Some Random Contest

  • Nix
    17 years ago

    CLOSED!!!! RESULTS WILL BE POSTED SOON!

    RULES:
    - You can enter two poems
    - Doesn't matter if it's new or old
    - No explicit poems, please.
    - Closing date is November the 3rd.

    JUDGING:
    I'll rate each poem from 1- 10 (the rating will be based on my personal taste, the wording, imagery and uniqueness of the piece) and everyone gets the numbers of comments equal to the ratings of their poems.
    For example- if your poem gets 7, you'll get seven comments.

    Have fun!

  • Pete
    17 years ago

    Curiosity

    On a beautiful, sun kissed, autumn morn',
    Tracks of others seen on soft dewy lawn.
    Jolted movement seen through fallen leaves.
    The thrill of a hunt was enough just to please.

    Head says to wait, heart wanting to charge,
    Destiny defined you'd be a predator at large.
    Unsure on approach; you take one tentative pause.
    You've razor sharp teeth and ten surgical claws.

    Super sharp senses, now approaching your prey.
    You're stalking your quarry so it won't run away.
    Wanting. No. Needing to know what's through there.
    Heightened hearing mixed with a steely stare.

    Sneaky stealth courses through speedy feet.
    Knowing full well your enemy will be beat.
    Only yards away your anticipation rises.
    You and you alone are the king of surprises.

    Muscles tense up, ready for the imminent kill,
    This type of precision attack is your ancestral skill.
    Decisions click into place. It's time for the rush.
    One almighty pounce, you push through the bush.

    You claw nothing but air as you land on your feet.
    Stuck, stranded in the middle of the street.
    There's nothing to kill and nothing to chase.
    Just huge, metal animals engaged in a race.

    Hissing loudly as you collide with the beast,
    No more anticipation, this hunt has ceased.
    At the "snap" of bone, you know you're beat.
    Pain caresses your carcass like a deep soulful heat.

    You hear your name called, not knowing where.
    She softly strokes your thick blood matted hair.
    You see masters face, feel her hand and her breath.
    You're purring away as you give in to your death.

    ~Pete.

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    Exellent idea, I shall post some poems... Just going to choose first :D xxx alex xxx

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    Look Through My Eyes

    Slaughtered; In a constant daze,
    How the hell did she end up like this?
    Nobody noticed, understood
    Couldn't read the signs that you missed.

    Happiness came, happiness went,
    Only now its written to you clear.
    An A-B-C structure simple enough?
    When sadness drew you went near.

    For goodness sake try to visualize,
    How she felt when you fought,
    You screamed and shouted at each other,
    Forgetting the ones that you loved.

    Look through my eyes now,
    Wheres she gone? Your little girl.
    Disappeared through her silence
    Your arguing became her world.

    Little brother asking for his mummy
    Too busy fighting down stairs.
    She goes to confront them,
    Theres only so much a girl can bare.

    Thats it enough time to confront
    Them her heart decides,
    That angry look dominating her face
    Now you look through my eyes.

    She screams she shouts she yells,
    For gods sake stop acting like this!
    Too busy acting like stupid children
    To leave fantasy and face what the reality is.

    One day you might understand,
    The psychological impact it had,
    Depression, suicidal, catastrophic,
    How quickly a life went from good to bad.

    I bet your surprised now however,
    For now there are no more cries.
    Shes able to stand bigger than you,
    Now look through my eyes.

    A constant smile is across my face,
    I am now grateful for what I get.
    True love, a job, a life of smiles
    On my past I shall not fret.

  • Choose xX Alex Xx Life
    17 years ago

    Somewhere Only We Know

    '6:10', The exact time it happened
    As you wept on your knees by her bed.
    Room fell silent as the monitor stopped
    Doctor announced her death.

    Your grandmother, your world,
    The one who you loved the most.
    Was there whenever you needed a smile,
    Now the one you have lost.

    You begged them to save her 'PLEASE'
    Couldn't bare to be alone,
    Swung your arm around me, 'Shh, babe close your eyes,
    And find somewhere only we know.

    Our world. A lifeline which blocks out pain.
    Tears made me soaking wet,
    Swallowing your sadness in love and care
    For I am all you have left.

    But whatever you do don't smother me,
    For fate is inevitable for life
    'To die you first have to live my love' I spoke,
    'Still a lot has happened tonight'.

    At home you sob yourself to sleep,
    Whispering ' I love you ' as you go,
    Laying down next to you entering the world
    Of somewhere only we know.

