Absolute challenge -ROUND 1- (titled)

CLOSED! NAMES OF THE ONES WHO WILL PROCEED TO THE NEXT ROUND AT THE BOTTOM!!!!

This is the first round of the Absolute challenge!
Next round won't be titled, but the first one is.

RULES:
- The poem must be new
- All poems should be entered till 09/28/07
- Maximum two titles per person
- Rhyming and form of the poems are optional
- Have fun!

PRISES:
- 10th place - 3 r/r/c
- 9th place- 5 r/r/c
- 8th place- 7 r/r/c
- 7th place- 10 r/r/c
- 6th place- 12 r/r/c
- 5 th place- 15 r/r/c
- 4th place- 18 r/r/c
- 3rd place- 20 r/r/c
- 2nd place- 23 r/r/c
- 1st place- 25 r/r/c

Reserved TITLES
2. Bloody tango- Rex Hunter- Done
3. Countdown- NIClean- Done
6. Last whispers- Blank Illusion- Done
7. Muse's haunt- Sherry Lynn- Done
8. Concepts of reality- Brittney Schmelter- Done
9. Poisoned kisses- Poetic Genius- Done
11. Melody of cursed- Gabriella- Done
12. Gray sky- Single bullet revolver
13. Master of dreams- Dixidasy- Done
14. A key to my soul- NyellMoonlight
15. Welcome back- Rex Hunter- Done
19. Hurricane of chaos- xXx SeCrEt WiSh xXx- Done
20. Illusive gates- NyellMoonlight
21. Petals of love- Willow- Done
22. God's reflection- Blank Illusion- Done
25. Beauty of her/his eyes- Gabriella- Done
26. Visions in flames- Simple sensation
27. Twisted mind- ReproducedByIntelligence- Done
28. Keys made of words- Painted Persona- Done
30. They called her "Darkness"- My Decadent
23. Wings laced with bullets- Slave To The Music- Done
29. Rebel's story- Raveena
17. Library of existence- Decay In The Dark- Done
16. House without a home- Finalgravedigger- Done
5. Nymph's oaths- Andrea Sunny- Done
39. Beautiful destruction- Beautiful Chaos- Done
24. Necklace of trust- Poetic Genius- Done
33. Breathe the world- HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG- Done
44. She was an angel- IwishIwasWithyou- Done
36. Festival of phantoms- BittersweetDecay
32. Screams of harpies- BittersweetDecay
43. On the throne of death- My Decadent- Done
34. Heartbeat- Dixiedaisy- Done
35. Depression entwined with smiles- HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
40. Apocalyptic kisses- kira2- Done
41. Orb of hope- Simple Sensation- Done
37. Sounds of fantasies- Vanilla
1. Spiritual dance- Deadboy- Done
10. Confessions of the grenades- I R Jordannn- Done
18. Smiles of trees- kira2- Done
38. Curse painted with prosperity-TheEcstasyOfSuicide- Done
4. A temple of lies- Decay in the dark- Done

Unreserved TITLES:
42. Star's hymn
31. Different
45. Ocean of missed chances

I'll add more titles if there are too many people interested! I am very happy because this challenge has so many participators! 15 of you will go in to the next(second) round!
Enjoy!

I want "A key to my soul" and "Illusive gates". Great titles, by the way :)

Petals of Love

Master of Dreams please

' They called her "Darkness" ', please. Thank you.

I will try Muse's Haunt

--Sher

Gray sky would be bloody fantastic.
Lovely titles, by the way. It was quite hard to choose.

Can i reserve two and by Sunday ill come back and unreserve one? Or i might do both... I cant decide between them!

- Spiritual dance
- Visions in flames

I love your titles by the way. :)

x

Could i have melody of cursed and beauty in his eyes???

You post your poem here and you can submit it on your poem page if you want to!

Twisted Mind.

Beware thy follower of thy awful mess,
that's laid upon your colored doorstep.
With minds made up, that ought've not lost
the dreams once held, burdened by cost.

And, though thy mind of selfish rubble
lies beneath thy horrible trouble..
the feelings of hope that mind my soul,
have created a path of purety and gold.

With thy life you've left to me,
I ought not fear what that might be.
A dream made once, fulfilled by twice..
has ruined thy awful twisted mind.

Though no sense has come from this,
with horrid english and horrid lisp..
I ask my soul to find the way
in the world of trouble gone astray.

- - - -
It's meant to be written this way. There are mistakes and parts that do not make sense, but that is how it is suppose to be written. [[From a 'twisted mind']]

Hopefully you get the point, though.

