Quickie Contest..

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

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    I`m bored and really feel like judging a contest, so...for this one I want three poems from each person...doesn`t matter how old they are..the only rule here is that they`re from three different categories...I want one from love, one from sad and one from any other category of your choice as long as it isn`t love or sad.

    I don`t expect to keep this open for longer than a day, for now I will accept ten entrants, depending on how slow that is or how fast this is is when I will decide to close it.

    Annnnnd go ! :]

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Funny poem

    Xx Never Trust A Dolphin xX

    Splishing, splashing in the sea
    Leaping towards the sun
    I love watching the dolphins
    As they play and have such fun

    They are such happy creatures
    Somersaulting in the air
    Surfing on the biggest waves
    Whistling without a care

    Cheerfully showing off their moves
    They dance and twirl all day
    Flicking water with their tails
    Having fun the dolphin way

    Yes, I love watching the dolphins
    But something niggles in my mind
    I just can't trust a species
    That is smiling all the time!

    *Gem*
    Copyright©GemmaStott2007

    Dark poem

    Xx First Song xX

    The moon is climbing up into the sky
    Slowly, surely as the night goes on
    Reaching its place amongst the cosmos
    In control of the heavens before the dawn

    The moonlight glistens upon the foliage
    Casting patterns of a silver rainbow
    A ball of fluff rolls from the leaves
    Two jade gems gleam a naughty glow

    The cubs are out for the very first time
    Five feather tails brushing side to side
    Nosing in the shrubbery and undergrowth
    Their mother watches with worry and pride

    Two cubs observe the moon with suspicion
    The white globe casting spells on their fur
    The night's melody tingles across their ears
    Causing their small vocal chords to stir

    One by one, their small noses point upwards
    Tipped ears perk up, fragile yet strong
    Harmonious howls and shrill acute barks
    As the wolf cubs sing their very first song

    The moon conducts this debut recital
    As the twinkling stars cast a beautiful sheen
    The cubs sing 'til the night comes to an end
    The breathtaking song of a small wolverine

    *Gem*
    Copyright©GemmaStott2007

    Sad Poem

    Xx Roses Are Dead xX

    Violets are blue and roses are red
    But what do you do when the flowers are dead?
    Deep ruby petals turned to filemot
    Viridian leaves have all started to rot

    Light coral pinks and dark cornflower blues
    Dark olive greens and some pale honeydews
    All of them wilted, misplacing their shine
    Losing the battle and race against time

    They wither and fall, drifting to the floor
    The beautiful colours are now nevermore
    Floating to the ground in a pile so neat
    The signal the end of a life pure and sweet

    *Gem*
    Copyright©GemmaStott2007

    =) Three poems

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Explicit
    Lovers and Liars

    Woke up this morning with a pounding in my head -
    Realizing I was in someone else's bed.
    Looking around at all the clothes, scattered -
    I thought that it didn't, but really, it mattered.

    I thought to myself, "I can't do this anymore."
    All the while, retrieving the items off the floor.
    Leaving the bar, each time with someone new;
    "This was not the way to ever forget you..."

    New drink concoctions, I'm losing my senses -
    Leaving the bar and hoping over the fences.
    Running around wild, I was never this way...
    What happened to the sweet child of yesterday?

    So as I pick up my shirt and my ripped up jeans,
    I realize that things aren't always as they seem.
    His slight snoring is all the reminder that I needed,
    To know that my expectations were not exceeded.

    I take one last look at what I have become
    As I head outside into the unforgiving sun.
    The dark circles apparent under my tired eyes,
    As realize that I've lost count of all the guys.

    "I am done with living my life this way.
    I am finished and I'm changing as of today.
    No more with these lust-filled, broken desires,
    I'm saying goodbye to all the Lovers and Liars."

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    Sad
    Lipgloss and Black [Lyrics]

    [Chorus]
    She smears her face with lipgloss and black -
    Catch her eyes and watch her back.
    Memories playing like a film without sound -
    As she continuously falls back to the ground.

    [Verse1]
    She cries blood red tears with a razor blade -
    Knowing that soon her life will fade.
    But how could she be this way still?
    As she admits the fact she lost her will.