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    17 years ago

    Diamond Grace

    Diamond Grace
    Such a pretty name,
    Matching a beautiful face
    It's truly a shame
    that behind her name,
    is lies and hatred and disgrace

    Grace in itself is only a lie
    the surname of a family
    that makes the world cry
    with a dead-beat father
    and a drug addict mother
    no one pretends to bother
    about the poor girl
    or her younger brother

    She is divine, just like her name
    She should shine, her lights in fame
    Little girl should be a star
    But her family won't let her go far
    Family business- sell their daughter's soul
    Family business- turn her heart stone cold
    Selling her innocence, she's an underground star
    just a child, yet she's supporting them all
    with her dirty deeds, she's dug her self deep
    every night with another man she sleeps
    and with her little brother she weeps
    because already he is forced
    to go down this lonely course
    a path to nowhere,
    where no body cares
    or is ever there.

    Little Diamond Grace
    With a pretty name
    to match a pretty face
    But where her heart should lie
    is only an empty space

  • Lauren Waszkiewicz
    17 years ago

    Blood's Sweet Toxicity

    Running through the forest at midnight,
    Atmosphere black as pitch
    No moon or stars are out tonight,
    Ready for the fight for your life?

    Now the prey in the hunt, he should have known
    That such a soul should have be left alone.
    Smell sickly sweet that odor? Lying on your breath?
    Thats the tragic scent, of forbidden love's death.

    Verboten love's tantalizing kiss.
    Has left you in a troublesome abyss.
    Protection now, is what you miss.
    All from a simple, yet deadly kiss.

    Vampyric blood flows through your soul
    Do not fight it, 'tis what makes you whole
    One which thrives, in the darkest of night,
    Should not try, to be a fool of the light.

    How asinine, Darling you have been.
    Foolish, desperate Vampyric child.
    Pretending to be a normal human within,
    When in fact you are immortal, sinful, and wild.

    Now you've let go of your insecurities,
    and realized humans are simply impurities
    So from the thrill of the chase feel true felicity
    and taste the kiss of blood's sweet toxicity

  • Prophecies In Kodak
    17 years ago

    Take This To Heart

    These nights, i've found patience in bottles at half mass
    while humming a tune that's something for someone's sake.
    you havent seen trying till you raise up your hands now,
    and once again, the perfect thing is ruined by the snake.
    eden must have been as fair as you yourself are i'd say
    and i crave for just a small taste of the fight that's in you.
    i feel like this taut face is begging for restless answers
    to tuck me in and help me sleep till day, right through.
    i'll silently sit out this one, i promise you that much;
    and hello, it was so nice to see you smiling here again.
    i feel like i could touch empathy with brazed fingertips
    while planting your feet where forever never ends.

    it feels as my mouth is disconnected from my brain because,
    i'd never before tell you you breathe beautifully when you sleep.
    i can taste the sulfur in such a severe way, it is slowly burning;
    i know you love me, so say so.. make me feel your need.

    i'm winding down to find a need a crash course now
    in all of the ways i need to inhale and exhale to breathe.
    you've stolen the life from my fingertips, my lungs too
    and i hope with all that i am you never give it back to me.
    without girls like you, there would be no poetry in the world
    there'd be no such thing as flowers and outer space.
    and you play it coy, but you always loved my metaphors,
    only thing that could ever bring a smile to your withered face.
    if you talk about space ships i'll give you the magic here
    i'll press it eagerly and so urgently into your small palms.
    i will trace you bed time stories against your arms now,
    and sing you the saddest of every single sad song

    it feels as my mouth is disconnected from my brain because,
    i'd never before tell you you breathe beautifully when you sleep.
    i can taste the sulfur in such a severe way, it is slowly burning;
    i know you love me, so say so.. make me feel your need.
    ----------
    An Adu About Nothing
    I found patience passed out on the basement couch
    with a quilt woven of something for somebody's sake.
    and i wished it was you who was calm and collected
    because assurance keeps me from laying awake.
    despite the brutality i've done to my lip, i'm sure that
    i never really knew the things i wanted from you.
    with thick lines of blackmail, i'm at my wits end now;
    you've got this arguement gagged and sealed for two.
    this something for somebody is growing so very tiresome,
    so you can slip your adues through the mail slot out front.
    i have so less of nothing that i feel the glass is a quarter
    full of what it ever really seemed to be, shards of glass so blunt.

    i've slipped in the middle of circles
    with gag rags made to rope.
    i've touched difference with my fingertips
    just to figure in a form of hope.
    i have shirtsleeves full of sweet nothings,
    lies and lyrics laced with, it'll all be okay's.
    while circles have no beginnings you'll find
    neither did we on these road soaked days.

    to be quite honest, your biased opinons are burning up
    with ashes laid out to surrender to the rain stained air.
    and your book smarts wont help you with what i am;
    the man that lost his breath inside a whisp of your hair.
    i feel everything and anything, i wish you knew that,
    maybe then you could have believed what i felt was real.
    i never tasted anything like your incentive on a tuesday
    and your insight at three am with the looks you left to steal.
    but with bitten back one liners, and a heavy held heart
    i couldn't hold onto all of the things you've given to me.
    so i'll drink my drink, without you knowing some things;
    sorts of things you always knew were important to me.

    i've slipped in the middle of circles
    with gag rags made to rope.
    i've touched difference with my fingertips
    just to figure in a form of hope.
    i have shirtsleeves full of sweet nothings,
    lies and lyrics laced with, it'll all be okay's.
    while circles have no beginnings you'll find
    neither did we on these road soaked days.

