Best Nature Poem

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

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    As the title says, I just want what you think is your best nature poem. Can be old, or you can write a new one if you want. I don`t want this contest going too long, so I will close it after 15 people.

    Annnnd go. :]

    01. Kristi [DONE]
    02. Hellon [DONE]
    03. Bryebread [DONE]
    04. Bob [DONE]
    05. Jean [DONE]
    06. *Gem* [DONE]
    07. Andrea Sunny [DONE]
    08. Jessica [DONE]
    09. SecludedSerendipity [DONE]
    10. Carrie [DONE]
    11. gabriella [DONE]
    12. .K.i.T.t.Y. [DONE]
    13. Corinne [DONE]
    14. Ciao <3 [DONE]
    15. Romancing the Darker Side [DONE]
    16. PCP [DONE]

  • Avrii Monrielle
    17 years ago

    Have you ever seen the rain?
    by Kristi H.

    Have you ever felt the drops, like tears,
    Fall into your hand,
    Kiss the misty, broken pieces,
    As they sweep onto your lips?

    Did you find a way to see the sky
    From a bird's eye view,
    As ebbs of blue and silver streak,
    The midnight blanket's canvas?

    If ever, did you bathe within,
    The outdoors' softest showers,
    Bangs in eyes as it pours down,
    And for once do not feel cold?

    Have you ever listened to the pits and patters,
    Running elves upon grass hills,
    Ending at the pavement's bend,
    A steady beat, despite the wind?

    Did you ever miss its gentle touch,
    Like a newborn to one's mother,
    Caressing with no other care,
    Quieting all worry?

    Do you hear the birds sing peacefully,
    Despite their different voices,
    Flowers, trees, how could they grow,
    Because of just one storm?

    Did you ever take a second glance,
    At the things that do surround you,
    To truly wonder, to be sure,
    Have you ever seen the rain?

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    First Snow
    by Twisted Heart

    Upon the crest of autumn leaves
    As cold rains wet the earth
    Comes the heart of winter's song
    To bring forth the first snow's birth.

    The swirling winds of time have come
    Increasing autumn's haste
    Into the past with other seasons
    Within our minds encased.

    Now comes the chill of winter's kiss
    As the white cape falls with grace
    Upon the hues of autumns reign
    A coat of whitewash, now is placed.

    It covers dirty grounds with hope
    And cleanses with its touch
    It sparks a bit of innocence
    With it's artistic brush.

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Xx Cerulean Tinged Waves - Double Palindrome xX

    Water
    Azure coloured
    Brightly sparkling crystals
    Beautiful, shimmering patterns
    Sunlight flickering on rippling waves
    Harmonising melodies and dance
    Nature echo's beauty
    Gracefully flowing
    Powerful yet delicate
    Oceans

    Dolphins
    Splashing playfully
    Topaz coloured droplets flying high
    Wildly yet gracefully somersaulting
    Sunlight glistening through highlighted sprays
    Beautifully dancing, leaping, twirling
    Cerulean tinged waves rolling gently
    Synchronized dance
    Freedom

    - Reflection -

    Freedom
    Dance synchronized
    Gently rolling waves tinged Cerulean
    Twirling, leaping, dancing beautifully
    Sprays highlighted through glistening sunlight
    Somersaulting gracefully yet wildly
    High flying droplets coloured Topaz
    Playfully splashing
    Dolphins

    Oceans
    Delicate yet powerful
    Flowing gracefully
    Beauty echo's nature
    Dance and melodies harmonising
    Waves rippling on flickering sunlight
    Patterns shimmering, beautiful
    Crystals sparkling brightly
    Coloured Azure
    Water

    *Gem*
    Copyright©GemmaStott2007

    Palindrome - Also Known as Mirrored Poetry. A palindrome, by definition, is a word, phrase, verse, sentence, or even poem that reads the same forward or backward. The carefully placed words form the same sentence, whether it is read forward or backward. For example, 'Mirrored images reflect images mirrored' which includes a word in the centre as a reversal point for the sentence or even the poem.

  • Jessica
    17 years ago

    Scarlet Petals [Haiku]by Jessica

    Thrilling scents flutter
    Scarlet petals confirm pain
    Thorns prepare for war

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    A Haiku is a poem about nature with the syllable count 5/7/5 and originates in Japan

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  • dollwithafrown
    17 years ago

    The Seasons
    by SecludedSerendipity

    Flower buds begin to bloom into different shapes
    As the earth is flooded with a shower of colours.
    Frequent rain sparkles the ground like diamonds.
    A beautiful setting of nature lies before us,
    Letting us know that springtime has arrived.

    As the chilly air of spring leaves us, summer arises,
    With it, comes the burning hot sunshine,
    Inviting us to explore the outdoors and invest in some ice-cream.
    Crowds of people roam the beaches, gasping for cool water:
    A break from the fiery sunshine emitting constant heat.

    The seasons change and soon autumn is upon us;
    A crisp breeze echoes among us all, cold and chilling.
    Orange leaves cling onto tree-tops, desperately trying not to fall.
    Gusts of wind disrupt the long, peaceful grass, branches are swept around,
    And as autumn deserts us, it leaves behind a land of fallen leaves.

    Before we know it, winter has overcome us;
    Bitter white snow chills us right down to every bone in our body.
    The nights are longer, darker, with a deadly silence shadowing them.
    Every person stays indoors, soaking up the heat from their fires,
    Dying to escape the frozen bleakness of which winter provides.

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    Connected

    The majesty of the oldest tree,
    The heart of the wildest beast,
    We are everything we've come to know,
    On ourselves we feast.

