Love him contest. (girls only)

  • StormyStar
    17 years ago

    CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED! CLOSED!

    here are the results.. me and my friend both thought these were all good.. and we just fell in love with them all. GREAT WORK!!!!

    1. *GEM*
    2. Krazy
    3. *Charisma*
    4. Dreamgurl

    sorry it took me so long.. i will comment your poems.. when i find the time just PM me the titles.. lol

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    Okay...i'll reserve a spot!
    Charisma*

  • Krazy
    17 years ago

    I'll take a spot, and i'm done!

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    Im done with mine too!
    Charisma*

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    I`ll reserve

    :]

  • nikki
    17 years ago

    I'll reserve, if i may

  • Wings Of Flames
    17 years ago

    Jj

  • StormyStar
    17 years ago

    Wings Of Flames

    im sorry. but it you read what i said at the top, i dont want the poems posted yet.

  • Sweet Fragility
    17 years ago

    I'll reserve.

  • Jessica
    17 years ago

    I'll reserve please. =]

  • Wings Of Flames
    17 years ago

    Ok soz

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    I'm in =)

  • Bre Monique
    17 years ago

    Is it to late to say I wanna reserve a spot? If not could you please PM me and I'll PM you back my poem?

  • nikki
    17 years ago

    When do we put our poems in?

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    So did me and Dreamgurl miss out?

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    Nothing Feels Right

    You left me bitter with love and life
    Wondering if hope will come into sight.
    I handed you my heart when it was whole
    But you let it fall and shattered my soul.

    Now there are pieces debating their thoughts
    Some love you still....others do not.
    So a war rages, though the outcome is clear.
    I can still love you but that won't keep you here.

    You promised your heart, when I looked away.
    I'll be in the aisle when she walks your way.
    The I Do's will be said, my forever gone.
    My chance never came, never will come along.

    Perfect timing turned away when I needed it most.
    I sit and watch as all my open doors close.
    The future is fading into a dim light
    Because without you nothing feels right.

    By: Charisma*

  • nikki
    17 years ago

    Piece of heaven

    by Nikki

    I get my piece of heaven
    When our bodies are entwined
    When we are in each others arms
    And our hearts are combined

    I get my piece of heaven
    When he holds me ever so tight
    I love the way he hugs me
    And keeps me warm through the night

    I get my piece of heaven
    Every time our eyes connect
    I know he will always keep me safe
    And my life he will always protect

    I get my piece of heaven
    With his tender touch
    I never knew love could feel so strong
    As I love this man so much

    I get my piece of heaven
    When out bodies melt together
    I know that our love will always shine
    And we will be happy forever

    I get my piece of heaven
    And I have not even passed
    Now I know what heaven feels like
    And forever I will keep it in my grasp

  • StormyStar
    17 years ago

    *Gem* and dreamgurl go ahead.. whats two more people. lol im sorry. i have been busy.

  • Bre Monique
    17 years ago

    Ok, I have my poem. Whenever you want us to post them I'll be ready XD

  • Krazy
    17 years ago

    Letters in Lipstick

    Red letters border every mirror.
    Each one a simple hint of my love for you,
    left with wonder of when you'll respond.

    Love letters hidden around the house,
    signed x's and o's,
    all sealed with a lipstick kiss.

    I write you through and through,
    yet you only send me two.
    When will you get a clue.

    Hope forms deep down,
    grasping for a foothold.
    Only to find none after so long

    Lipstick letters border every mirror.
    Waiting for an eyeliner response.
    I love you, when will you love me?

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Same here, just let me know when to post =)
    Thank you =)

  • StormyStar
    17 years ago

    Everyone can go ahead and post..

    but listen.. i dont jugde these by spelling and grammer.. im not like the best spelling so i think that, that is unfair lol.. so if you dont mind.. me and my friends will read every poem.. and just pick the one we thought was the best.. if thats a problme.. you can still back out.. lol i just hope its not.. lol.