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    Angel's punishment

    by NyellMoonlight

    This maledicted composition has no beginning,
    no end; knows no rules or patterns.

    Convince deities that your frozen fingers
    aren't lying; I'm just playing with bloody words;
    scriptures are imprisoned with barbed wire
    while pendulum swings above the gallows...

    ... killing predictions...

    Eat my heart while it's still beating,
    lick the pail blood as it glides down my lips;
    every particle is foreseen, then implanted
    into obscurity of your acrid mind.

    ... and you played a part of the dark angel.

    Special effects mesmerize shape- shifting thoughts,
    ornamented with fatal glistens;
    nobody hears those venomous laments,
    drowned in scarlet, pulsing empathy.

    ... and you condemned yourself to life in sombre skies.

    We drank each others entities on the devils' funeral
    lit all candles with nocturnal gaze,
    haunted sacred voids over starless abysses
    and felt the auras with scarred fingertips.

    Let the wolves howl through the night
    as you taste last chalice of this darkened passion,
    flavor burns your tongue, punishing
    you for every lie, my dark angel.

    This maledicted composition has no beginning
    but it meets its end
    over corpses of thieves united in death.
    It knows no rules, no pattern indeed,
    but today is playing its' final tunes.

  • DragonRebornedInBrokenMirror
    17 years ago

    I Dream In Infrared

    Graphite sighs and darkened illusions
    faced with fake moral of gemstones,
    my tattoos painted over her face
    under frozen moons and midnights.

    Poems I wrote were deep and blackened,
    to prove myself to a Devil I killed
    the Angel of innocence and divine beauty.
    There's no escape from his dreadful hands.

    I dream in infrared, every night
    and then in the morning I wake under umbrella
    that shelters me from drenching blood
    that floods my kitchen's ceiling.

    Grotesque magnificence fearlessly repeated
    same old stories of charcoal malediction;
    I was lost, never to be found again
    and everyone ignored my blissful pleas.

    My alter- ego is better than me in every way,
    I bow my head before his captivating might,
    in the arena of the shadows I lose control again,
    letting that embody of darkness to speak.

    I dream in infrared, every night
    ... till my dreams become reality.

  • DragonRebornedInBrokenMirror
    17 years ago

    Tomorrow, and tomorrow and tomorrow

    by BlackWings

    Randomly I learned language of Gods
    and then cursed their names through the window,
    glowing silence leaked through my veins
    while I spoke with Rhamon and Stinger.

    Rhamon was the ghost of Undead
    he symbolically ate his victims
    and then he made bonfires
    and aimed at the sky with poisoned arrows.

    Stinger was a guitarist once broken inside
    he cut off his platinum hair and built a church,
    went to the islands and painted over shores;
    he was my idol and my guide through the dark.

    Tomorrow Rhamon will suffocate my entity
    and repair it with implements of fear.
    And tomorrow Stinger's sacraments will
    haunt me in my dreadful dreams.
    and tomorrow I'll die.

    Randomly I learned language of Gods
    and then cursed their names through the window,
    glowing silence leaked through my veins
    while I spoke with Rhamon and Stinger.

  • Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child
    17 years ago

    Under Construction"

    Zoom in.

    Little yellow hats sit
    On the heads of little men,
    As they race around the chambers
    And build the walls up once again.

    "Please excuse the mess,"
    Several orange signs say,
    As the whining drills spin 'round
    And the hammers pound away.

    Rubble and debris
    On what used to be a floor,
    But since the slight disaster,
    My heart is nothing more.

    Blood is flowing freely
    Down the fault line in the base,
    Just another scar
    That I can't possibly erase.

    Zoom out.

    Big and red and pulsing,
    An oddly broken shape,
    A heart inside an open chest,
    Wrapped in caution tape.

    I whisper out so quietly,
    Surviving mass destruction,
    "My heart cannot yet love you,
    It's closed down for construction."

  • Romancing the Darker Side
    17 years ago

    Method in the Madness

    Trapped inside eternal emptiness,
    Disdain poisons her ruby lips.
    Madness is the cure for loneliness,
    And her fragile heart it rips.

    Cured by the ticking of softened emotions,
    She breaks through the cycle of fate.
    No longer plagued by these daily devotions,
    Twisted and surrounded by thoughtful hate.

    Crawling away from this torture now,
    She knew that she'd be free somehow.

