Match Me!

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    RESULTS!!!!!

    The final five moving on the next round entitled MatchMaker are

    xXx SeCrEt WiSh xXx
    aDORKable x3
    Gabriella
    HOLLYWOODXBANGXBANG
    I R Jordannn

    NEW CHANGES AT BOTTOM!!!!

    So I like Blissful Torture's idea of letting others use my title for their own poem. I want to see what you can come up with.
    There will be 2 Rounds. 20 can join this round, but only ten will move on to round two. Then the final three will be decided.

    Here are the rules:
    No cussing (no hell, or damn either!)
    No religion (even if you're just saying he's going to heaven or something...because that's still according to YOUR belief)
    No sexuality. NONE!
    No cutting, suicide, or murder.
    One poem per poet, two poets per title.
    MUST RESERVE!!!

    As a hint, I've been in a sad poem mood, or a sad love poem mood. And I prefer RHYME!

    Here are the first ten titles

    That Kind of Girl
    * HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG DONE
    * I R Jordannn (reserved)

    Dirtied Up Memories
    * HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG DONE
    *

    I Feel Like a Sad Song
    * Beautiful Chaos (DONE)
    * aDORKable x3 (DONE)

    I Won't Forget What I Never Had
    * ReproducedByIntelligence (DONE)
    * NyellMoonlight (DONE)

    I Miss You a Little
    * Hey Brittknee (reserved)
    *

    Losing Grip
    *HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    *

    Almost Asked You to Lie
    *HollywoodxBANGBANG (reserved)
    *xXx SeCrEtWiSh xXx (DONE)

    The One You Forgot
    * YouMakeMeSmilexXxHatori (reserved)
    * Gabriella (DONE)

    Every Time I Cry
    * gabriella (DONE)
    *

    Thunderstorm Tears
    * SecludedSerendipity (DONE)
    *

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    I won't forget what I never had, please.

    (:

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    I Feel Like A Sad Song please

  • Hey Brittknee
    17 years ago

    I miss you a little

  • Nix
    17 years ago

    Can I write non-rhyming poem?

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    I Won't Forget What I Never Had for me, please :)

  • Hatori
    17 years ago

    "The one you forgot" Si vous plait (<--I hope I spelt that right) I'm in a french mood x.x

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    You can write non-rhyming as I do too, but it's just that I tend to prefer the rhymes so I gave you the heads up. As to Hatori, lol, i have no idea if that's correct in french or not, but I wouldn't suggest writing it in french in the poem seeing as I'm not fluent in that language! LOL!
    Keep em coming everyone!

    DEADLINE IS NOW POSTED!
    Charisma*

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    How many can we write?
    Lol, I`m seeing a lot that I like

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Nevermind, see it now lol.

    Almost Asked You To Lie, please. :]

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Almost asked you to lie. thanking you. <3

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Every time i cry! thanking you. <3

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Every time i cry! thanking you. <3

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Every time i cry! thanking you. <3

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Every time i cry! thanking you. <3

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Every time i cry! thanking you. <3

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Every time i cry! thanking you. <3

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Every time i cry! thanking you. <3

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    Why on earth did it post your message so many times????
    Anyways, you can only have one title, so which would you like?
    Charisma*

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Uuugh sorry. I did that on my phone and it kept ******* up.
    Let's try this again.
    I would like Almost asked you to lie, please and thank you!

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Almost Asked You To Lie

    Glaring morosely at the walls
    Bitter tears appearing on these cheeks
    Used to be content, so euphoric
    Now this heart constantly weeps

    Every night when laying in your arms
    Softly whispering in my ear, "love you,"
    Now every single second I'm wondering
    Do you say the same words to her to?

    It's true you've finally been caught
    Now know of your lies and cheating ways
    Not sure that I'm strong enough to cope
    Now I think we should call it a day

    You've been stringing me along all this time
    Now I'm waiting for you to come back home
    Worked up the courage to confront you
    Trying to convince myself, I'm better of alone

    Strolling through the door hours later
    As the "I missed you," lie spills from your lips
    Staring into your coffee brown eyes
    Losing focus, I'm slowly starting to slip

    As you lean in close for a hug
    Smelling her perfume on your skin
    Anger claws his way into my soul
    Rage and misery tearing at me within

    Asking you where you've been
    Almost asking you to smile and lie
    So I can believe in love once more
    Instead of knowing this is goodbye.

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    I Feel Like A Sad Song please. :]

  • aDORKable x3
    17 years ago

    I Feel Like A Sad Song

    I feel like a sad sad song,
    Where everyone knows the words;
    Where emotion can be plainly felt
    And the heartache is never cured.
    I feel like the streams of tears,
    The ones falling down your face,
    The memories of your past
    That could never be erased.
    I feel like a broken melody,
    Where each note is wrong.
    I feel like the story behind the scenes,
    I Feel Like A Sad Song.

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    I Feel Like A Sad Song

    Melting through my skin,
    Sinking to the bone,
    No melody is deeper,
    Than the one which we have grown.

    I hear it everyday,
    Ringing in my ears,
    Every night I go to sleep,
    It drips out with my tears.

