Alysse Needs Your Help! Put Yo' Thinkin' Caps On

  • juss an allycat
    20 years ago

    I really need help with a title for my new poem, this, I personally think, is one of my best piece of writing and I want the perfect title. It is currently called "On The Edge Of Life" but It justy dosnt semm to match the poem, can somebody help me out? I promise I'll credt you somewhere

    Heres the poem:

    I look around, where I am
    Then it all comes flooding back
    Memories, visions, tears of fear
    The reasons why I cannot stay here

    But I havnt anywhere to go
    Im out of places to hide
    So, I run away
    Still living my life in fright

    Im scared to look behind me
    In fear that he may be there
    To haunt my life once more
    And to kill me once again

    Inside I am bleeding
    Outside I fake a smile
    No-one will know just how much I hurt
    So they continue to twist the knife

    And I continue to scream
    Silently to myself
    For they mustn't hear me
    I do not want them to know

    But what can I do?
    What can I say?
    These wounds will not heal
    These scars refuse to fade

    I am a living nightmare
    Of every girls worst fear
    Though all I really want
    Is to live, once again

  • juss an allycat
    20 years ago

    ooooooh, Nowhere To Run, sounds promising! thanx guys!