1 week - 5 spots - awesome prize

Okay if you wish to enter this comp it finnishes on wednesday the 19th of spetember and the winner will be announced on thursday the 20th of september.

the poem i would like you to write is a girl meets boy scenario. you will be judges on punctuation, the way you express the feeling and emotion, and the wording i.e if it makes sense and if it is understandable

only 5 spots so hurry

~~Prizes~~

1st - r/r/c on 75% of your poems
2nd - r/r/c on 50% of your poems
3rd - r/r/c on 25% of your poems

~reserved~
1. Beautiful chaos
2. *gem*
3. yuna
4. *charisma*
5. raveena

Ignition

Bring forth those sweet lips
Lay them upon my soul
Forever burning your heat
Deep into my depths

Let me drown
In the flames of your desire
Reaching for you
As the flower
Reaches for the sun

Drinking in its warmth
Growing and reaching
Into the unknown
Without a second thought
Without an ounce of fear

Lay your eyes upon me now
I am here before you
Offering such a love
The world will never know
A greater force

Such passion and fury
Such caring and warmth
Those who would view our love
Would come to understand all things

All questions of the heart would be answered
People warming their souls
Diving into our inferno
Setting the world aflame

Reserve please

Xx Angels xX

One day in heaven
Two angels were looking down
And then both of their gazes
Fell on a certain town

They saw a boy and girl
Who were both feeling low
They were made for each other
but they just didn't know

The angels were confused
Maybe Cupid's arrow missed
Now it was up to them
To make sure there was a kiss

They plotted and they planned
Cos they knew this love was real
When the couple got togther
Their happiness was sealed

I'm so glad the angels plotted
Cos that lonely girl was me
And when they led the way to you
I saw how happy we could be

I promise you this now
I'll love 'til forever
Cos the angels whispered "perfect"
When we got together

*Gem*
Copyright©GemmaStott2007

Can I reserve please??

For Kyo
By Yuna

I remember that day,
When I came home at last,
I was training in the mountains,
Time went by so fast.

I saw you for the first time,
You were a stranger to me,
But my mind was on that Yuki,
He was the one I had to beat.

That very same day,
I lost a fight to him again;
To that damn rat named Yuki,
I hate him like the rain.

As the days went by,
I was forced to go to school,
I should`ve flunked the entrance exams,
But I came out as the fool.

So many things have happened,
So many things have changed.
My whole world is not the same,
It really is quite strange.

I reunited with many cousins,
All of which were healed.
By the hand of your heart,
And the warmth of your kind soul.

My life has been a road block,
I don`t know where to go.
So much pain and agony,
That much I do know.

Many secrets I did keep,
Many stories left untold,
There`s no way I could share them,
There`s no way I`d be that bold.

I kept seeing your face,
As bright as the early sun.
My life became less violent,
You made it seem like fun.

But then that fateful day
When my shishou did arive,
The fear came crawling back,
I did not want to be alive.

You saw what I kept secret,
You saw my ugly self.
My true form may it be
Taken off a dusty shelf.

I thought that is was over,
I thought I had no chance,
But then you came toward me,
And offered me a glance.

Your face showed sadness;
Your eyes showed fear.
I felt so guilty
When you came near.

I couldn`t blame you,
As the rain came down.
But I was surprised,
When you came around.

I never thought it possible,
That I the cursed cat,
Could be healed by this person,
Just like that.

You told me something,
I shall never forget.
Let`s be together.
I don`t want to leave you yet.

That is when I realized,
My life no longer worthless.
I had someone who understood,
My pain, stress and loneliness.

I want to live with you forever,
That is my final vow,
To protect you with all my might,
Tohru, I shall.

|'ll love you always.
That`s the final truth.
Together forever.

Reserve!
Charisma*

Feel It Forever

Twenty years of innocence
Just got caught up in your stare.
How'd you catch my soul so quick
From simply standing there?

'Cause I'm locked in your blue eyes
All wrapped up in your smile.
Where did the time disappear?
I've been lost for a while.

Never felt so beautiful as when
You look at me like I'm a dream.
No doubts that this is sure to last
You're everything you seem.

I think that I'm falling in love
Is it possible that it's true?
Only been a few months for us
But feels like forever with you.

Oh, I could live with this feeling.
This is must be heaven on earth.
Just so I can keep it always....
I'll give you all that I'm worth.

By:Charisma*

Good luck to everyone!! ^_^

ANd I read these poems above me and they're all really good! Wow! I would have a hard time choosing!

Anyone there??? It's been a week now....