Some Random Contest

Nightmares Of An Broken Angel

Porcelain moon, Forbidden skies,
Midnight hours, Midnight cries,
Dreams of lies, Hearts of hope,
Eyes of tears, Memories of rope.

Glistening rivers, Sparkling streams,
Heartfelt agony, Heartfelt screams,
Gleams of emerald, Water of mist,
Nightmare rippled, Set with a twist.

Soft eyes, Hand out to reach,
Jagged scars, Mournful speech,
Icy hands, Too cold to touch,
Eternal bliss, There is no such.

The twilight night, Dress of lace,
Crimson kisses, The color of fate,
Ribbon of silk, Chain of gold,
Ring of diamond, of which you hold.

Broken soul, White rose in hand
My guardian angel in this land,
I see your face through the mist,
This is my nightmare set with a twist.

Out of This World

I never imagined it would happen.
I had never even thought about it.
It wasn't something that I wanted,
But now it is something that
I can't stop thinking about.

Your touch is so soft, sweet.
You kiss is unimaginable.
All I want to do is hold you
To be able to feel your body
Up close and touching mine.

My touch is rushed,
Something that I can't control
I can't even control my thoughts
All I can think about is kissing
And touching your beautiful body.

I can't even begin to explain the happiness
That you have put into my heart
I smile at just the thought of
Talking to you every day
And being able to see you.

Let them say we are crazy
Tell us that we'll never make it
But, baby as long as we have each other
As long as we are together,
Nothing can stop us.

This is the closing day, have fun reading all these Dark, haha. Good luck deciding. ~Zach

JUDGING:
I rated each poem from 1- 10 (the rating is based on my personal taste, the wording, imagery and uniqueness of the piece) and everyone will get the numbers of comments equal to the ratings of their poems.

If anyone wants explanation for their ratings, PM me!

Please, be patient, and I'll get to you all!

* Pete- Curiosity- 5/10

* smiles for alex- Look Through My Eyes- 3/10
smiles for alex- Somewhere Only We Know- 2/10

* Sociopathetic xLolax- Diamond Grace- 2/10
Sociopathetic xLolax- Blood's Sweet Toxicity- 4/10

* Prophecies In Kodak- Take This To Heart- 8/10
Prophecies In Kodak- An Adu About Nothing- 6/10

* NyellMoonlight- Angel's punishment- 9/10
NyellMoonlight- Sit There To Watch Me Burn- 10/10

* BlackWings- I Dream In Infrared- 6/10
BlackWings- Tomorrow, and tomorrow and tomorrow- 7/10

* Bettafish- Actions without Love- 8/10
Bettafish- Lucky- 2/10

* Ashes of a Black Rose- Under Construction 7/10

* XxRomancing the Darker SidexX- Method in the Madness- 4/10
XxRomancing the Darker SidexX- Contagious- 3/10

* BeautifulAngelAllAlone- 4/10
BeautifulAngelAllAlone- 2/10

* MyEscape- Part of Your World- 3/10
MyEscape- He Wasn't- 3/10

* The Queen of Spades- The Blood That Flowed- 4/10

* Brittney Schmelter- The White Dot- 5/10
Brittney Schmelter- Chaotic Mind- 6/10

* GothChick- Wasting Time- 2/10
GothChick- Sometimes- 3/10

* Jay- Angel in Disguise- 4/10
Jay- Structure- 2/10

* nikki- Black Rose- 3/10
nikki- White Rose- 4/10

* Beyond Repair- Forget- 6/10
Beyond Repair- Stripped of My Senses- 4/10

* CancerBeatsTheOddslPAIGEl- DEATH's LOVE- 3/10
CancerBeatsTheOddslPAIGEl- What If It Was Tonight?- 5/10

* AblissfulDREAMER- Looking in the Eyes of Love- 5/10
AblissfulDREAMER- Bleak Hope- 7/10

* Gem- Xx Butterfly Kisses xX- 9/10
Gem- Xx Tequila Loves Me xX- 3/10

* debbylyn- A Flower Paperweight- 8/10
debbylyn- Tiptoe Soft Lullaby- 6/10

* Dixiedaisy- Wicked Harvest- 7/10
Dixiedaisy- Master of Dreams- 8/10

* awww- Friendly Note- 2/10
awww- Timeless Symphony- 4/10

* Melvin LeVeque- 2/10

* 4 track demo- Two shoes and a skull- 7/10
4 track demo- Mercury eyed- 9/10

* gack60- Fluggers and Ruggers- 5/10

* Dark Delirium- Betrayed (by your eyes)- 6/10
Dark Delirium- Destruction (after death)- 7/10

* SlaveToTheMusic- Violin Strings Of Sorrow- 8/10
SlaveToTheMusic- Nightmares Of An Broken Angel- 10/10

* Hellon- Garden of the Mind- 7/10
Hellon- Bleeding Crimson Rain- 6/10

* Lexie- Out of This World- 2/10

I don't get it, lol. My bad

I'd like to decline my R/R/C's please.

Thanks.

~Pete.