    [Verse2]
    Pile on the heartache, with a sprinkle of deceit;
    She lost her appetite and her desire to eat.
    She is broken and hurtin'; lost in this world -
    Of pretty blue eyes and hair that is curled.

    [Chorus]
    She smears her face with lipgloss and black -
    Catch her eyes and watch her back.
    Memories playing like a film without sound -
    As she continuously falls back to the ground.

    [Verse3]
    Just 'cause she's different, she is shunned;
    Forced out of life and forced out of fun.
    So she cries blood red tears in attempt to change,
    Her messed up life, so rearranged.

    [Chorus]
    She smears her face with lipgloss and black -
    Catch her eyes and watch her back.
    Memories playing like a film without sound -
    As she continuously falls back to the ground.

    [Bridge]
    She smiles plastic smiles and learned how to fake it -
    Deep down inside she just can't begin to take it.

    [Verse4]
    Tears are still falling, but not from her eyes -
    They're falling from the people, to late to realize.
    Her life was scarred, to gone to be saved
    As the bury her with tears in her grave.

    [Chorus]
    She smeared her face with lipgloss and black -
    You should've caught her eyes and watched her back.
    Memories were playing like a film without sound -
    Now she has fallen, for the last time, to the ground.

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    Love

    It Happened One Night

    Laying in the grass, just staring at the stars,
    I found my mind wandering, wondering how you are.
    I hope that you are happy; I hope that someone cares -
    Because you know, forever, I will always be there.

    I promised you a thousand times that you have my heart -
    No matter how far we may go, we're never that far apart.
    Life is cruel and life plays tricks, but we'll make the most of it;
    Together we stand, hand-in-hand, and that's something, I'll admit.

    The grass was cold under my back, but I didn't really mind -
    I just let the memories take me back, as my body began to unwind;
    The tension just melted away, and for a time, I could smile -
    It was something so unfamiliarly pleasant; I hadn't felt that in awhile.

    The stars, they twinkled absently, playing to their own beat -
    Just like the time when we danced, when our bodies did meet.
    Slowly we moved, our eyes locked, dancing hand-in-hand -
    No better moment I ever spent, no bigger prize I did land.

    I tried to match each star, for each reason I loved you,
    But when I reached a million, I realized stars were few.
    They twinkled and they disappeared, making it hard to keep track -
    But my reasons, they did grow, as I kept looking back.

    Your eyes showed me you care; your hands, they held me tight;
    Your words could quell my fears and tell me what's wrong or right.
    You kind heart let me in to a place no one dared to go,
    And in return, I loved you; I just wanted you to know.

    Your smile brightened up my days when the world seemed so cruel -
    Your laughter made me giggle. not feel like the fool.
    You caring ways did catch me when I began to fall -
    Your loving manner broke right through my defensive wall.

    Your jokes could make me laugh, I still hold each moment in time;
    Each precious gift you gave to me, I could never call them mine.
    For they were shared between two souls, bonded at the heart -
    A touch, a smile and a laugh; it was true love from the start.

    So as I counted the memories, my phone began to ring -
    Never had a phone call brought such joy as yours could bring.
    "Honey, I'm so sorry, I never meant for us to fight.
    Can you please forgive me? Without you, nothing's right?"

    "I've been waiting for your call, hoping you still cared -"
    "Babe, you know, I told you, I will always be there."
    "Then let's move on from this, and put the past behind.
    It's no use dwelling on mistakes, I have come to find."

    "Honey, I'm so glad to hear it, because I have something to say -
    Remember what I said? It was just the other day?
    I told you that I loved you, and I would forever.
    So don't ever be afraid because I'll stop next to never."

    The call didn't last much longer; there was nothing left to say -
    But I learned something special and I learned it that day:
    No matter what happens, your heart may just be right.
    So I guess you could say I fell in love; It Happened One Night.

