just wanted some feedback...

please let me share my lost and forgotten tears, some oldies from me...

Last goodbye...

Last goodbye, for all i've done,
you've lost what you once won.
Spoken words left unsaid,
leave me... In my cold, cold bed.

There are reasons so unreal,
Once! The truth will reveal.
Silent needs left undone,
Leave me... From all the fun.

Your dreams so unwise,
soon the pain will rise.
i was the the angel behind your pray,
But now!
I've to find love my way.

last goodbye, now i go,
I'll leave you in your own puppetshow.
I revealed myself into you,
I loved you... If you only knew!

Last goodbye...

You've made me thee man i used to be,
but slowly I'm sinking, and ask "is this me?"
Quickly drifting on vast ocean tides,
destination unknown, where are those times.

Did you know you've made me half the man
i used to be. I thought you knew me,
but you couldn't see.
I'am sailing rudderless in the act of god
Hoping that i strand on a bank of mud.

I am what i am, and i know my name,
there's no one that can change my game.
To turn the sails you need at least, a little
brease from the west heading east...

Le Marquis

Same might say, poetry is for silly peolple, but those who say that, are the wicked ones. Love to the peolple that still use their heart for many different reasons...

i think your poems are awsome. i really do. well i would like to talk to you. e-mail me at;estanhernandez@yahoo.com