I reserve Concepts of Reality

Concepts of Reality

Cinderella walked on shoes of glass.
My shoes are dirty and worn with age.
Sleeping Beauty slept some time pass.
But I have to endure each painful day.

Belle fell in love with a hideous beast.
I fell in love with a man I can't have.
Pocahontas risked her life for peace.
I risked my heart and soul for nothing.

Jasmine could have had anyone...
But instead she chose a poor man.
I wish I could have fallen for another.
But my fate was set at first glance.

Ariel the mermaid, walked on the shore.
Her dream came true, but mine won't.
Fairy tales are lies and nothing more.
These are the stupid Concepts of Reality.

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My friend Mireya never seems to end with her quotes. Again (like my poem "Into My Head") she asked me to write it on a quote.

"Cinderella walked on broken glass.
Sleeping Beauty let a whole lifetime pass.
Belle fell in love with a hideous beast.
Pocahontas risked her life for a feast.
Jasmine could have anyone
but instead choose a poor man.
And Ariel walked on land."

I changed the quote a little. But she loved it :)

Copyright Brittney Schmelter

Reserve me hurricane of chaos, please and thank you.

I think I should be able to get this one in =]
So can I please have "wings laced with bullets"
If I finish that one i'll definitly have another title if that's ok with you. Thankyou.

Btw I loved all titles.

-Wings Laced With Bullets-

Wings laced with bullets now drenched with blood,
Please forgive them lord for there souls have flood,
Once bright blue eyes placed upon sweetest face,
Though they will not hold you in comforting embrace
Do not look upon them with such looks of disgrace,
Forgive them lord for they have fallen from grace.

Blazed within fire though hearts drenched with ice,
Surrounded by danger for the sweet lust of entice,
Tattered and torn from breathing flames of toxic air,
Forbidden love for saintan will the world declare,
As the saints of gods kingdom say a quite prayer,
Demonic and angelic combine in deathly affair.

Wings became laced with bullets drenched with blood,
Please forgive them lord for there souls did flood,
Once bright blue eyes placed upon sweetest face,
Though they will never again hold comforting embrace
So now we look upon them with a look of disgrace,
As the lord can not forgive them for falling from grace.

Hey! I'll reserve Library of existence..

Petals of Love (Etheree)
By Willow

love
lasting
a lifetime
two hearts as one
beginning as teens
growing old together
bubbling with happiness
sharing their life with family
and now she reminisces as she
scatters petals of love upon his grave

House without a home

Beautiful Destruction please

Beautiful Destruction

An angels lips,
A whispered kiss,
Softly covered,
Lies you miss.

It all falls around me now,
Dreams we have forgot,
Everything we left behind,
Stars we never caught.

If my ears could hear no sound,
We'd fall into forever,
But I'm not blind, nor am I deaf,
We're heading straight for never.

No more trust and hope is gone,
The walls are falling down,
I hope I find my way back up,
Please don't let me drown.

Emotions swimming in the mire,
Your eyes are all I see,
Deceitful orbs so beautiful,
Destruction had to be.

A flood of flame, we turn to ash,
No phoenix of rebirth,
A scorch within the sands of time,
For all we were not worth.

But oh those lips and eyes that sing,
Burned within my mind,
Devastating beauty,
Where evil lay confined.

33. Breathe the world, please. :]

31. Different
and
45. Ocean of missed chances

please!

You certainly picked some really cool titles =) I didn't think that I'd do this but I'm going to lols Could I please have "She was an angel"? I think I could come up with something for that one lols
Rhea

Hi ^^. Can i have Festival of phantoms and Screams of harpies please? Thank you so much. Great contest btw.

"On the Throne of Death" Please.
Thank you.

My I also reserve a second title please? "Heartbeat" if you will. Thank You

Hi
Can I have apocalyptic kisses?
THANKS

Apocalyptic Kisses

What you and I had was love in its splendor
A touch that began so sweet and tender
Moments later, we craved and we burned
The more we touched, the more we yearned
Lips soft; gently biting
Hearts racing; love exciting
Your strong hands on my skin
Made me burn within
You looked into my eyes and smiled
Your kisses were driving me wild
Kissing me harder our excitement gained
Our kissing became wildly unrestrained
Suddenly we exploded in apocalyptic kisses
Passion so strong our bodies became listless
We lied quietly for hours trembling and drained
Our love so strong, could it be retained?

I think I want to try Stars Hymn as well, please. :]

I would like to reserve, "Depression entwined with smiles" please.