  • Sweet Fragility
    17 years ago

    Love:

    All My Heart [Triple Triolet]
    By: Sweet Fragility

    The time we spend together, you always try to hurt me.
    I cannot believe that it makes me want to die.
    If you knew - would you be filled with malicious glee?
    The time we spend together, you always try to hurt me.
    I have always been so strong, everyone would agree.
    People think I am heartless - do I still remember how to cry?
    The time we spend together, you always try to hurt me.
    I cannot believe that it makes me want to die.

    My heart breaks a little more each passing day.
    It burns inside when you are thinking of her instead of me.
    These are the emotions I cannot let myself display.
    My heart breaks a little more each passing day.
    She is the only one you care about, so why can't I stay away?
    You use me and cast me away like a piece of debris.
    My heart breaks a little more each passing day.
    It burns inside when you are thinking of her instead of me.

    You don't know that I love you with all my heart.
    I wish I could tell you that I am able to feel.
    How do you not know, you're supposed to be smart.
    You don't know that I love you with all my heart.
    Everyday I hide the fact that I am falling apart.
    The thought of telling you makes my head reel.
    You don't know that I love you with all my heart.
    I wish I could tell you that I am able to feel.

    A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital letters representing the repeated lines.

    Sad:

    If I'm Not In Love [Double Triolet]
    By: Sweet Fragility

    Every time we meet, these questions are in my mind --
    If I'm not in love with you, why am I still fooling myself?
    How did we last for so long, how could I be so blind?
    Every time we meet, these questions are in my mind --
    How can I be with you if you make me feel so confined?
    If I don't want to hurt you, does that mean I should hurt myself?
    Every time we meet, these questions are in my mind --
    If I'm not in love with you, why am I still fooling myself?

    Every time we meet, I am overcome with sadness for you,
    For I no longer believe our destinies are intertwined.
    Our love isn't mutual; your heart would break if you knew.
    Every time we meet, I am overcome with sadness for you.
    You still want me, even though I am ready for someone new.
    I don't know how you will deal when I leave you behind.
    Every time we meet, I am overcome with sadness for you,
    For I no longer believe our destinies are intertwined.

    A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital letters representing the repeated lines.

    Dark (Fantasy):

    Hawksong
    By: Sweet Fragility

    Inspired by the book "Hawksong," by Amelia Atwater Rhodes.

    Invoke the air's seductive melody --
    Listen to the beautiful, rising notes.
    A lullaby soothes her patchwork heart,
    The change begins to its sacred song.

    The exchange of human vulnerability
    For feathers of down and plumage
    Has become her escape from reality.
    Soft crunch of spine brings nonchalance,
    Change to hollow bone brings tranquility.
    Her grief and strife quickly forgotten --
    As she is cloaked with newfound freedom.

    The change ends to a wondrous hawksong --
    Spread powerful, golden brown wings,
    To feel the hidden glory of flight
    And the sweet release from humanity.

  • Daisy if you do
    17 years ago

    Behind the Tears (Sad)

    Although clear in color they may seem,
    Truths untold hidden in scheme,
    Much they know although unseen,

    Crawling at first the skin embraced,
    Following faster quickening the pace,
    Never their path again to retrace,

    Silently creeping to the foreground,
    Exposing themselves while earthbound,
    Behind these tears that never make a sound

    As the Sun Sets (Love)

    Hues of orange drip into the landscape
    Flamboyant yellow takes no rest
    Ceasing never to amaze me with brilliance

    Easterly sands fade in shadows of dusk
    Variants of beige and brown dance
    Clinging to the toes of my lover

    Remnants of light grasp the shore
    With no return persuasion they retreat
    Succumbing to the eve that lay in store

    Crimson stained clouds float lazily above
    Peaceful slumber until morn
    Drifting until awakened in another dream

    Temporarily suspended sun traded for
    Lethargic shades of grey filtering moonlight
    Gracefully displaying your silhouette

    P.M.S. (Funny)

    They say I have a disorder
    and there's a name for it
    An abbreviation of letters
    for putting up with your shit

    You said I'd never find
    another quite like you
    Looking at our past
    I hope that this is true

    Now that I'm free
    from your burdens full of sin
    Time for the real me
    to spread my wings again

