Title Contest

  • LovelyDivine
    17 years ago

    This is my first title contest. There will be one winner and two honorable mentions.
    RULES:
    *Deadline is September 1st

    TITLES:
    1. One and Only--[DONE]
    2. Tomorrow--[DONE]
    3. Now or Never--[DONE]
    4. Life or Bust
    5. Last Love Song--[DONE]
    6. Dreadful Sorry--[DONE]
    7. Time to Go--[DONE]
    8. Reflection--[DONE]
    9. One Shot--[DONE]
    10. Forever--[DONE]

  • Krazy
    17 years ago

    Forever please.

  • Bre Monique
    17 years ago

    Does it have to be a new poem? I would like to choose a poem already written that I think would do well.

    And the title I would like to reserve is "Reflection"

  • Krazy
    17 years ago

    Forever

    Forever we have known each other.
    Forever and a day, that's how many smiles we'll share.
    Forever and two days, that's how much I admire you.
    Forever and three days, that's how long I'll need you.
    Forever and four days, that's how happy I am to be with you.
    Forever and five days, could never count how many times I've said
    I love you.

    Forever and ever, that's how long we'll be in each others arms.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    This is hard,
    I like a few of
    these titles!
    Uhhmm;
    One shot please.
    Unless it doesn`t
    matter the amount
    of people per title;
    `cuz then I`m gonna
    write out the one`s I
    like and submit the best
    one lol.
    :]

  • LovelyDivine
    17 years ago

    Only one person per title and yes it has to be new. Sorry about that guys. Again I'll say that this is my first title contest. Your poems are reserved then.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Kay, gotcha. I
    will write on this
    one then since
    Jordan took one
    of the other ones
    that I wanted! lol.
    I should have it in
    soon, but when is
    the deadline for
    this because I go
    camping soon and
    I just want to make
    sure that I have it in on
    time? :]

  • LovelyDivine
    17 years ago

    I'll say since this has been going pretty quickly September 1st or sooner if all the poems get taken and done before then. But I won't start to judge until yours gets in so it will be fair.

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    Would Like to do "Tomorrow" please and thanks

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    Tomorrow [It Will Heal] - Acrostic
    By: Twisted Heart

    Torn dreams have filled the vacancy inside my shattered soul
    One tear has tipped the emptiness upon the heart it holds
    Mere words have come to comfort me upon this lonely night
    Opaque blue haze that covers all the rays of hidden light
    Reminders of the love we felt way back when we were young
    Resound against the hunger that has left our lives undone
    Of all the pain that we survived where is the hope we shared
    Wasteful wreckage of the heart remain in disrepair.

    Inside the mind that quivers is a need to finally see
    Tenderness upon the soul to mend and to set free

    Wishful of a happiness that grows so strong inside
    Invading all the memories that I want to hide.
    Lingering reflections of the choices that I made
    Long lost among the pain coursing through my yesterdays

    How do I find the truths among the shatters of a lie
    Entombed upon the heart with no form or alibi
    Are they just pure illusions of a life that I once knew
    Long lost until tomorrow with the dreams of loving you.

  • Wings Of Flames
    17 years ago

    Tomorrow plz

  • Wings Of Flames
    17 years ago

    Unless its been done then nvm

  • Dollie
    17 years ago

    Dreadful Sorry Please

  • Dollie
    17 years ago

    Dreadful Sorry.

    am i the cause of the many sorry's?
    am i the cause of your narrated stories?
    am i the dreadful mistake you made?
    am i the side thing you are surely to face?
    am i the death you needed to trace?

    am i the excuse you use for love?
    am i the life that you are so sick of?
    am i the cause of your never ending pain?
    am i the shadow in the rain?
    am i the cause of your insane?
    am i the heart aching story?

    or will i be the next Dreadful Sorry?

  • LovelyDivine
    17 years ago

    Unless three more ppl enter and use the last three poem titles, I will only be waiting on the two who have reserved poems. If I do not receive them by September 1st I will close the contest without those poems.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    One Shot

    The world was at her tiny feet, as she smiled big;
    A smile that a girl who has the world should smile,
    The answer was deep, but she was willing to dig;
    And more than willing to search mile after mile.

    Walking down the white ribbon before her restless body,
    She scouted for a sign that may point her the right way;
    But synthetic smiles from strangers is all she could see,
    So she kept walking on through the interstate, feelings at bay.

    She came upon an old gate, set her eyes beyond;
    As a man walked up to her, greeted her with a laugh;
    "Sir, I`m sorry; I don`t think I`d be able to correspond - "
    With stern eyes, he started to tear her lie in half.