    Contagious

    You dared to be the hero
    You swore you'd be courageous
    I suppose it doesn't work that way:
    Bravery is contagious

    You said you'd never be a fool
    Afraid to be too outrageous
    But we both knew it was different:
    Charisma is contagious

    All the times you said to me,
    "You know, they'd never make us"
    We wanted to be with the crowd:
    Conformity is contagious

    Tears were wiped away
    And pain had never phased us
    But something here was terribly wrong:
    Sadness is contagious

  • MyEscape
    17 years ago

    Part of Your World

    Looked so glamorous
    As I admired with my eye
    And began to long for it
    Though I haven't a clue why.

    I guess you looked so handsome
    And I was lonely, too
    So I wandered to that seat
    And sat down next to you.

    The minutes turned to an hour
    Oh, the trouble I began
    I should have walked away
    But simply couldn't stand.

    And you were enchanting
    The words came easily
    It's like you knew my wants
    The desires locked in me.

    So you took hold of my heart
    And tugged me to your arms
    That's when I could see
    All the camoflauged harm

    At one time, it felt right
    So I tried, and gave it a whirl
    Turns out I never wanted
    To be a part of your world.

    So goodnight, I wish you well
    And pray in time you'll see
    But even if you never do
    You and I can never be.

    By: *ME*

  • The Queen of Spades
    17 years ago

    The Blood That Flowed

    I hope she remembers
    Her heart was broken
    That the cracks still linger
    And the red oozing from them
    Does not taste sweet

    I pray she never forgets
    The way the earth shook
    How she fell to her knees
    And the pain staining her skin
    Never really left

    I hope she remembers
    That looks are deceptive
    Kisses are but a pointless action
    And the crimson in her mouth
    Is the bitter truth

    I pray she never forgets
    The woman she is
    The woman she can be
    And never succumbs hopelessly
    To the woman she was

    I beg her to never forget
    I implore myself to remember
    The blood that flowed

  • The Queen of Spades
    17 years ago

    The Blood That Flowed

    I hope she remembers
    Her heart was broken
    That the cracks still linger
    And the red oozing from them
    Does not taste sweet

    I pray she never forgets
    The way the earth shook
    How she fell to her knees
    And the pain staining her skin
    Never really left

    I hope she remembers
    That looks are deceptive
    Kisses are but a pointless action
    And the crimson in her mouth
    Is the bitter truth

    I pray she never forgets
    The woman she is
    The woman she can be
    And never succumbs hopelessly
    To the woman she was

    I beg her to never forget
    I implore myself to remember
    The blood that flowed

  • Brittney Follett
    17 years ago

    The White Dot
    `Brittney Schmelter`

    I am just a single white dot
    And my heart and soul scream.
    Shouting at all the beautiful colors
    But no one seems to see me.

    What did I do to become... this.
    Wishing I were blue, but I'm not
    Or the hottest red, or light pink?
    But I'm just a single white dot.

    Trying to be perfect, still no cigar.
    Ignored, alone, I'm so sad.
    Why didn't anyone tell me
    That being white was so bad?

    I am invisible to everyone
    Who would have thought
    That it all would be like this.
    I am just a stupid white dot.

    Falling into the swirl of beauty
    Laying there hopeless, trembling
    Wishing for more than white.
    "Please someone just see me..."

    Despair hits me between the eyes.
    In the middle, I am here to rot.
    I am nothing more than just me.
    Simply: a single tiny white dot.

    Near the colors I start to fade
    My senses begin to drawback
    "I'm sorry, I can't be more."
    The White falls into the black.

    Chaotic Mind
    ~Brittney Schmelter~

    Silent screams and unshed tears,
    Chaotic thoughts and untold fears.
    Secrets hidden throughout the years,
    Deadly scars and broken mirrors.

    Perfectly painted death-filled dreams,
    Hidden behind her hollow screams,
    Smells of all her twisted lies,
    Horrific paintings start to arise.

    Blood filling every pore,
    Blinding pain like never before,
    A tortured heart cries in pain,
    A penetrating scream of the insane.

    Cruel actions decorate her skin.
    Fighting a battle, no one can win,
    Whispering wishes, no one can hear,
    Chaotic smiles start to appear.

    Bloody cuts, a broken soul,
    A Chaotic Mind has no control.
    Hysterical screams pierce the silence,
    Reality gone, thoughts of violence.

    Chaotic mind, no memory,
    Only one thought of a remedy.
    Lovely gun, you're so kind,
    Tragic end of a Chaotic Mind.

  • GothChick
    17 years ago

    Wasting Time
    "By GothChick aka Stacy"

    As I sit in my room alone
    I think about all the things
    I could have done.

    Wondering why
    I wasted my time
    On things that I never understood.

    After hours upon hours
    I realized the end of time
    had come and everything I done
    was a waste of time.