    Hang out with my friends
    and watch a girly flick
    Talk about the past
    and how you were a prick

    Eat chocolate for dinner
    whenever I get home
    To help me get over
    this P.M.S. syndrome

    In love with this freedom
    so don't you even think
    I'm even missing you
    or dirty bathroom sink

    I don't miss the laundry
    or skid marks that you left
    My gratitude for this
    I hope you will accept

    No more finding you
    on my couch asleep
    While I'm busy cleaning
    the house you wouldn't keep

    Now that you're gone
    I don't worry anymore
    No more yellow stains
    left on the bathroom floor

    I won't even mention
    all your "shortcomings"
    It's better left unsaid
    about these type of things

    You left the keys to your apartment
    on the countertop
    Said if I get the urge
    when passing by go ahead and stop

    Maybe to say hi
    and just hang out for awhile
    What the hell I figured
    as I pulled into your drive

    I knew you weren't home
    but I let myself inside
    Hoping you'll understand
    the intentions I implied

    Beer caps I collected
    from all those games of Football
    I designed them into a mural
    of a jackass on your wall

    There to remind you
    there's no one quite like you
    I hope you get the picture
    that we're finally through

    You claim that I am crazy
    and should have some therapy
    There is a first for everything
    On this we can agree

  • nikki
    17 years ago

    Love poem

    Piece of heaven

    by Nikki

    I get my piece of heaven
    When our bodies are entwined
    When we are in each others arms
    And our hearts are combined

    I get my piece of heaven
    When he holds me ever so tight
    I love the way he hugs me
    And keeps me warm through the night

    I get my piece of heaven
    Every time our eyes connect
    I know he will always keep me safe
    And my life he will always protect

    I get my piece of heaven
    With his tender touch
    I never knew love could feel so strong
    As I love this man so much

    I get my piece of heaven
    When out bodies melt together
    I know that our love will always shine
    And we will be happy forever

    I get my piece of heaven
    And I have not even passed
    Now I know what heaven feels like
    And forever I will keep it in my grasp

    sad poem

    My sweet rose (acrostic)

    by Nikki

    My sweet rose, you have been taken far too soon
    You were the light in my eyes, the love in my heart

    Sweet heart I love you, no matter where you are
    Wishing upon every star that I had you in my arms
    Emotions in me, I remember you never took a single breath
    Every time I think of you, tears appear in my eyes
    Thinking what you would be like if you lived your life

    Remembering how small and beautiful you were
    Over flowing with tears as I held you my gorgeous
    Seeing you there without your first breath, my heart broke
    Ebony I miss you and always will, you will always be in my heart

    friendship poem (family)

    Baby's breath

    by Nikki

    My baby's first breath,
    was one i had longed to hear,
    they told me he might die,
    and that was my biggest fear,

    right through my pregnancy,
    all i had was pain,
    they told me i had complications,
    and then tried to explain,

    what was going wrong,
    and how it does affect,
    but i knew the life inside me,
    i always had to protect,

    they told me i could not have a natural birth,
    i had to have a cesarean,
    they told me that we both might die,
    and i had to have an ultrasound again,

    he only weighed 1600 grams,
    and they said that he was to small,
    i just layed there in shock,
    i felt like i hit a brick wall,

    i was set to have have the cesarean,
    they gave me steroid injections,
    i just thought to myself,
    why do i have imperfections,

    early in the morning they woke me,
    to tell me my son will be born,
    i did not know whether to be happy or sad,
    did not know if my heart would be torn,

    in my back - they gave me the needle,
    i was so scared,
    i only carried him for just over 7 months,
    but losing him i could not have bared,

    when he came out there was silence,
    i thought something was wrong,
    but than i heard a small little cry,
    and knew with us he did belong,

    my son was alive,
    i had gotten such a fright,
    they took him away to help him,
    and i got to see him that night,

    he weighed 1900 grams,
    he was such a beautiful baby boy,
    when i first held him,
    all i felt inside was joy,

    today my son is 6 months,
    he babbles, laughs and smiles,
    in the pregnancy it was hard,
    and i had a fright for a while,

    but now today my life is perfect,
    i would not change a thing,
    from now until the day i die,
    i shall guard him under my wings.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    DARK

    Surrender to Myself

    Droplets pierce my skin,
    As I order a storm to pour
    Down through this thick atmosphere,
    Into my soul's back door.

