4 days - 5 spaces - awesome prize

  • lish
    17 years ago

    Okay heres the deal, I would like you to write me a poem about life, it may be your own life or maybe soneone elses.

    Due Date: 18th september

    Prizes
    1st - 10 r/r/c
    2nd - 8 r/r/c
    3rd - 6 r/r/c

    RESERVATIONS NESSACARY - FULL

    1. Beautiful Chaos
    2. *gem*
    3. xX||sandra||Xx
    4. ciao x3
    5. twisted heart
    6. Dhaval

    good luck

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    Giving Hope

    Inspired by the sunshine,
    A heart I'll find to warm,
    A desolate soul in need of help,
    To weather out this storm,

    I'll give my love so they may see,
    The world has not turned cold,
    I'll use my arms to hold them tight,
    Their pain wont be untold,

    I will not judge the things I hear,
    Or the destruction I do see,
    I'll do my best to make it known,
    They are important to me,

    I'll tell them of the single soul,
    That dwells within us all,
    Each being is connected,
    Though some ignore the call,

    I'll let them see the love I felt,
    I'll let them touch my pain,
    I'll tell them just how bad I'd feel,
    To never feel again,

    Bumps and bruises come in life,
    Sometimes our spirits shatter,
    But it is the trials in our time,
    That teach us what does matter.

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Reserve please

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Xx Life Is Short xX

    They say life is short
    And it happens in a flash
    So live life to the fullest
    And don't dwell on the past

    They say life is short
    And you never really know
    How long you've actually got left
    And when it's time to go

    They say life is short
    And you should be having fun
    And you should never look back
    On the mistakes you have done

    They say life is short
    And you only get one shot
    You will only have one chance
    So make do with what you've got

    They say life is short
    Well who the fcuk are they?
    Life's the longest thing I'm gonna do
    So I'm living my own way!!

    *Gem*
    Copyright©GemmaStott2007

  • Sandra D
    17 years ago

    Reserve please

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    Reserve me please

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    She Will Be Loved

    No more will I deal with this heart ache -
    It's time for one of us to have a heart break.
    I'm so done with being just second best to you;
    That's it, it's over; we are through.

    No more tears will I ever shed -
    No more countless hours laying awake on my bed.
    I can't do this anymore, it's not worth my time;
    I want someone better for me to call mine.

    Lies are usless for I have heard them all -
    You've hit rock bottom, where else is there to fall?
    You can pick up the pieces with someone new;
    Someone who may just be better for you.

    You're just not the boy I thought you could be -
    It took me too long, but now I finally see:
    I need so much more than you could ever give -
    This is not the life I really want to live.

    "She Wants To Be Loved" plays in the background -
    I know how it feels to want someone around.
    But I will not settle for less anymore -
    I don't want to just be some chore.

    Maybe one day, I'll be the one that is loved -
    And you will never be the one I'm thinking of.
    So goodbye, maybe you'll grow up and learn -
    That what you get is all that you earn.

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    Reserve please

    Thanks

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    Inspiration, Found Me Here
    By: Twisted Heart

    Inspiration has found me here
    Has tendered me with care
    My hopes and dreams have come so clear
    With comfort they are shared
    New moments rise upon the day
    Inside the soul they are displayed
    New moments rise
    New moments rise
    With sunshine trails upon the page

    With quill in hand, I scan my mind
    So many thoughts I see
    They come so fast each hope to find
    A way to be set free
    Inside my soul I reach for words
    Pen's scratch on scroll, is all that's heard
    Inside my soul
    Inside my soul
    A melody has come to birth.

    Sweet lullaby come tender ear
    Upon a heart's release
    Inside the mind I see it clear
    Among my thoughts it breathes
    A song of love, my heart it fills
    As ink now dries inside my quill
    A song of love
    A song of love
    A poet's tune, a life surreal.

  • swill
    17 years ago

    HAVE YOU EVER...

    Have you ever loved someone so much
    You’d give an arm for?
    And if one arm wasn’t enough
    Would you gladly sacrifice one more?

    Have you ever missed someone so intensely
    That you’d walk a thousand miles to reach her?
    And known that she would probably
    Just look at you and not come near?

    Have you ever heard the telephone tremble
    And prayed to god that it’s her call
    Only to hear someone else mumble
    And then wished that you could end it all?

    Have you ever spent sleepless nights
    Staring at the pitch black sky?
    And known that she must be sleeping tight
    With eyes unlike yours, sealed and dry?

    Have you ever apologized and prayed
    In spite of knowing that you were right?
    Just to make matters okay
    And watched them get worse, before your sight?

    If you have, you’d want to die
    So did I, but I soon realized
    That beyond these ominous clouds does lie
    The dazzling sun and hope and life

    Think beyond and you will know
    That joy feels good only after the pain
    How can you ever relish a rainbow
    Without passing through the rain?

    So stop wearing cuts on your sleeve
    And flaunt a smile upon your face
    All you need to do is believe
    And you’ll soon be in Hope’s warm embrace

    If you can live through the roughest days
    This game of life will indeed be won
    And Sir Kipling’s spirit shall rise and say
    “What’s more, you’re a MAN my son!”

  • lish
    17 years ago

    Scince sandra had unreserved her spot in the contest i am now able to announce the winners :)

    okayy in first place was
    1st - *gem* - this was exactially what i was looking for. the wording was brilliant the last parahgraph it awesome WELL DONE FREAKING AWESOME

    2nd - Beautiful chaos - this poem was realy well written again the last paragraph was my favourite excellent

    3rd - Twisted heart - This is a beautiful poem i really love it i love the way you wrote three stanzas with more than 4 lines in it i like the way you think too well done

    well done and thankyou to everyone who participated hope to hear more from u

    xx

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    Thanks so much Lish, much appreciated and way to go everyone. ANy titles that catch your eye would be fine, however I know some hate that answer so if you want me to leave you titles please PM me and I will.

  • Twisted Heart
    17 years ago

    Thank you so much for third place. Congrats to all as there were so many wonderful poems submitted.

    My 6 newest ones if you don't mind.

    again, thanks

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Oh my! I'm soo glad you liked it. I love contests like these, thats why i entered, i'm glad i did now, lol
    Thanks so much for the placing and congrats everyone else
    Just my ten latest if you'd be so kind.
    Thank you so much again!
    *Gem*