The colour contest (Good prizes)

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    Ok, so here it goes im going to pick some colours and they must be included in a poem.

    *Rules*

    1. 2 people per colour
    2. Must be new
    3. Try and make it a happy poem.
    4. As many colours as you like

    *Prizes*

    6th place: 7r/r/c
    5th place: 8 r/r/c
    4th place: 9 r/r/c
    3rd place: 10 r/r/c
    2nd place: 15 r/r/c
    1st place: Aiming to r/r/c All of their poetry + On my favourites.

    so here are the colours choose wisely

    Pink
    1.
    2.

    Red
    1. Pete (Done)
    2.

    Green
    1.
    2.

    Yellow
    1.
    2.

    Orange
    1.
    2.

    Hazel
    1. I Just Called to Say I Love You (done)
    2.

    Brown
    1.
    2.

    Blue
    1. Painted Persona (reserved)
    2. xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex (done)

    Purple
    1.
    2.

    Gold
    1.
    2.

    Silver
    1.
    2.

    peach
    1.
    2.

    Indigo
    1.
    2.

    Violet
    1.
    2.

    There was a reason i didnt put black in, bacause its a sad colour :( Try your best and good luck, you can reserve or just post it.

    *You can include more than one colour but the first colour must be your chosen colour :D *

    * The poem does NOT have to be about the colour *

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    Does the color just have to be in the poem, or does the poem have to be about the color?

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • Pete
    17 years ago

    Bleh, i gave it a go!

    Was unsure what to write, so a huge bunch of garbage came out! HeeHee!

    See below.

  • Pete
    17 years ago

    The Colour Of Love

    Its colours that make you,
    So bright, So bold.
    That's why I love you,
    My colours you hold.

    Cheeks rosy and red,
    So pure, So real.
    Your face in my head,
    My heart that you steal.

    Eyes like a sunset,
    So calm, So mellow.
    Intensified reds,
    With orange and yellow.

    Hair like it's autumn,
    So soft, So flowing.
    Brown tipped with auburn,
    Your best colours are showing.

    Lips made for my kiss,
    So supple, So pink.
    With colours like this,
    It's hard just to think.

    Share my heart and mind?
    I will, I do!
    I live for the times,
    That your colours shine through.

    ~Pete.

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    The colour has to be in the poem. Doesnt have to be about the colour xxx alex xxx

  • Pete
    17 years ago

    Painted People:
    You can take as many colours as you like - says so at the top. There doesn't seem to be a due date as yet, so i expect yours in 50 minutes, please and thankyou.
    Muhaha! <(Evil laugh)

  • Pete
    17 years ago

    I wanted to do one with two colors in it. I mean is that understandable?
    Yes, perfectly. I think i used 5 colours in my poem above.

    Am I crazy??
    100% off your rocker, but I'm sure you were already aware of that.

    Just whack a load of old colours into your poem, I want at least 3 in it please! HeeHee!

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    Lol, you can use more than one colour but the first mentioned must be the chosen colour so i can define which one you chose :D if that makes sense XD

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    I'll take blue, but in the poem it says "Neon blue".. same thing, though.
    I'll have it posted in a few days.. it's just a matter of typing it up. ^^

    xox
    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • Avrii Monrielle
    17 years ago

    (My color: Hazel)

    ----

    Beth's Eyes
    by Kristi H.

    Swirling bursts of beautiful colors,
    Cluttered amongst each other,
    To the fullest extent, where they,
    Have a place they can stay.

    Your orbs sparkle as you laugh;
    Oh, those beautiful, shining lamps!
    They illuminate the darkest sky...
    Oh, how they they brighten the saddest smile!

    Hazel -- what a traumatic name!
    This word alone could never explain,
    The glow from within your shining brightness,
    Glittering, glistening, almost causing blindness!

    A light, pale sky blue on the inside lay,
    Glistening amber lines the pupil's fray.
    The foamiest sea green on the widest out,
    A blanket of beauty that has its own shout!

    The blue sky swims with the sea's green bay,
    Orange encumbers past amber's small lay,
    Then a slight purple haze does align...
    Releasing bright red, gold, and green armine!

    The colors do settle, and a soft, light gray cloud,
    Takes it sweet toll and mixes the colors around.
    In fact, I do notice, in their own sweet way,
    Your gaze is less hazel, more a colored array!

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    Yes you can have any colours in the poem :D Just have your chosen colour first

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    Holding On Is What I'd Like To Do, But It's Just Not For Me

    The air's so clear, I can see your smile through the burning particles -
    You can beg me to stay, but the heat is becoming uncomfortable to me.
    These gases are burning my throat, and the air is fearfully testing my eyes.
    The lamp lights are blinking a little too frighteningly for the first night and the air taste free.

    Your lips are almost to mine, closer they lean, but should we shrug away (just encase)?
    When my eyes can read the nitrogen in the air surrounding us, and I can no longer breathe -
    These stars are prickling our imagination and they're casting us new beliefs;
    You can beg me to stay, but the heat is becoming uncomfortable to me.

    I could only hope there lays a lie - I couldn't stand to fall in love -
    Something like warmth surrounds my shoulders, but I wasn't sure it was you.
    Those elements sparkle like your hands dancing into mine - tricky, but oh so enjoyable,
    And I'm frightened by what the blue neons are murmuring, "love is lost and time is few."

    The air's so clear, I can see your smile through the burning particles -
    You can beg me to stay, but the heat is becoming uncomfortable to me.
    These gases are burning my throat, and the air is fearfully testing my eyes.
    The lamp lights are blinking a little too frighteningly for the first night and the air taste free.

    If your skin touches mine, I might be okay with it - why don't you try,
    Universes away red nova's are bursting just like our hearts are tending to do,
    And the particles are whining as they burn into us, molding us into one;
    I wonder if you're still there - by my side, beneath the stars - even though I'm touching you.

    All the universe gathers around - perhaps their jealous of our communication
    With a morality of being a little less proper and a bit more . . .
    You'll have to lean a little closer - I'd kiss your ear and the more you heard.

    If you whisper into my ear, with crisp lights between our cheeks, I'll want to shudder closer,
    But the light burns brighter to say, "It's too dangerous! Now is your chance to flee."
    The air's so clear, I can see your eyes through the burning particles;
    I'll admit, "Holding on is what I'd like to do, but it just isn't for me."

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    17 years ago

    I wanted to make sure you could see this:
    My poem is "depressing" and you post says, "'try' to make me happy" is my poem alright, or should I reserve another color for a happy poem? I have one I just posted today that would work.

    ^^

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    Yep, you can have any genre of poem it's ok. xxx alex xxx

  • Avrii Monrielle
    17 years ago

    Me=happy & excited ^^

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    Ok, i think this will be cancelled as not enough people entered, i will give one more day. If i should stop the contest then all the people who entered will get 6 r/r/c as to be fair :D

    xxx alex xxx