    Tear stained sheets and restless nights,
    Filled with such sad song,
    Singing of the love you'll miss,
    How now you don't belong.

    Cast out in the world alone,
    Where tragic rhythms jive,
    Where fire eats the night away,
    Afraid you won't survive.

    You've felt the flames lick your skin,
    But never quite like this,
    Love has thrown you on the coals,
    You burn in the abyss.

    A den of blatant misery,
    Where sad songs come to life,
    Trapped inside your twisted mind,
    Cutting like a knife.

  • Teria
    17 years ago

    I won't forget what I never had.

    Lullaby's replay within,
    deeping created sin.
    Forgotten memories,
    haunt all dark seas.
    With forgotten dreams,
    that've ripped at the seams

    With words that fail to complete my mind,
    I find it so much easier to be able to find..
    What I felt for you was nothing to brag.
    Since, I won't forget what I never had.

    - - - -
    Surely not my best.
    LOL. :|

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    17 years ago

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  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    Reserve everytime i cry please.

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    Everytime I cry

    As each godforsaken tear
    rolls down my face
    only leaving behind
    a bloody trace
    these words i cannot say
    fall from my tongue
    memories of how
    life is young.

    Because everytime i cry
    you'd smile at me
    when i longed to fly
    you'd tell me i'm free
    but now there's nothing left
    an empty hole
    no warmth engulfs me now
    the world is cold

    my hands reach out to touch
    a you that no longer is
    you gave me a little hope
    but not enough to live
    i wish i could remember
    the way your eyes could see
    the way they would pierce through everything
    and finally found me

    with you, i learned to smile
    with you i learned to laugh
    but now you're gone forever
    my happiness has past
    everytime i cry
    i look up at the stars
    searching for you up there
    wondering if you see me too, wherever you are

    i don't remember how to smile
    but maybe i will try
    because that's the gift you gave me
    everytime i'd cry
    maybe i can save someone
    just like you did me
    because when it's all done and over
    with you, i can be free.

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    *I won't forget what I never had*

    Through all cracks in the wall,
    metamorphosed into staring eyes
    misty reflections fill the room
    with alluring, passionate crystals.
    I won't forget what I never had,
    between walls of injustice and confusion,
    in the world painted gray,
    ornamented by sarcastic glistens.

    Soulless body shadowed steps
    into unknown; so familiar yet empty.
    Amnesia walked through stoned halls,
    releasing drum beats and disguised pain.
    I won't forget what I never had
    under the black, lucky star;
    wrong time and place, indeed
    spoiled with masks and shattered rainbows.

  • dollwithafrown
    17 years ago

    "Thunderstorm Tears", please. :]

  • dollwithafrown
    17 years ago

    Thunderstorm Tears
    by SecludedSerendipity

    A trickle of tear glosses my skin;
    The rain outside has started.
    It flows so strong; I cannot stop,
    I've been left so broken hearted.

    I cannot help but scream out loud;
    The thunder has surely began.
    This boy that I once loved so strong,
    He took my heart and ran.

    I lie in bed, and refuse to move;
    The skies above are grey.
    The storm is slowly moving,
    Yet my pain won't go away.

    I'm trying to go on, being strong,
    But this boy took what was mine.
    I've lost my heart, but I'll get it back,
    And once again the sun will shine.

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    Deadline has been changed for any last minute takers. If any of you would like to enter another poem, that's fine. No need to reserve. I'm open to more as long as it's one of the titles. And it follows the rest of the rules.
    Hope to see more takers!
    Charisma*

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    So we can do more than one now?

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    Yep have at it!
    Charisma*

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Caaaaan we have more than
    two? Lmao

  • *Charisma*
    17 years ago

    Whatever!!!! lol No restrictions on how many!
    Charisma*

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    Ok, can i do 'Dirtied Up Memories'

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    Can i also reserve 'the one you forgot'

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    The one you forgot

    So lonely
    this coldness, it burns
    like fire in my soul
    yet freezing over my heart.

    You hurt me
    I cannot see, this film of broken innocence
    shading my eyes from the nightmare
    the horrible dream of reality

    A puzzle
    a mismatch of black and white
    no color is left in my world
    a world cold and clear as ice

    Like mirrors
    with every turn I see myself
    but it's just the me i used to know
    not the skeleton that's left, the memory haunting me.

    Whispers of heartache
    like silent cries of longing
    i only realized that they come from me
    the one you left behind

    Yes, you left me
    abandoned on the shadow of a road
    eternal solitude as i watched your car drive
    away from me, yet it took me with you.

    I walk alone
    trembling in this vast emptiness
    no longer smiling on the inside
    for I have no one to keep me warm

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Oh man, this is gonna be intense now lol
    ermmm,
    I got loads of time tonight to write,
    so I`ll try to get some done.
    BUT, can I also reserve:
    Dirtied Up Memories,
    That Kind of Girl
    Losing Grip

    and I`m <not>
    sure if I will yet,
    but I might try
    Thunderstorm Tears
    and
    Everytime I Cry.

    Dunno about those 2 yet lol