    Streaks of lightning scrape my windows,
    Rain thrashes against my walls;
    Almost every door is bolted shut,
    So no one enters at all.

    Each lock secured tightly,
    Shielding in all my emotions,
    Slowly loosening in this shower,
    Despair and Aversion blacken.

    Thunder ripples through the sky,
    Mustering up Zeus's deadly bolts,
    Now ramming my back door
    Simultaneously with threatening jolts.

    Quivers, Bangs, and Roars
    Envelope my inner secrets,
    Lashing them out into the open,
    Allowing a Hell of a blitz.

    Fingers lace across my scalp,
    Digging nails deeply through,
    Broiling back all those emotions,
    Romping around like animals of the Zoo.

    No matter what I do,
    Nothing keeps them at ease;
    They break through barriers
    Simply as the monsters please.

    My power over them
    Begins to diminish,
    As I Surrender to Myself
    With one last bow to finish.

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    SAD

    Stranded with Hades

    Crippled tears run,
    Sharply down her cheeks;
    The pain has returned.

    Every emotion,
    Every scene,
    Floods her mind.

    His breath
    Lingers in the air,
    Suffocating her.

    Wild and rash,
    He raises his arm;
    He's ready.

    Words as sour
    As his breath,
    Strike her.

    The bruising begins,
    The drops stream;
    Battered and broken.

    She is everything,
    Everything but ready,
    To suffer such hurt.

    Deeper he ventures,
    Beneath her skin;
    A worm crawls.

    Despite all screams,
    All cries for help,
    She is stranded.

    No one hears her pleas,
    He shoves them all aside,
    Lust is his life.

    Another victim
    Torn that night;
    Words hard to tell.

    To mumble them aches,
    To explain them twinges,
    To remember them...

    Is Hades and below...

    The purity,
    Of a delicate angel,
    Vanished in minutes.

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    LOVE

    With Lasting Love {{triolet}}

    Fill my goblet with lasting love,
    And allow it to overflow,
    With the melody of a dove;
    Fill my goblet with lasting love,
    Until it reaches high above,
    And slowly trickles down below;
    Fill my goblet with lasting love,
    And allow it to overflow.

  • Krazy
    17 years ago

    Funny

    Flip Flop Banana Whip Pop
    you like bananas, more then one would think
    unfortunately i think they stink

    add one in to a smoothie you always do
    why are bananas yellow, not blue?

    my flip flops manage the yellow tone
    yet one bite of banana and i start to moan

    many helpful tricks this sunny friend emits
    i wish it's taste wouldn't send me into fits

    cures upon cures the banana does hold
    to those who like it, good things will unfold

    some say an apple a day keeps the doctor away
    thankfully it's not that putrid banana that makes me sway

    he likes bananas more then i ever will
    i really don't like them, i'd rather take the pill

    yellow is the glowing hue
    which i have to admit i admire just as much as Peru

    i would gladly slip on those canary yellow flips flops
    then drink one of those revolting banana whip pops.

    Sad

    The Forgotten Park

    Leaves finding a home next to an old rotting stump,
    grass starting to droop in a sad sort of way,
    flowers hanging their head lower every day...
    They haven't been here in awhile.
    Shadows form across the swing-set,
    once hosting a smiling girl, beaming boy.
    Now whistling a pathetic tune of moans and groans
    blowing back and forth in the harsh but subtle wind.

    Memories will pass, as a lost dog wanders through.
    A wish for that hot summer sun to heat the bench for Them,
    to hear that melodious jingle of laughter once again.
    Instead to hear the crows repeat their dreadful song

    I used to be their hiding place.
    Surrounding them with tall trees and blooming flowers,
    but they left me here, they moved on.
    I can only wonder if they found a better sanctuary.