  • GothChick
    17 years ago

    Sometimes
    "By: GothChick aka Stacy"

    Sometimes I wanna run
    but my legs always fail me.
    Sometimes I wanna cry
    but the tears never come.
    Sometimes I wanna cut
    but the blade is always dull.
    Sometimes I wanna die
    but I can't pull the trigger.
    Sometimes I wonder
    what would happen if I died.
    Would anyone care?
    would anyone cry?
    If sometimes was an action
    instead of a thought
    I would have pulled the trigger
    and be nothing more than a memory.

  • nikki
    17 years ago

    I'll enter, this hasn't finished yet

  • nikki
    17 years ago

    Black rose

    by Nikki

    Black rose,
    forever impose,
    your deathly hand,
    upon my heart,
    my life entrapping,
    even tightening,
    in your clasp,
    your cold grasp,
    forever you have me,
    I'll never be free,
    for now i am taken,
    dead forever mistaken..

    had to do this for school as a test. it is meant to be short and i liked them so much i wanted to put them on here

  • nikki
    17 years ago

    White rose

    by Nikki

    White rose,
    my life you froze,
    i can't escape,
    from this cold cape,
    my heart is crying,
    Because it is slowly dying,
    you took it all,
    so i can't call,
    for help I'll scream,
    like a deafening beam,
    for now I'll die,
    and float up to the sky.

  • Beyond Repair
    17 years ago

    Forget

    By BeyondRepair aka Zach

    Never forget my name, I want to burn it into you soul
    I want to read it in your veins, I want you to ache at the sight
    Of everything and anything cause it reminds you of me
    I want to burn me into your eyes so I'm all that you see

    I want every part of your brain to be soak in my memory
    I want your every thought to first begin with me
    I want every other word out of your god damn mouth
    Have something to do with me and not what your talking about

    Forget everything you ever knew
    Forget everything you once held true
    Forget everything that meant something to you
    And fill your every tissue every fiber with my being
    I want you to know what I am feeling

    This may be a shock to your senses
    But this is what I have to put up with
    This is a taste of what you put me through
    All the things you have no idea that you do

    I wish you knew half, of the spells that you cast
    Every shadow has your shape
    Every food has your taste
    You are my everything and there's no escape
    I just wish you could share the same fate

  • Beyond Repair
    17 years ago

    Stripped of My Senses

    By BeyondRepair aka Zach

    I sit in silence now, the walls are closing in some how
    The darkness quietly swoops in and beings to surround
    It's over I lost, I close my eyes but they wont open back up
    My ears are shot and my body goes numb
    I taste the filthy waste of what I've done
    I've never told, of the sadness I hold, a burning smell enters my nose

    I'm stripped of my senses I cant finish a sentence
    Without the messages, running through my head
    Now I cant get up, the ground begins to rot
    And now I'm falling through a bottomless drop
    I didn't realize at the time, I was to preoccupied
    With what I've done with my life

    My soul fades away, I'm now stuck with only my brain
    That's lost any hint of hope or joy over the years
    And there isn't one part of me, that thinks someday I could be happy
    Because to tell you the truth I don't know how that feels

    And with this cloud over my head, I have no idea what's been said
    I might as well be in the other room, cause in the world of me
    It always rains but I can see, the sun, buts its just out of reach
    You could call it depression, but sadness is my obsession
    And yet I can't cry, and believe me I've tried
    But I cant conjure up the strength or the will
    To make myself do something that would
    Seem so much like giving up when I have only just begun
    Crying solves nothing, but there's nothing that can be done

    I'm stripped of my senses I cant finish a sentence
    Without the messages, running through my head
    Now I cant get up, the ground begins to rot
    And now I'm falling through a bottomless drop
    I didn't realize at the time, I was to preoccupied
    With what I've done with my life

    I'm stripped of my senses and for good reason
    Took for granted all the things that I was given
    And worse yet I did nothing with them
    So I took all the great things that I had
    And let them fade away when my life got bad

    You can say that I'm weak and you can say that I'm dumb
    I try not to dwell too much on what has already been done
    I live by the days, and I apologize for the life that I waste
    But what I would give for just one more taste

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    Looking in the Eyes of Love
    by AblissfulDREAMER

    Profound, like a never-ending ocean
    Whose waves glisten in the sunlit sky
    Sweet, like fresh picked strawberries
    Whose syrupy essence tickles the taste buds
    Alluring, like a coy mistress
    Whose desire whispers in the night
    Secure, like shelter from the rain
    That shields you from jagged encounters
    Compassionate, like an affectionate parent
    Who teaches you right from wrong
    Optimistic, like a newborn baby
    Who sees the world through innocent eyes
    Blissful, like a hopeful young child
    Defeating the difficulty of learning how to ride a bike

    Love is...
    An emotion that cannot be depicted with words
    But must be felt in the depths of ones heart
    It takes over the body with a colossal force

    To experience the sensations love conveys
    Just gaze into your loves tender eyes

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    Bleak Hope
    by AblissfulDREAMER

    Slipping away are my once pleasant fantasies
    No longer in my grasp are my one time rosy wishes
    My heart now an abyss filled with faint dreams
    They no longer shine but are gradually disappearing

    As a hopeful tear slides down my cheek
    I begin to reminisce about your love
    A dim smile appears on my lips
    But just as fast as it becomes known
    Now is replaced with a fixed frown

    With hope still evident in my spirit
    I will naturally wait for your love once again
    You are the fire that burns deep inside me
    Though now the flame is faint
    My hope and desire stimulates its blaze

    Determined is my passionate heart
    I will wait for you.

