make it last?

i thought that i'll be fine even if you are gone
and continue my life and look for the right1
but i realized that i was still inlove with you
and my heart is still hoping that you love me too

i cant accept the fact that you left me here
fighting for the love i thought for you is dear
i'm still hoping that you will come back
and never let go of the love we once had

oh please give this love another chance
for i promise this will be the last one
'coz if it will not work on this time
i,ll move on and promise i will be fine...

I'm really confused.^^^^^^??????

but i'm asking for one of the mods to like delete or close this post or something? lol i don't really exactly know how that works. i'm sorry.