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The titles here are the names of bands which I find interesting... Choose one name and write a poem on it...

One poet per title but if there is no more titles and there are people who wants to participare, PM me and I will add more titles...

The prices are still undecided.

Please read the posts first and reserve...
I will try to update everyday to avoid confusion..

After Forever - (Jay) - {DONE}

The Agony Scene - [ReproducedByIntelligence] - {DONE}

As Blood Runs Black - [Beautiful Chaos] - {DONE}

Dream Theater - [DarkSpirit] - {DONE}

Eyes Set To Kill - [smiles for alex]

From Autumn To Ashes - [HOLLYWOODBANGBANG] - {DONE}

Suicide City - [The Queen of Spades]

Behind Crimson Eyes - [Bryan] - {DONE}

Eighteen Visions - [NyellMoonlight] - {DONE}

Matchbook Romance - [Britt] - {DONE}

Dark Tranquility - [Allison] - {DONE}

Bullet For My Valentine - [Sh0tgun SeReNaDe] - {DONE}

Sins of Omission - [Pete] - {DONE}

Angels On acid - [Lovelon Rules]

Fractured Fairytales - [gack60] - {DONE}

Senses Fail - [Tammie] - {DONE}

Armor For Sleep - [JustSayGoodbye] - {DONE}

Mind In A Box - [UglySkeleton] - {DONE}

Slowmotion Apocalypse - I R Jordannn - {DONE}

Mindless Self Indulgence - GothicVampyress - {DONE}

Aesthetic Perfection - DragonRebornedInBrokenMirror - {DONE}

The Black Dahlia Murder

The Dresden Dolls

You can change the title that you reserve only with a title which is UNreserved yet...

I forget to add that ryhming is optional...

The dateline is 19 November...
Have fun!!

Good titles, I want Dream Theater.

Eighteen Visions, please.

Form Autumn to Ashes, please.

LOVE these bands, good choices.

:]

Suicide City, please

Eyes set to kill please ..

'Dark Tranquility' please ^_^

The Agony Scene.

Behind Crimson Eyes

As Blood Runs Black please

Sorry questioning love and CancerBeatsTheOddslPAIGEl but the titles you chose are already reserved in the previous posts... I have added new titles which you can choose from but if your really want the titles and have great ideas for them, I can make an exception only for now... Everyone else please read the posts before reserving... :)

As Blood Runs Black

Ruby red and oh so sweet,
Until he swept her off her feet,
He left her there to cry alone,
Black as night, cut to the bone.

Striking out, no looking back,
Time may run, but she'll attack,
Drag you down where spirits go,
Tortured souls we used to know.

Broken by such bitter word,
All they've seen and all they've heard,
Life no longer valued here,
Close your eyes and live in fear.

Breathing down your neck at night,
She'll kill your heart before the light,
Do not trust that velvet smile,
Soft and sweet but, oh, so vile.

Damaged goods, the label reads,
Now unsure of what she needs,
From red to black, her blood ran cold,
Lost to all she could not hold.

Reserve "Sins Of Omission"

Please && Thanks!

~Pete.

Ooh so hard...Angels on Acid please!

Fractured fairytales plz

Thanx in advance.

Fractured fairytales

Once upon a time in fairytale land,
Things were getting a bit out of hand.

Snow White and Alladin were due to be wed,
Thumbelina is bridesmaid, or so it is said.

The three blind mice could see, but not hear,
From a kiss to a frog, Pinocchio did appear.

Sleeping Beauty had woken, to find she was gross,
And Hansel and Gretel were no longer close.

The three little pigs had built some hotels,
And Cinderella was now dishing out spells.

The magic mirror, was magic no more,
The seven dwarf's work was becoming a chore.

The gingerbread man, he was easily caught,
Humpty Dumpty was pushed, is what is now thought.

The Big Bad Wolf, he ate the Three Bears,
Rapunzel's tower was now fitted with stairs.

Tom Thumb moved in with the Lady In The Shoe,
Old Mother Hubbard had just enough for a stew.

Red Riding Hood was dancing to the Pied Pipers tune,
Peter Pan beat Hook using only a wooden spoon.

Tinkerbell and the Giant were really good friends,
The Ugly Sisters were prom queens, and thats where it ends.

I hope that this poem has filled you with laughter,
And the characters in it, live happily ever after.

Not my best, eh.

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The Agony Scene.

Forecasts prove there's a bit of rain, acid to be exact
With some hail that's falling not long after, but it's
lasting longer than tomorrow's terrible snowfall.