  • MyEscape
    17 years ago

    He Wasn't
    By: *ME*

    When he looked in my eyes,
    Where blue met the brown
    When I thought in his arms
    Comfort could be found

    When time after time
    He could enter my heart
    When he made the sun shine
    Though my whole world was dark

    When he read my mind
    Though I said not a word
    When I talked, he listened
    All my thougths he heard

    When I looked at my future
    I thought he'd be there
    When I dreamed of tomorrow
    I thought he'd still care

    When we were together
    I thought he was fun
    When I thought of forever
    I thoguht he was the one

    He wasn't....

    When my world came crashing
    He broke not my fall
    When I needed a friend,
    I received not his call

    When I prayed for his comfort
    There were no arms
    When danger came calling
    He let me be harmed

    When tears rushed down
    They fell to the floor
    When I came knocking
    He closed all his doors

    When I dream of tomorrow
    I know I'm alone
    When I look for help
    I'm now on my own

    When all seemed lost
    I thought he was the sun
    When I thought of forever
    I thought he was the one

    He wasn't...

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    Sit There To Watch Me Burn

    by NyellMoonlight

    Designed to plunge the soul in glitter
    butterfly- girl sung her shiny ode,
    ornamenting rainbows with crystal tears
    while the time carried away laced entity.

    Sit there to watch me burn
    (cause I'll never reach your glowing perfection)
    allure me with purple promises,
    as I dance to prove my innocence.

    Designed to aim at shallow nothingness
    black-hearted boy screamed under the stars,
    colliding with deities of acrid idealism
    while the time carried away broken entity.

    Sit there to watch me burn
    (cause I'll share my curse with someone else)
    mesmerize me with blank canvas,
    as I put my hand on the altar.

    Combined restoring mights grab my existence;
    still, like a scarlet phoenix, again I'll rise.

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Xx Butterfly Kisses xX

    Pink candy canes and butterfly kisses
    Close your eyes darling, fulfill all your wishes
    Slide down the rainbow into a sea of gold
    To a magical place where you never grow old

    Keep a tight hold of your dear teddy bear
    Watch as the mermaids comb their shining hair
    They'll sing you a song with voices so sweet
    Listening to them is such a lovely treat

    Chocolate drops fall from a Vanilla sky
    Pixies and fairies are all flying high
    Scattering pixie dust over your head
    This is better than any fairytale you've read

    The glitter carousel is waiting to start
    Shimmering unicorns beg you to take part
    The organ strikes up a tinkling tune
    About a little cow who jumped over the moon

    Pink candy floss cloads float lazily past
    Time in this dreamworld flies by way too fast
    A cute little elf reaches for your hand
    Ring around the roses then fall on the sand

    Butterfly kisses and cold lemonade
    An enchanted dreamworld that your mind has made
    So go to sleep sweetheart, close your tired eyes
    Spend all your sweet dreams with magic butterflies

    *Gem*
    Copyright©GemmaStott2007

    Xx Tequila Loves Me xX

    She sits in the corner of the kitchen crying
    Cos she's found out about his cheating and lying
    Fumbling in the cupboards with one clumsy hand
    So intoxicated, she can't even stand

    Her world tumbled down when he left her alone
    Came back from work to a broken up home
    All that was left was a crumpled up letter
    She knew what to do to make it all better

    Tore up all his clothes that he's left behind
    Smashed up his belongings and threw them outside
    Opened up the champagne saved for a special day
    And drank it all down wondering what he'd say

    Hours later she slumped down amongst the debris
    Singing loud; "Never mind, Tequila loves me!"
    Clutching the bottle tightly in her fist
    She finally succumbed to the alcohols kiss

    *Gem*
    Copyright©GemmaStott2007

  • debbylyn
    17 years ago

    A Flower Paperweight

    by Debbylyn

    Behold!
    My crystal crypt
    Lavender blooms rejoice
    In eternal beauty
    Yet
    Within this cold embrace
    I live not
    This vision of perfection
    Holds not my soul
    Nor my quickening heart
    In fragrant Spring's rebirth
    Death bathes my petals

  • debbylyn
    17 years ago

    Tiptoe Soft Lullaby

    by Debbylyn

    Welcome dark dream's embrace
    Gentle waves bestow soft lullaby
    Tiptoes reach to kiss thy face
    Lulled from slumber's lonely cry