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    The poem i want to enter is a collab poem with my fiance, is it ok at enter one like that?
    *Gem*

  • Bre Monique
    17 years ago

    Last Night's Dream
    by:dreamgurl

    Its almost midnight and youre late once again
    Boy how you treat me should be a sin

    I hear a knock at the door and open it to see you
    You look as if youve been missing me too

    Then you give me this sweet, seductive smile
    That makes my wait worth the while

    You grab me and kiss me with your sweet tender lips
    You lead me into the bedroom knowing i cant resist

    I feel your hands move slowly down my side
    I know i couldnt refuse you even if i tried

    I hear you whispering into my ear
    At this moment, your voice is all i wanna hear

    I hear you say "loving you is all i wanna do...
    When i look into your eyes i see forever for me and you"

    But then i woke up and tears fell as i began to cry
    Realizing the whole sweet scenario was a nothing but a lie

    If only things could back to how they were
    Because as im dreaming of you, youre dreaming of her...

  • StormyStar
    17 years ago

    Yea *Gem* go ahead lol

  • Sarah Ann
    17 years ago

    I just wrote this today

    Vulnerable

    by Sarah Ann

    He took me there. Hand in hand,
    To that wonderful place
    The warmth, excitement, true desire
    Was shining on his face
    His eyes were like the winter sky
    And deeper than the sea.
    Oh, honestly in truth I found
    They captivated me.

    This fallen angel, "mystery"
    Looked past my doubts and fears,
    With few words of encouragement;
    Enthralled me down to tears.

    Salted tears of puzzled feelings,
    And jumbled thoughts of pain
    Were kissed away like water drops
    On foggy window panes.

    Against my better judgment
    I was lost with him, then found
    Realizing...Boy, I had it bad.
    I needed him around.

    Vulnerable, I came to be,
    He let me fly beneath his wings

    He promised me -
    Then butchered me.
    But still, I gave up everything.

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Xx Angel On My Shoulder - Collab xX

    She is the drive inside of me
    That lasts until I'm older
    She's the wall of steel that keeps me strong
    The angel on my shoulder

    He's the boy that keeps me sane
    The one I love with all my heart
    He keeps me going when I'm down
    And I'm about to break apart

    She looks after me when I'm ill
    Helps me up when I'm feeling low
    She never has to ask what's wrong
    She always seems to know

    He's the guy so sensitive
    To the emotions that I'm feeling
    He does his best to cheer me up
    'Til my smile reaches the ceiling

    She loves every part of me
    And accepts the way I am
    She encourages my hopes and dreams
    And calls herself my biggest fan

    He loves me for who I am
    Loves all of my pro's and con's
    He plays me tunes on his guitar
    And writes me gorgeous poems and songs

    She's the girl who makes me smile
    The one who resides in my heart
    She loves me no matter what
    And holds me tight in the dark

    He's my soul mate, my true love
    The other half of me
    He's the one who makes me feel
    As happy as a girl could be

    She's my beautiful special girl
    We connect in so many ways
    She's the only girl out there for me
    This could never be just a phase

    He makes me feel on top of the world
    And calls me beautiful all the time
    He calls me 'Kitten' to make me smile
    He's the only thing on my mind

    I'm so happy to be engaged
    To the one true love of my life
    She's the girl I used to dream
    Of becoming my wife

    I'm proud to be engaged to him
    The one I'll still be with when I'm older
    He's the one true love of my life
    The angel of my shoulder

    *Gem and Marcus*
    Copyright©GemarcusStott2007

  • Jessica
    17 years ago

    Okiess, this is a really old one but I'll post it anywayy.

    Warm Summer Night
    by Jessica

    Delicate kisses shared on a warm summer night
    Tenderly connecting our once broken souls
    Fondly caressing silky hair with gentle affection
    On top of my fragile body, he carefully rolls..

    Adoringly entwined under the glowing moon
    The soft sand beneath us warming from our heat
    Waves soothingly crashing against the beach
    The feel of his tongue against mine, awfully sweet..

    Sparkling stars of love above us lightly shimmer
    Happily and deeply inhaling his toe tingling scent
    Removing from his pocket a miniature scarlet box
    A diamond on my finger, I knew what was meant..

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    So we can post them now? Lol

  • StormyStar
    17 years ago

    Yes. can everyone post them if they have not. so i can finish reading them and post the results. please&&thankyou

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Thankyooou for the placing =)))

  • StormyStar
    17 years ago

    Only one person has come to me with the titles i need the other winners to pm me the titles so i can comment them.,