Blizzards with gastly howls followed by some sleet,
cracking windows from the coldness along with
all the souls left unattended tonight.

Heartbreaks fill each room with warmth,
clutching to the rhymth of each beat,
as acid burns the skin and snow falls in repeat.

Crimson burns turn to white from the frosted snow.
no wonder it's so easy for a snowman to melt at touch,
the burns are exceeding through the sleet and hail.

Precipitation we can't seem to control; our agony scene.
But, we can stop the heart's on the front line awaiting defeat,
for they're only to be broken a million times plus one
by all the hearts left unattended in this terrible weather.

Sins Of Omission.

Thoughts amassed of times now past,
Apparent what went awry.
Everything that I didn't do,
Are deeds I can't deny.

Should've shared my lips with you,
At every sole request.
Should've showed my utter awe,
At the beauty you possessed.

Should've done the little things,
To show how much I care.
Should've spoke my heart to you,
So you'd know that I'd be there.

Should've shed three tiny words,
In the knowledge they'd be returned.
It taught me what I should've known,
Too late the lesson's learned.

Should've stopped you as you left,
Held you like a vice.
Should've done just anything,
Whatever would suffice.

So allay my fears or betray my pride,
I'll heed your made decision.
If our loves to live, you must forgive,
The sins of my omissions.

~Pete.

Slowmotion Apocalypse, please.

Thanks. :]

I'm sorry to be a pain, but could I change my reservation to Senses Fail, I have a better idea for that one.

Thankss.

Not my best, but It's just what came out..

Senses Fail

These days, I'm numb to the touch of you,
It's like you're a ghost I just pass through.
Losing right mindset when you're around,
These feelings I get makes my heart pound.

Hearing your voice, my heart skips a beat,
Singing to me, your lyrics so complete.
When I get lonely, I listen to your song,
Reminisce on the past; I know it won't be long.

I'll see you soon enough, we'll be together again,
Although seeing you brings happiness and pain.
Together forever is what we used to say,
But forever is never when you have it your way.

It's been so long I'm beginning to forget your taste,
The sweetness of your lips, the bitterness encased.
Memories like dust, blending with the scenery,
Old with the new and joy with the misery.

I miss your scent like the old summer days,
We used to spend together, just like a cliche.
Lust filled the air, wherever we would go
Hearts on our sleaves, together on show.

But now you're gone my senses fail,
Our relationship has become an old fairytale.
No touch, sound, sight, taste or scent,
All we share now is our deep lament.

Aaah...

Well, I think I choose Mind In A Box. :]

Mind In A Box

holding the shambles
that have been with me for ages
unable to retain, no longer

wolves are waiting with anticipation
for the what is in a box of a liar

understand the lies
whisper during my sleepless nights
unable to breathe, no longer

spirits are haunting with excitement
for the what is in a box of a liar

rummaging for the broken mirrors
dying from the tension
unable to live, no longer

monsters are hiding with exhilaration
for the mind in a box of a liar

Eighteen Visions

by NyellMoonlight

I'll give these porcelain visions
as endowment to endless beauty;
rusty dreams of utopia still ornament
my silky bed-sheets; endlessly...

... sweet fall, flashes of sandy thoughts,
liquid warmth, renouncing oaths...

Ceramic voices whisper in my head
(the safest place, still so pail);
fragmented state of mind's
revolving satellites...
... eighteen visions overwhelm the heart.

Do you see confessions in my eyes?
Do you feel piercing neon-lights?

I'll give these priceless visions
as endowment to eager fingertips;
celestial melodies tease senses
under my frail skin; eagerly...

... sweetest burning, traces of healing scenes,
symmetric schemes, inhaling eery shivers...

Dimensions change miracles, change miracles
(intentions renegade against bitter pain),
dimension change miracles between predictions;
... eighteen visions overwhelm the heart.

Do you see confessions in my eyes?
Do you feel sacred touches of insanity?

I'll give these darkened visions
as endowment to mystical silhouettes;
glittering fire absorb impure sanity,
playing with our destinies, mystically...

*Dark Tranquility*

Over the mountains of thought,
Past the burning bridges,
Through the rivers of time,
Gasping for breath and knowledge.

Caught between two different worlds,
No one can hear my screams,
Lost in my own imaginations,
No strength to life the screen.

I am slowly falling,
Under the star filled skies,
Gently my mind is failing me,
I can no longer breathe.

Floating off into space unknown,
I find that love is lost,
Forever I shall live in silence,
In my dark tranquility.