    Tortured love to wax and wane
    Fingers trace beloved's hand
    Prayer and longing one the same
    Time's precious gift a grain of sand

    Sheltered path holds shadow's play
    Taste of salt through open door
    No hint of fallen steps displayed
    Perchance the dream, a dream no more

  • Daisy if you do
    17 years ago

    Wicked Harvest

    Light haze covers an earthen crop
    Beneath the stones where corpses rot
    Hellish hounds howl in near distance
    Souls lie in limbo where purgatory exists

    Lives defined by whether good or evil
    Demons lurk in search of their equal
    Decades of formaldehyde soaked flesh
    Leathery marinade for the famished

    All Hallows Eve, when the feast begins
    Relentless beasts are there when it ends
    Walk with the living with scent of death
    Waiting, anticipating for your final breath

    Master of Dreams

    Thoughts collide in memory
    Where dreams become reality
    Ticking slow the pendulum
    Eternal is it's beating rhythm

    Re-runs of how it used to be
    Forced to watch incessantly
    Perpetual shows, voices victim,
    Injects my mind with it's venom

    Creep forth from recesses deep
    No hour have I to find relief
    Graffiti littered inner sanctum
    Marked for me with it's emblem

    Day or night, find no peace
    Taunting with no signs to cease
    Amnesia, what a thing to welcome
    To rid myself this hosting phantom

  • awww
    17 years ago

    Friendly Note

    To Cat and all my friends,

    "It may be a while since I last wrote
    but I hope that you would like this note."

    How I want to be there for you
    How I want to say "I miss you"

    We're close and we both know that
    But sometimes all I can say is "Cat!"

    Nothing more after that word
    Just a smile and silence's heard

    I sometimes wonder how you are
    And how has life been so far

    We don't talk as much as we used to
    Yet you let me know you think of me too

    You never do forget a friend of yours
    And that's something everyone adores

    But I really want to take this time
    To show my appreciation through rhyme

    You're a friend that I do treasure
    Up to here is how you measure

    I know you might be just a bit upset
    But you don't know where "here" is yet

    I'm in a dream of dreams that goes so high
    Passing the clouds, going beyond the sky

    Lying in a bed of bliss, I think of you
    Slowly coming back down to sit with you

    It's then I realize that dreams is a heavens' view
    But "here" with my friend is a dream come true

    Timeless Symphony

    Eyes open, I'm still in bed
    Recalling a dream of you
    I wonder why I cant move on
    When I have every reason to

    All reasons have hurt me
    Every single one cut so deep
    So deep, I still have the scars
    That remind me of my one leap

    A leap of faith where I crashed
    Cause I didnt think of landing
    All that mattered was to jump
    To you, my heart I was handing

    Sadly, I had expected too much
    Or maybe 'twas I expected at all
    So now I've learnt my lesson
    The very root of my downfall

    Unfortunately, here I am again
    With one last thought in mind
    One more thing that I must say
    As I hope all this you'll find

    "I thought all had passed
    All but a remaining irony:
    my heart is broken...
    yet it still sings a symphony"

    ~angel~

  • Melvin LeVeque
    17 years ago

    What do I do when you say you don't care?
    And the pain is far too deep for me to bear.
    I wonder will you even notice I am gone?
    Will you come to my funeral to say so long?
    Will you see me in my coffin, and kiss my head?
    It's hurts to know the only kiss ill get from you, is when I'm dead.
    But why did it have to be this way?
    It was you, nobody else, who got me from day to day.
    To know you are with somebody else, much pain it brings.
    It always hurts when I hear about those kinds of things
    Do you not love me because the way I wear my hair?
    I would go bald if you want me to, if it makes you care.
    I really hope you will read this letter?
    If you would of only given me, a chance to show you I could have treated you better.
    Than all the other guys who you chose instead of me
    God damn it I told you, that we were meant to be.
    What is it about you that makes me feel so good?
    If I could have gotten over you, trust me, I most certainly would.
    I cannot put in plain words on how I am feeling.
    My heart is on fire, it is not to appealing.
    It feels like Ive died a thousand times inside
    Holding you a little closer, just a little more in my mind.
    Ever time I see you with another guy, I die again.
    But I would die a million times, if we could just be friends.
    It is getting hard to count all the times my hearts has torn.
    I really wish sometimes, that I wasn't even born.
    Someone please tell me what this torture is for.
    I really don't want to love you anymore.
    So it's now that I sit in my bed.
    It will be here tomorrow where they will find me dead.
    Because this cut in my wrist is getting pretty deep.
    I've got a picture of you in my hand; it's the one you said I could keep.
    Now the blood is going every where wow I wish you could see.
    All of this could have been avoided if you would have just loved me.
    Man I haven't said all I have to say, so I have to hurry.
    Because it's getting hard to breath now, and my visions going blurry.
    So I can't really see your pretty little smile.
    Don't worry my life will be over in just a little while.
    I'm going to take these last few minuets to sit back and reminisce.
    I'm sorry but the last line I can write will be this.
    PS. At my funeral please don't forget my kiss.

