"Title this" Contest

Okay, I want you guys to title a poem I pose before you...best title wins...a title a person..

we go until ten titles...

right then, here it is:

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I flew in from the North
the other day
and it rained in Kyoto
yesterday

I stood under a silk umbrella
as the roof drummed
and the water slithered quietly
into the angry river
beneath the suburb bridge

there stood a stick in rags --
the maid -- only seven monsoons old
shivering as her scrawny frame
fluttered in the gusts
and fingers embraced a pole
as the rain thumped against her
paleness

but her eyes, her eyes!
with all their redness and soreness --
from lack of care
and sleep
and kindly blinks --
stared starkly toward
the window

I peered inside, curious,
and a white faced goddess,
draped in all the silk and gold of Japan
poured tea and royalty
as the guest smiled back
in that peculiar American fashion

I turned to see the girl,
no less frozen,
and her eyes
no less redder or sorer
or sharper

and I saw more Geisha
in those eyes -- red, sore, and sharp --
than all of Japan
ever
showed me
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Eyes of Japan

A Woman Concealed

A Rainy Day in Kyoto

Vision of Japan

The Storm Geisha

Crimson Stained Women.

Lol, sorry, the best I could come up with.

A Geisha's Eyes?

Clarity Reflected Within Sore Eyes

Silk umbrella

Lol

Memroirs Of The Geisha.

HAHAHA all I could think of except The Misery Of Japan or The Red Sun On White or something along those lines (like the japanese flag)

Or you could name it in japanese.

赤及び白精神

I translated that I don't know if its right but its

The Red and White Spirit

Not trying to cause trouble, my title was a fairly crap one anyway but Mizzy basically took that and changed it around, that must be against the rules?

I...umnn...am not sure...they are actually two titles, and on the other hand she did take a cue from your work...
But the winner is neither, I'm sorry to say...

All of the titles are amazing, but one just totally caught my eye: Storm Geisha.

Congratulations Synh!

Haha, thanks. The 1st contest I've won all year lol