    Once a safe haven for young couples like Them.
    Now a run down pit stop for rain and thunder.
    Flowers have died, grass has faded away to mere nothingness.
    If only to hear that laughter once more and to feel the pure love They shared.

    Love

    Charmer Shrouded Within Milky Mystery

    beautifully made by morning sun
    she's silky soft to the regal
    seeking love around every corner

    only to be discovered by a charmer
    ever so smooth voice dancing around her
    eyes clouded with milky mystery

    to fall in love was unavoidable
    the two were hand in hand from that day on
    strongest bond being wound tighter every minute

  • Michelle18
    17 years ago

    Sad poem

    *He Was Sent Up In The Sky*

    I remember the days we spent in my room,
    Just cuddling one another.
    We'd laugh and giggle so much,
    And just stare at each other.

    We were so young,
    We had that fire in our eye.
    We made a promise one day,
    To never let that fire die.

    Then one day we were walking,
    And you just fell to the ground.
    I was panicking so much,
    I was the only one around.

    I rushed you to the hospital,
    To see what was wrong.
    The doctors really scared me,
    They took so long.

    The doctor finally came out,
    With a look of sadness on his face.
    I asked, "doctor whats wrong,
    Is he going to be okay?"

    He said, " Im sorry to have to say this,
    But I have some bad news......
    ....Your boyfriend has had cancer for a long time,
    He will pass very soon."

    As I dropped to my knees,
    With tear filled eyes.
    I folded my hands in prayer,
    And looked toward the sky.

    "Lord please help him,
    Let him make it through.
    If I have to lose him,
    I dont know what I will do."

    I finally wiped my tears,
    As I stepped into the room by his bed.
    He whispered in my ear softly,
    And these are the words that he said....

    "You'll always be my baby,
    I love you with all of my heart.
    Even though its time for me to go,
    In your dreams we'll never part."

    Later that night he was gone,
    He was sent up in the sky.
    I hold his hand and continue to say I love you,
    As I sit by the bed and cry.

    Explicit poem
    *Together We Stand*

    Together we stand,
    Lost in each others eyes.
    I've lost my every thought,
    I just stare at you and sigh.

    Gasping for air,
    When you touch my skin.
    Heaven must know,
    This is a terrible sin.

    I try to breathe,
    But it gets so tough.
    We both know,
    I'm losing, I've had enough.

    You're winning me over,
    I try to stay calm.
    But thats so hard,
    When you touch my palm.

    When we kiss,
    I get lost in your lips.
    I get lost even more,
    When you grab my hips.

    I'm so confused,
    I dont know what to do.
    But I want so bad,
    To give into you.

    I've lost the fight,
    You've won it all.
    Together we stand,
    And apart I fall.

    Love Poem
    *I Will Always Love You

    When you leave,
    i know i will cry.
    i'll just break down,
    and feel like i just died.
    my heart will shatter,
    it'll rip apart.
    please dont forget me,
    keep me safe in your heart.
    i will miss you so much,
    you'll always be in my dreams.
    you'll be gone forever,
    is how it seems.
    i promise i will wait,
    and always think of you.
    just know that i care,
    and that i'll always love you.

    ^^this is about my boyfriend who is in the army.

  • Jessica
    17 years ago

    Just Leave. [Acrostic] [Sad]
    by Jessica

    Jumbled thoughts finally rise to the surface,
    Unleashing agony from within hidden traps,
    Searing words tumble over his chapped lips,
    Tearing away at her happiness, her skin it maps.

    Lingering bruises mark pale skin with coal,
    Everlasting scars forced into young minds,
    Anguish squeezed into every crack of her soul,
    Virginity lost, a mutilated heart is all he finds.
    Eternally reminded that she'll never be whole.

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    Glistening Skin [Parquette] [Explicit]
    by Jessica

    Hot kisses flow over my glistening shape
    Skillful fingers gently caress moist skin
    Expertly teasing each and every part of me
    Simple pleasures; never would I let them escape..

    Hot kisses flow over my glistening shape
    Raw moans echo; the pleasure slowly begins
    Breathing raggedly; rapture he did guarantee
    Pushing himself closer still, gently moving in..

