Jenni's Three Round Contest, Round Two.

Whichever title you choose must be written in one of the forms below.
There's nine titles, and nine styles, so it's first come, first served.

Titles:

Nothing's gonna change (ZaniLa Rhyme)
Done-Raveena

Wishing I never did what I did (Terzanelle)
Done-Ciao x3

Ready to fight (Rondel)
Reserved-Beautiful Chaos

Can't believe what you did to me
Reserved-

Drowning in tears of memory (Wrapped Refrain)
Done-HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

So much your heart can't see (Rondeau)
Done-Twisted Heart

I'll find another you (Trijan Refrain)
Reserved-SecludedSerendipity

You took a piece of my heart (CinqTroisDecaLa)
Reserved-Britt

Your tears make me smile (Triolet)
Done-Sunny

Remaining Styles:

Mirrored Refrain

Each of these styles are explained here: http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/types.html

Rules:
Reserve in order to avoid confusion
One title/stle per poet.
One poet per style/title.
NEW
No suicidal, self harm etc
Check your grammar

Five people will be chosen for the final round.

Closing date: 24th September 2007

Have fun!
xxx

Wrapped Refrain
Drowning In Tears of Memory
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Darn you britt, I wanted CInqTroisDecaLa Rhyme !

Ready To Fight-Rondel

"I'll Find Another You" - Trijan Refrain, thank you.

Lmao, was going to take the Terzanelle, but figured might as well try another Wrapped Refrain hahaha, if you weren`t so fast I woulda had it though missy ! >.<

Wishing I Never Did What I Did plz
Terzanelle plz

<33 Ciao

Would like the title, "So much your heart can't see" I don't know what forms are left so will choose that momentarily.

Thanks

Formed to use: Rondeau

So Much Your Heart Can't See [Rondeau]
By: Twisted Heart

There is so much your heart can't see
Your thoughts are running wildly
Your mind has tricked your soul tonight
Put forth a thought that dimmed your light
Then tangled you with so much ease

Oh gentle one, I give to thee
A tender breath of faith, for me
Because doubt has you in its sight...
Your heart can't see

My love, I pledge, so wistfully
Caressing with hope tenderly
Among the moon and stars so bright
Still your mind holds you too tight
Since walls rise up to conquer thee...
Your heart can't see.

A Rondeau is a French form, 15 lines long, consisting of three stanzas: a quintet, a quatrain, and a
sestet with a rhyme scheme as follows: aabba aabR aabbaR. Lines 9 and 15 are short - a
refrain (R) consisting of a phrase taken from line one. The other lines are longer (but all of the
same metrical length).

Scrap booked moments all lie to me --
Looking to what we used to be,
Two teenagers thinking it`s love...
Of all that they`re so scared of.
Making their marks on hearts, leaving haggard imprints.
I kept the negative prints of scrap booked moments.

We took down names of hearts cracked,
Because a spine is what we lacked --
Drowning in tears of memory,
Is the angst that he`ll never see --
Smiling up at me from a broken picture frame,
Is a boy who broke my heart, and we took down names.

-Jenna Elphick
September 9, 2007

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The Wrapped Refrain, created by Jan Turner, consists of 2 stanzas of 6 lines each;
Meter: 8,8,8,8,12,12 and Rhyme Scheme: a,a,b,b,c,c.

Wishing I Never Did What I Did [Teranelle]

I swore I'd never regret loving you,
But life was never that easy on me;
I'm broken-hearted and I don't know what to do.

I am so much better than I used to be -
Yet the pain bares down on my tattered soul;
But life was never that easy on me.

Incomplete, I'm trying to mend the gaping hole -
But my heart probably doesn't deserve that,
Yet the pain bares down on my tattered soul.

You were all I wanted and all I had ever lacked,
And you loved me, once upon a time -
But my heart probably doesn't deserve that.

I'm just wishing that you'd come back; I'd be fine -
But deep down, I'm just a broken-hearted kid -
And you loved me, once upon a time.

I'm wishing I never did what I did -
But deep down, I'm just a broken-hearted kid -
I swore I'd never regret loving you;
I'm broken-hearted and I don't know what to do.

I have really been trying but I just cannot seem to get anything to work, I dont know why, so if everyone but me gets theirs in feel free to go on without me, i will try though.

I'm sorry, I can't write this. >.<

I've tried, but nothing is working, and I've had far too much going on lately to completely focus on it.

Sorry again.

Okay. I'm going to advance three people to round three as not all of them were entered. I'll get to judging this later today or tomorrow and have the winners posted a.s.a.p.

You guys suck. but only because you made it so hard to judge. everyone who participated in this round will each get two comments. pm me the ones you would like doing and i will get to them asap. the three advancing to the final round are Jenna, Amanda and Sunny. Round three will be posted shortly. xxx