Contest- great prize

I would like you to write a poem about a girl who has seen her father die, and she cant stop thinking about him just lying there and her guilt of not doing anything to help although she couldnt have done anything

1st prize - r/r/c on 75% of your poems
2nd prize - r/r/c on 50% of your poems
3rd prize - r/r/c on 25% of your poems

only 5 spaces
1. Finalgravedigger
2.HollywoodxBangBang
3.Rookie
4.Twisted heart
5.Dan

only one week left to get your poems in

sorry guys the due date is 20th of september :)
xx

Im in this when is the due date

Wow, happened to a friend of mine
so I should be able to do this, :]
I`ll reserve.

Okayy both reserved

thanks guys

Can i?i'll try my best?..

Would Like to Reserve. Thanks

Ill res

The Painful Death

As she sits in the corner she is paused in the middle
Of feelings that so entangle her
Her father lies dead, with no life, on the floor
She checks again, she must be sure

Tendrils of darkness consume him
Trapping his body in an endless embrace
As his soul wanders on
Lost from his mind

She sits and she watches with fear and sadness
She weeps as his heart passes on
She opens her mouth, to the heavens above
But no words avail her now

She is lost as she sits
Finding no comfort
And the world still swerves round
Not even caring

The girl sits alone
She holds herself tight
There is nobody there for her
She is lonesome tonight

And the twilight consumes her
As she sits there for years
For the rest of her life
She sits in her fears

And so she passes also
The the sky above her head
Into the sun, into the stars
The sorrow, her only friend

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No low life had better rip this off lol

Everyone above reserved :)
xx

The date to have your poems will the the 20th and i will announce the winner on the 21st well done guys :)

Empty Arm's Regret
By: Twisted Heart

Silence echo down the halls
Upon the heart, a teardrop falls
Inside the soul a hurt to bear
Cascades of white and sterile fair.

Vacant eyes in distant sleep
Tore from the soul, a tear to weep
No sound to stay upon his breath
The tender soul consumed in death

Was there no hope as darkness came
Behind his eyes, his soul to claim
Against the night in shadows cast
His daughter's feel of guilt came fast.

A time of torment filled with 'what ifs'
Tears fall upon her trembling lips
A moment came too late to see
Before her father ceased to breathe.

Too busy, was her reason then
To distance herself from her kin
Though many years had past them by
In pain, she stays to question why.

Time with her father... she felt no need
When she had time, there he'd be
But time has come, he's laid to rest
With empty arms, she holds regret.

Daddies gone

Her shield of might
she had a reason to fight
her daddy holding her so tight
wheres her guiding light?

Gone with those thugs
he was heroundously mugged
only having ten dollars
finally killed him for another.

11 dollars they picked
they put him down
and left him horribly sick.

Little girl crying, holding him
as he closed his eyes
on that solem night
He left her.

She couldnt do a thing
feeling like such a weakling.
Shouting for help
knowing none would come.

Lying by his side
she had let this great man die
wishing she could hide
but all she could do was lie.

A great years pass
but these memories last
they are not past.

This is the movie she plays every night
having such a fright
shes messed up for the rest of life.

Its 21st of september here lol

Okay seeing as though two of the enterants didnt post their poems i have the winners:)

dan
twisted heart
final grave digger:)

well done guys

xx

Yay was I first!? LOL! TY TY TY haha. I won! Much better after Collingwood lost to Geelong! lol now I feel better

3rd place yay last place