    Hot kisses flow over my glistening shape
    The need to get closer becoming our plea
    Moving together as one; breathing grows thin
    Our passionate bodies like a lock and key..

    Hot kisses flow over my glistening shape
    Moaning avidly; morals going in the bin
    Ecstasy joining two amazing souls with glee
    As my husband calls, promptly do I flee..

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    It has four stanzas, each containing four lines.The first line of the poem is repeated in every stanza as the first line. Each line except the first has 10-12 syllables. The rhyme scheme is "abcaabcbacbcabcc"

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    Flutter To Freedom [Love]
    by Jessica

    Running a soft finger over tearstained cheeks
    Smiling with tenderness into her pain filled eyes
    Silently meeting his delicate gaze, love she seeks
    Ruby lips tremble slightly; she hates goodbyes..

    Pleading to him mutely as he touches her moist lips
    Forcing despairing eyes to remain connected with his
    Forlornly reaching for him; tracing a face with fingertips
    Relentless tears fall from their basin; what agony this is..

    Twirling her once coveted auburn hair; hot tears appear
    Kissing her crimson colored lips lightly; a smile he bestows
    Regretfully freeing a butterfly; whispering I will always be near
    Leaving her to flutter to freedom, only one glossy wing glows..

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  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Yay ! I will keep this open for
    the rest of tonight and end it
    tomorrow morning. Results
    should be in by tomorrow
    or the next day. :]

    There will overall be 9 - 12
    winners..since there are three
    poems from each person..I will
    Make three winners for each
    category..so three first places,
    second places, etc. And probably
    three HM`s. And yes, a person
    can win twice. I`m judging each
    category seperately. Will explain
    more on it tomorrow.

  • Wings Of Flames
    17 years ago

    Thats a cool sounding contest.you so clever!

  • Dan
    17 years ago

    Ill let you read mine.

    20 years in hell - sad
    Just to say - love
    Ancient Valor - dark

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Thanks guys, this is now closed
    and judging starts now...the results
    should be in later tonight or
    tomorrow sometime. :]

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    This was REALLY tough. All of the poems entered in here were very good, but, here are the results..

    For the sad poems,

    First - Ciao [5]
    Second - Britt [4]
    Third - InvisiblyBroken [3]
    HM - Hellon [2]
    HM - Dan [2]
    HM - *Gem* [2]

    For the love poems,

    First - Ciao [5]
    Second - Britt [4]
    Third - DixieDaisy [3]
    HM - Krazy [2]
    HM - Jessica [2]

    and for all other categories entered,

    First - SweetFragility [5]
    Second - Hellon [4]
    Third - Ciao [3]
    HM - Nikki [2]
    HM - DixieDaisy [2]
    HM - *Gem* [2]

    So overall;

    Ciao Darling, you get 13 r/r/c
    Britt<3, you get 8 r/r/c
    Hellon, you get 6 r/r/c
    DixieDaisy and Sweetfragility, you get 5 r/r/c
    *Gem*, you get 4 r/r/c
    InvisiblyBroken, you get 3 r/r/c
    Krazy, Jessica, Nikki and Dan; you get 2 r/r/c

    Great job everyone, I loved all the poems and this was very hard to judge. Please PM me your titles, it`s easier that way, I check those more..and I will get them done ASAP. :]

  • Michelle18
    17 years ago

    Yay! i got third place..lol.

    i dont think i've ever been close to winning a contest so im happy =].

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    OMG :falls off chair: Jenna!! Thank you sooo much! You just made my day! ^_^
    Jeez... 13 r/r/c... I'll have to find some. :]

    loveeee yeww! <33

  • Sweet Fragility
    17 years ago

    I think I might fall off my chair too. OMG - I almost never win contests! So happy. =)
    And congrats to everyone else!

  • Sweet Fragility
    17 years ago

    I also find it amazingly funny (not really) that i'm the only one not listed in "overall."

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Sorry, I put all the names out and then put them together according to amount and I forgot to readd yours. Sorry again.

  • Sweet Fragility
    17 years ago

    That's okay. As long as you didn't forget to read my poems LOL.