Just a Warning

This is simply a warning, if you read my new poem, I was NOT targeting any individual. If you need to know what its called its "This is You" ..you'll either love it, or hate it.

ciao.

I read the poem and I thought it was honestly expressed and was very well written. However, the comment at the end of the poem seemed to convey an air of arrogance. I think that it was also superfluous.
Fwiw, just my own 2¢.

your 2 cents are cool, i kinda wanted the arrogance, i just get tired of seeing people on this site give people a score they dont deserve because of their reputation, or because they know the person will return the favor.

and i changed that part at the end, guess i'm in a better mood now. or maybe it was your pointing that out to me, idk. well peace.

Well thanks for sharing your thoughts on this. I don't always expect what I say to be accepted. But offering advice can be frustrating because people often seem to resent it. I had some further thought on voting and commenting in another thread at the URL below, in case you're interested.
Cheers. --Lydia

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=9276

oh yeah i read what you said in there already, i was about to say the same thing, but just decided to say something else to avoid repeating what you had already said. if that makes any sense at all.