    "Darling, I`ve been watching you on your way up here;
    I`ve seen you stop at every mile marker or two,
    Between that and the fear colored bright in your eyes, it`s clear;
    You`re not ready, not ready to be here, are you?"

    With tears in her eyes, she looked down to her feet,
    "I just want the answers, I`ve been searching for too long;
    And through it all, I`ve been trampled down in defeat;
    I`ve never been right Sir, but this time; I don`t want to be wrong."

    With hope swirling into his eyes, he leaned down and sighed:
    "The answer my child, is found nowhere but in yourself,
    You`ve been looking, yes; but the truth is where you hide -
    You know the answer already, it`s there: within itself.

    You`ve got a heart and a mind of your very own,
    And that is all that you need right now my Dear;
    You got one shot now; climb the mountain alone -
    When you reach the top, that`s when it becomes clear."

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    Incase the meaning to this poem wasn`t very clear, it`s just about how so often we go out looking for answers when all along they are there inside of us. The mountains we climb to reach our goals, are often where the answers are hidden all along. However, some people push on and try to rush the dreams and change themselves for other people to get there, the point of this poem is saying that do not change for no one but yourself and wait until you are ready. The story line is based on a little girl willing to do anything to have her world of dreams, the man she meets is her Guardian Angel.

  • Bre Monique
    17 years ago

    I'll post my poem soon =))

  • LovelyDivine
    17 years ago

    I'll mention that if any of you who already entered would like to do one of the three left unreserved or done you may do only one more. let me know if you would like to reserve one of them.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    I have Time To Go done,
    it`s not very good
    but I got it done
    already...it`s an
    explicit so if you don`t
    like those then I won`t
    enter it.

  • Bre Monique
    17 years ago

    Reflection
    by: dreamgurl

    I can't escape these feelings I've tried so hard to suppress
    Because everywhere I turn all I see is your face
    It started to rain and I glanced out the window
    And there was you staring back at me in its place

    I turned yet I saw no one behind me
    It was my mind once again
    I guess it won't accept that we're over
    Because it keeps thinking of what could have been

    I grab an umbrella and go for a walk
    I just need to get this these thoughts out of my head
    I glance into a puddle and there you are
    And I turn around in dread

    Nope, it wasn't you once again
    So I continue my walk down the dark, lonely street
    As I continue to think about us, tears fall
    There's one for each heartbeat

    I see a parked car sitting on the corner
    And I approach slowly, afraid of what just might be
    I look into the window of the car
    And surely enough it isn't my face I see

    I run home and into the bathroom
    And I look into the mirror above the sink
    I try this out one more time
    And my eyes confirm what I think

    Whenever I look into something
    It's no longer my face that I see
    All I can see is you staring back
    Because you are still a part of me </3

  • LovelyDivine
    17 years ago

    Go ahead and post Time to Go.
    It doesn't matter if it is explicit.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Time To Go
    (swears or "bad" words will be edited for the sake of following board rules).

    It`s quarter to twelve and you`re still not home,
    Tonight`s another night that I`ll spend alone,
    You`re drunk off your a s s, staggering through the bar,
    Looking for one more broad you can take to your car.

    In the backseat, you`ll throw out some cute lines;
    `Cuz after that, you know that you won`t be declined,
    Judging by the color of her hair, the look in her eyes;
    She`ll fall heels over head for all of your pathetic lies.

    She`s panting and you`re begging her for a little more,
    With ecstasy in your eyes, you`re making her a wh0re;
    She`s just another fool who had a little to much to drink -
    And you took advantage of that, starting off with a wink.

    And I ignore what everyone says about you `cuz I know,
    That when the lights are down, your weakness shows;
    You`re a sucker for a girl who believes all of your sh|t,
    It`s time to go; but I`ll stay just long enough for one more hit.

    -Jenna Elphick
    August 23, 2007

  • Bre Monique
    17 years ago

    If you enter Andrew, you should PM LovelyDivine and tell her. Also, the only poem left to do is Life or Bust =))

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    No he did One and Only...and I don`t think she`s started to judge this yet, so his poem should be good.

    :]

  • LovelyDivine
    17 years ago

    Yes Andrew. Your poem is already entered so it is alright.

  • LovelyDivine
    17 years ago

    Since no one has entered this contest with the last title, I am now going to say that this contest is closed. I will have the winners sometime this weekend.

  • LovelyDivine
    17 years ago

    Since I haven't started to judge yet, I will consider this poem in the contest.

  • Bre Monique
    17 years ago

    What ever happenned with this?