  • 4 track demo
    17 years ago

    Two shoes and a skull

    We carried the pedestal of leper skinned heroes,
    to the lazarusizer to receive their resurrectioning.,
    but his door was bolted shut, no healing hand here.

    so the swarm of diseased caravan meat bearers,
    turned back, in search of a fire of cave dwellers.

    what they found was a safe congregation,
    of a tribe of hungry, welcoming, cannibals,
    that were more than accommodating for their request,
    to warm themselves around their modest fire.

    i suppose the taste of leper skin doesn't really differ,
    that much from the flavor of freshly torn flesh.

    the warmth was not unconditional by any means,
    a sacrifice was required, the pedestal became lighter.
    surprisingly the tribe thanked the travelers as they left,
    one soul lighter, two shoes, and a skull left behind,

    weighing so heavy on the hearts of the one's spared,
    trembling and cold, the pedestal was lifted once more.

  • 4 track demo
    17 years ago

    Mercury eyed

    Crudely constructed
    greenly-hinted, bronzed legs,
    elevate and support a coffee colored throne.

    proudly mounted
    by the queen of lost solace,
    eyes like mirrors, wings of a bird, tail of a fish.

    her minimal crown
    is nothing but a breath of wind,
    caught in a tornado circling around her head.

    orchids and lilys
    surround the purity of her aura,
    no heathens and sinners kneel down before her.

    this is the palace
    of unforgetfullness undone,
    the forgivenfleshgrantinghand has come.

    her arms
    are tree limbs, her hands are but leaves,
    to cradle and console those lost deep in the forest.

    no pagan rituals
    or witchery, a holy sanctuary,
    a modest shrine, where every soul is welcome.

    don't fear the celebration of serenity, engulf yourself fully in the unmisery that lies within, sit down quietly in front of the queen, and watch her face so serene, stare in amazement as her mirrored eyes cry tears of mercury

  • gack60
    17 years ago

    Fluggers and Ruggers

    Gizmos and gadgets
    Widgets and wadgets
    Things that fill us with glee.

    Boppits and bippits
    Cuttits and snippets
    They wont get a thing out of me.

    Lefties and righties
    Digits and dighties
    By now you should be confused.

    Brifties and brofties
    Liftys and loftys
    At the same time i hope you're amused.

    Tickkits and tackkets
    Wickets and wackkets
    These are not things that you need

    Heffetts and teffetts
    Crickets and creckets
    I'm not sure if this makes a good read.

    Figgits and wiggits
    Duggits and diggits
    If you understand, then well done to you!

    Hacketts and rackets
    Zackets and quakkets
    Cos i wrote it, and i'm confused too!

  • NeferNoir
    17 years ago

    Betrayed (by your eyes)

    Queer eyes,
    sleeps in distress.
    A cursed tongue,
    forced to confessed.
    Bared.
    Impured.

    Lips with stitches,
    forced to silence.
    Your morose eyes,
    a false ambience.
    Muted.
    Impaled.

    Deplore my trust,
    masked with smiles.
    Serpentine swirls,
    of ethereal deceit.
    Broken.
    Divine.

    Dance of pretence,
    releasing hysteria.
    Ballad of a liar,
    curtains fall.
    Phobic.
    Ended.

    You taint my beliefs with fictions,
    breaking the fragile string of my credence so frayed.
    Stranded in your words.
    Betrayed.

  • NeferNoir
    17 years ago

    Destruction (after death)

    The vice kills the sun,
    on twilight's shadow it feeds.
    Fall into despair,
    paper dancer bleeds.
    Morbid.
    Surreal.

    The corpses are awake,
    leaving traces of death.
    They have reached here,
    I hold my breath.
    Feared.
    Frightened.

    Your soul drenched in blood,
    I help you drown.
    Glass in your eyes,
    can you see me?
    Blinded.
    Sightless.

    I sleep to die,
    hunger for pain.
    Scream the sacred vows,
    evil will rise again.
    Stoned.
    Silent.

    Walk on the grounds of sorrow,
    the blood of self satisfaction.
    All hail the master.
    Destruction.

  • Melpomene
    17 years ago

    Violin Strings Of Sorrow

    The darkest of all violin stings,
    Etched upon a souls depth,
    Words echo throughout time,
    As cries collapse sweet lungs.

    Melodic tunes hold no beauty,
    Guitar strings suddenly fray
    Piano keys lose all sound,
    As distant weeps begin to wake.

    Lost throughout eerie mist,
    A shadow falls to the ground,
    Trapped within delicate eyes,
    A child drowned in song.