Behind Crimson Eyes (Sonnet III)

I yearn at night to see your pretty face,
While dreams of sweet sorrow put up a fight,
Why cant I be happy here in this place,
I'll wipe away these crimson tears tonight.

I yearn to hear your sweet angelic voice,
Maybe then I wouldn't feel so alone,
But in the end I never had a choice,
And now its left my heart encased in stone.

I yearn at night to smell your sweet perfume,
To be able to kiss your tender lips,
To see your beauty light up this dark room,
Forgot the feeling of your fingertips.

But tonight tis a dream thats full of lies,
So I'm looking behind these crimson eyes.

Dream Theater

by DarkSpirit

Forgotten underworld is a home for rogues;
they ran from the light that burns the skin
and hid in all forbidden places
slept under the wings made of words.

Carved in the mind, letters remind on stolen stars
and lullabies that the thieves sung.
Senseless searching for mute beauties
molded their fragmented, grotesque days.

Equality they found in releasing thoughts;
their world was a dream theater-
a stage is reserved for the fire-swallowers
and behind the curtains dark magicians performed.

One more day to submit your poems if you haven't do so... I do not wish to extend the dateline so please submit them by 19 nov.. :)

I'm in the mood to write some poems so I want Mindless Self Indulgence and I should have it done and on here later tonight if that's alright. ^-^

Mmkay here it is...

Mindless Self Indulgence

I remember the taste
it's still fresh in my mind
The sweet taste of blood
it's not hard to find

I remember the feeling
as I wielded the blade
the feeling of power
as I watched his life fade

I remember the craving
searching for someone new
the craving for more
and then I found you

And as the blood leaves your body
you know you never had a chance
you became another victim
of my mindless self indulgence

From Autumn to Ashes [Acrostic]

Falling down onto her knees, she screams for
Redemption -- but none is given, there`s no time.
Over and over, she holds out her hand for your
Misguided trust, hoping you`ll take it; but as

Always, you leave her waiting, hopelessly.
Unconscious thoughts come into plain sight,
Teasing her sanity with the madness they
Undo onto her. Hiding, she relentlessly
Masks the pain, nothing more than whiskey and
Nicotine. She`s holding on just a little too

Tight to something that was never there for you,
Obscenity never tasted so sweet, and from

Autumn to ashes, she fell apart, nit-picking at the
Seams of a forgotten fairy-tale. The tall-tales all
Have their truths, and in this story of an
Endless love, she`s found the truth in your words --
Sincere to the drunken mind, as they slur perfection.

-Jenna Elphick
November 18, 2007

Aesthetic Perfection

by DragonRebornedInBrokenMirror

A notebook and a pen on the white table
broken lamp didn't illuminate deathly ninja
behind yellow lobe, with the dragon in the hair...
... or it was some other princess?

Dreadful reality and my red glue wave illusions
lord's silver ring is in my cd-player
the fresh sound travel through the darkened room-
broken lamp didn't illuminate deathly ninja.

... or it was some other princess?

My eery posters fill the humanoid battery's
with wide eraser which will erase all lies
of cursed, sparkling diamonds...
... I watched some grotesque movie on the wall tonight.

(and I don't believe that that happened)
My obscurity tames myself into book of vampires
which create north lights and wasted diplomas...
broken lamp didn't illuminate the deathly ninja
or it was some other princess?

Results:

First(20comments/ratings)= Slowmotion Apocalypse [I R Jordann]

Second(15comments/ratings)= Eighteen Visions [NyellMoonlight]

Third(13comments/ratings)= As Blood Runs Black [Beautiful Chaos]

Fourth(10comments/ratings)= Senses Fail [Tammie]

Fifth(8comments/ratings)= From Autumn To Ashes [HOLLYWOODBANGBANG]

2 HM(5comments/ratings each)= Dream Theater [DarkSpirit]
= Sins of Omission [Pete]

Congratulations to the winners. The rest will receive 1comment/rating each. Thankyou all who participated. (:

Thanks for the placing! This was great contest!

Should I PM you with the tiles or you'll comment and vote on the poems randomly?

Oh! Anything is fine. If you want me to comment on particular poems,just PM me the titles. Otherwise,I will comment randomly. (:

Wow thanks so much, any titles would be fine, I have many that are in need of some comments. Way to go everyone :)

Yay, congrats to all! :}{:

Congrats everyone!!! ^_^

Thanks for the HM - Congrats to all the winners / placements.

Could you do both my Seasonal ABC's [Tongue Twister] Part I - And Part II

Thanks in advance.

~Pete.