A rough night

Can someone please read my newest poem a rough night and comment or whatever. If you do i will read/comment on your poems, maybe not immediately but i'll wait til i'm in a reading mood and you will get the best feedback ever.
Thanx heaps.
*Incognito*
p.s. It's a short poem and though its under sad poems it isn't very serious.

I left you a comment and voted... that was an awesome poem!
-Cheerfully Cynical

Thanx, just popping over to visit urs now. :)