I'm not sure if i will be able to do this but i will try my best to finish it on time.

Ok so i can have two poems yeah?

Ok can i unreserve "Spiritual dance" please?

And then can i keep "Visions in flames" and reserve as my secound poem "Orb of hope"

Ive got idea's forming for both of these. Hopefully ill have them submitted soon!

x

Can you please PM me if some more titles become available.
*Gem*

*******She was an Angel******

She was an angel
sent down to earth,
the most beautiful creature created
this angel in human form.

Long silken hair made of purest gold,
alabaster skin so smooth,
gentle, passionate eyes of green,
an angel in everyway.

She came to this earth to heal and save,
help the homeless and guide the lost,
give strength to the soldier fighting
and courage to the single mom
determined to make it alone.

This breathtaking creature, our angel
does her very best for us all
but sadly shes slowly passing away
as us mortals slowly lose sight
of whats most important in life.

You see, this angel is the angel of Love
and love has lost it's importance
in this world that we now live in,
the word love is used to little
and yet said way to much.

The only way to save this beauty
is for the people of the world to care,
to look around and help eachother,
don't judge but accept and love.

*Not one of my best ones but it works lols
Rhea*

Melody of cursed

the rippling of an old song's tune
spinning hauntingly in sound
the tempted hearts and twisted minds
all craving what they've found

the melody like hissing snakes
hypnotizing in their stare
entranced are all who listen
as they stop from what is fair

the grins and bloodthirsty screams
only a reflection of the truth
the twisting, turning sound of life
now like the sharpest tooth

stained with every lust and thought
as crimson petals fall
the rose burst open into blood
the darkest of them all

they turn their faces to it's thorns
ecstatic with every pain
for them, the wounds no longer hurt
they fall softly as if rain

the terror of the innocent
turned into mourning flames
the men kill their own families
oblivious of their shames

the games of war they carry out
like cursed children of the night
singing their horrific melody
no memory of what is right

and crimson petals fall from far
as well as leaves of white
symbols of the innocent
tormented by light

This look like a cool contest =)

So beautiful was my sunrise
the dusty color of your eyes
but soon they turned to shards of glass
misery in their melodious laugh
why do I now feel betrayed?

Fallen i have on the side of the street
the bubbles of blood for each heartbeat
iridescent rainbows floating high
I can only yearn for the sky
even my wings leave me behind

My mouth nothing but a whispered thought
laughter is forgotten as well as for what I fought
from this battle there has been no gain
oh why does it hurt, this pain?
I thought love was like a song

Why can't I hear the call of birds?
the only relief from your words
like a harsh wind in the silence
how can you hurt me without violence?
a puppet on a string

A neverending fence of barbed wire
surrounds me, burning red with fire
I've trapped myself in my own mind
or was it you? memory I cannot find
all I know is that I cry

Insanity of broken smiles
the bliss of darkness for awhile
eternal game of hide and seek
please don't find me, do not peek
I hide in my own shadow

A flowing beauty of dark brown
in your eyes only I can drown
my tortured mind immune to lies
how beautiful is the sunrise
a dark hole in the sky

May i please have
Smiles of trees?

Smiles of Trees

Lying still under the oak
In the woods, you and I
Love so pure, so strong
Indescribable, though, I try

We talk for hours
Comfortable in our skin
We dream of the future
In awe of the love within

We compare pictures in the clouds
Happy in this childlike state
Then we lay silent
Quietly wondering what is our fate

Hours go bye, a chill in the air
The clouds darken and stir up a breeze
The day almost over sadness sets in
Then looking up we discover the smiles of trees

On the Throne of Death
By My Decadent

Cry - your tears are the river that feeds my insatiation
Lie - your suffering is the road to my eliberation
Deny - your twisted mind feeds blackness to my imagination
Die - your decadent soul is the key to my salvation.

On the throne of Death I served so well,
Leader of horrors no one would ever tell,
Standing up for my fiends, fighting for my belief -
I am the demon that feeds upon your grief.

Day by day and night by night
I severed angels in their flight
And Heaven cried as angels sung
Like tattered rag-dolls hung.

On the throne of Death I ruled them all,
Catching wretched sinners in their anguished fall,
No man nor demon, no devil nor god dared to
Question my decisions, for reasons all knew.

Cry - your tears are the river that feeds my insatiation
Lie - your decadent soul is the key to my salvation
Deny - your twisted mind feeds blackness to my imagination
Die - this is just the beginning of a demon's confession.