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Okay, I would like you people to help me title this poem I'm about to post. A title from each person, best title wins.

And since I feel a little bit guilty for receiving help and not compensating (does that sound silly?) :

Winner ~ 3 R/R/C

This will continue until I get 10 titles.

Here's the poem:

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Listen to the disastrous stories of another life ended
Be witness to another life everlastingly tainted
Forced to acknowledge another life has been ruined
And everyday, we ourselves will have to experience

Are we truly blessed for this sacred endowment?
Or should we consider ourselves perpetually cursed?
Are we unique for the complexity of our minds?
To be able to comprehend our world, to understand
Or should we resent those with simpler mentality?
Envious that they're not forsaken in this living hell?

Why are we forced to feel when it only causes misery?
When all it does is renounce a future promise of utopia?
Regardless of emotion, our existence will continue on
Others may provide you with brief support, comfort
But time passes by, and you are once again forgotten.

Copyright (c) Lainey
9/14/07

* To anyone who doesn't get it (Although you're all probably very intelligent people =D) this is about how emotions can be a negative thing in our world because it makes everything more difficult.

Hypothesis of a decayed world

Any more entries?

Tainted emotions

Blessed With a Curse

Spilled reality

Maybe -Lucid Malediction-

Room for 5 more entries. Please?

An Emotional Prision

Curse of Emotion or The Curses of Emotion

"Apathy and Oblivion"

Self Destruction

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These are all amazing titles but the one I thought really described this poem is:

Lucid Malediction {DarkSpirit}

PM me your titles.

Oh, wow, thanks!:] I am so happy, glad that you like it, I sending you p.m now.