    All we feel and all we see,
    Is all we'll ever be,
    All we touch and all we know,
    Will never set us free.

    Trees give life, we like to breathe,
    But forests, they are fading,
    Save ourselves, you wouldn't think,
    It'd take too much persuading.

    All connected in this chain,
    But money talks and time is slain,
    By bitter words and sharpened tongue,
    Dissolved within the acid rain.

    Water meant to quench a thirst,
    Polluted by our own self worth,
    I guess she never stood a chance,
    Mother nature, planet earth.

    From bugs to frogs, wolves to bears,
    Great and small should hold our prayers,
    They are the life we wish to keep,
    We must straighten our affairs.

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    Eyes of a raven

    White stretching across forever
    cramped inside an orb of dew
    blind eyes seeing all the universe
    life is something new

    breaking all the boundaries
    striving to be free
    chipping away at the white shell
    finally able to see

    so small compared to the world
    afraid of what's to come
    wings to wet to open
    waiting for the sun

    hunger is an element
    food is needed to survive
    days passing in oblivion
    at least you are alive

    strong enough to try now
    all are born with flight
    jumping off the edge
    hope to be alright

    falling is so beautiful
    forever into dark
    spread your wings and soar
    on the world you've made your mark

    visions of the planet
    as it sinks into cold death
    treasure now forever
    sweet air with every breath

    conquer all your enemies
    fight to share you're haven
    die singing your song of light
    through the eyes of a raven

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    17 years ago

    Winter's Beauty {{acrostic}}

    Wonderlands of white crystals,
    Inching on the windowsill
    Nothing is more luminous
    Than the glistening snow;
    Every flake so delicate and unique,
    Rendering lightly in the breeze,
    So slowly, so softly.

    Bedazzling those below,
    Etching this scene into memory,
    As all frolic in new Winter's arms,
    Ushered into melodic harmonies,
    Twirling to the rhythm of
    Young ones hand in hand.

  • Corinne
    17 years ago

    If I Could Lay Me Down in a Wood

    If I could lay me down in a wood
    Let roots entwine each limb
    And allow chlorophylled grass
    To cover over my corpuscular skin

    I'd gladly give up this human life
    Absorbed - transformed and be
    Nourishment for this green world
    And return all it's given to me

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Here here here!!! lol Happy now? jk jk ;)
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    A Mother's Job [Triquatrain]

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    With four mouths to feed and an endless growing need,
    I feel like I'm missing out -
    On living my way, not just living for today;
    I just don't know what life is about.

    It's not that I mind, for I have come to find
    That I really do love all my kids.
    Even though I growl and even though I scowl
    At all the wrongs they did.

    They are cute as a bug, even when they play with slugs,
    Which still is gross to see
    But I love each one; they are loads of fun
    Gabriel, Andrew, Todd and Emily.

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    It is a quatrain poem in tri-rhyme with a specific rhyming pattern (see below). Lines 1 and 3 have internal rhyme whereas lines 2 and 4 do not.

    Rhyme Pattern:

    (a,a)
    b
    (c,c)
    b

    (d,d)
    e
    (f,f)
    e

    (g,g)
    h
    (i,i)
    h

    . . . and so on.

  • Romancing the Darker Side
    17 years ago

    Falling Forever

    The sky a solid colour
    Of greyish blue clouds
    Rain comes pouring down
    Like it's got something against me

    Sitting at the window
    Screen pulled wide open
    My hair and hands soaked
    From the torrential downpour

    Thunder crashing in the distance
    Yet no lightning to be seen
    I could perfectly content
    With sticking a straw out the window

    And drinking
    And drinking
    And drinking

    The crisp, cool water
    As it flows over my parched tongue
    Quenching my thirst
    As I hunger for more

    I could be perfectly content with

    Dancing in the rain
    Singing in the rain
    Eating in the rain
    Sleeping in the rain
    Bathing in the rain
    Living in the rain

    Tree's leaves come flying
    From every direction;
    An effect of the wind
    That blows ever so quickly

    I could be perfectly content with

    Wind whistling endlessly
    Thunder crashing endlessly
    Lightning striking endlessly
    And rain falling forever

  • Bryan
    17 years ago

    Songbirds Flying High (Double Sedoka)

    Trees sway in the wind,
    Tranquility in the air,
    Abyss slowly consuming.

    And the rain falls down,
    Drowning out this sad sorrow,
    the sun sets in this red sky.

    Happiness in hate,
    Melodies playing these songs,
    Little songbirds flying high.

    Innocent they sing,
    Such beautifully sad tunes,
    The moon rises against night.

    The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of two three-line katauta with the following syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka, pair of katauta as a single poem, may address the same subject from differing perspectives.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    PPC, I will accept your poem, the more the merrier. :)

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    I went with the ones that I could picture the most in my mind and the ones that really stuck with me. It was a hard decision, they were all so good.

    First - Jean [8]
    Second - Hellon [6]
    Third - *Gem* [3]
    HM - .K.i.T.t.Y. [2]
    HM - Bryebread [2]

    PM me your titles please. :]

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    Thanks for first. Congrats to everyone. Some very good talent here.

    Will PM you in a bit.

  • Bryan
    17 years ago

    Thanx for the placing

    congrats everone

    She Will Be Loved (Villanelle)

    My Immortal (Glosa-verse)

  • Batscout
    17 years ago

    I love the poem above - "If I Could Lay Me Down in a Wood". It is exceptional and the poet has done a fantastic job with metaphor and imagery.