The *ANGEL* contest

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WINNERS:

1st: "A Sinner Kissed An Angel" by NyellMoonlight

2nd: "I'm No Angel" by xPinkDizzyTeacupx

3rd: "Fallen Angel" by debbylynn

4th: "Sweet Lips of an Angel" by Gem

5th: "Concrete Angel" by IwishIwasAnyoneButMelpaigel

Congratulations to all the winners!
Prizes:
1st place: 20 comments
2nd place: 15 comments
3rd place: 10 comments
4th place: 5 comments
5th place: 5 comments

thank you all for participating!

All of the titles have the word "angel" in them. topic can be about ANYTHING and EVERYTHING. Profanity, love, nature, explicit, religious, spiritual, dark, emotional, as long as there is imagination! And of course it must have some sort of angel or angelic reference in it.

If you feel like you must tweak the title a bit thats fine, but I would prefer you to run it by me first.

Lots of titles, there will be 5 winners chosen. Short contest--this ends November 5th so I would suggest you choose a poem and then submit it!

Titles:
1) She Talks to Angels
2) Angels with Dirty Faces (RESERVED-HollywoodxBangbang)
3) Angel of Mine (RESERVED-MonstriitosPriincess)
4) Calling All Angels (RESERVED-ReproducedbyIntelligence) *DONE*
5) Sweet Lips of An Angel *DONE*-Gem)
6) Fallen Angel (RESERVED-debblyn) *DONE*
7) Between Angels and Insects
8) Angels Losing Sleep
9) Kiss an Angel Good Morning
10) I'm No Angel (RESERVED-xPinkDizzyTeacupx)
11) Paper Angels
12) Heaven Must Be Missing An Angel (RESERVED-Nikki) *DONE*
13) Concrete Angel (RESERVED-I Wish I Was Anyone But Me*DONE*)
14) The Angels Wanna Wear My Red Shoes (RESERVED-Nyell Moonlight) *DONE*
15) Black Angel's Death Song
16) A Sinner Kissed An Angel (RESERVED-NyellMoonlight)
17) Lost Angel (RESERVED-Pete) *DONE*
18) Touched by An Angel
19) Angel of Death
20) Poison Angel (RESERVED-Britt *DONE* & DarkSpirit)
21) Angel's Lullaby (RESERVED-SmilesforAlex) *DONE*
22) Angel With The Scabbed Wings (RESERVED-Painted Persona)
23) Angel Eyes (RESERVED-Gem) *DONE*
24) Wild Angels
25) Angel of the Morning
26) Earth Angel
27) Angel in Disguise (RESERVED-Jay) *DONE*
28) Another Angel Gets Its Wings
29) Captured Angels
30) When Fallen Angels Fly (RESERVED-DarkSpirit)

Please Reserve! You may reserve up to 2 (TWO) But when submitting please put both in the SAME entry. Repeat: Same entry. You may at first put one and then edit your post later to put the second one in, but I will not read the second if it is not in the same post! Thank you very much and I hope you guys have some fun with the titles!

That should be fine as long as it still as the word "angel" in it and I would prefer you to run it by me first :) thank you!

Can i please reserve 12) Heaven Must Be Missing An Angel if i cant get it done i am sorry but i will try to do it tonight

4) The Angels Wanna Wear My Red Shoes
And
16) A Sinner Kissed An Angel

Amazing titles, it was so hard to decide!

When Fallen Angels Fly and Poison Angel, please!

Angel eyes and on sweet angel could i please change it to sweet lips of an angel??
*Gem*

Xx Angel Eyes xX

From the very moment I caught a glimpse
Of your beautiful blue angel eyes
I knew then and there, that you were the one
Who would take my heart to new highs

The love you give me is pure and true
It's like finding my right way home
After years of praying to angels above
God gave me one of my own

Cos thats what you are, an angel in disguise
Who I love with all of my heart
And angels never lie, so i believe you
When you tell me we'll never part

I can't imagine my life now without you
You make each days as special as the last
Your kisses, your hugs, even holding your hand
Causes my heart to beat unnaturally fast

I never expected to find my own angel
Someone I could love for eternity
I look at you, a smile across my face
And the eyes of an angel smile back at me

*Gem*
Copyright©GemmaStott2007

Xx Sweet Lips Of An Angel - Ottava Rima xX

Those sweet lips of an angel get me each time
So luscious and soft and so heavenly
They start to move closer until they brush mine
Kissing me softly and so sensually
I start getting tingles up and down my spine
As you lay me down on the pillows gently
You smile and tell me you love me so much
Still driving me crazy with your teasing touch

Those sweet lips of an angel, smiling so sweet
Lulling me into a state of sheer bliss
Whispering sweet words, my heart skips a beat
Feels like I'm falling in a love filled abyss
If this was a tape I'd keep it on repeat
I just want to stay locked in your angel kiss
This whole entire night just feels so surreal
These feelings I have, I just can't conceal

Those sweet lips of an angel start to explore
I bask in the pleasure your teasing provides
As our clothes fall into a heap on the floor
I love the feeling as our skin collides
Feeling a sensation I've not felt before
It's all because of this love you've supplied
I reach out and trace the smile on your face
I feel so lucky wrapped in your embrace

Those sweet lips of an angel kiss me with care
And then we begin and it just feels so right
You've shown me that there's no need to be scared
I look deep in your eyes and hold you so tight
Then my body feels like it's floating on air
And I've reached a place where my heart takes flight
We lay close together, bodies intertwined
Those lips of angel get me every time

*Gem*
Copyright©GemmaStott2007

This type of poem is a poem written in 8-line octaves. Each line is of a 10 or 11 syllable count in the following rhyme:
One stanza poem. a, b, a, b, a, b, c, c
Two stanza poem. a, b, a, b, a, b, c, c. d, e, d, e, d, e, f, f
Three stanza poem. a, b, a, b, a, b, c, c. d, e, d, e, d, e, f, f. g, h, g, h, g, h, i, i ... so on and so on

Angels Lullaby please thanks xxx alex xxx

Here is mine, i hope it is ok.

Heaven must be missing an angel

by Nikki

One day out of the blue, there he was
He didn't care I wasn't perfect, to him I had no flaws
The way he looked so innocent and sweet
I knew my love was as solid as concrete

Every morning when I get out of bed
All my happiness fills my head
We live our lives now, happily together
I know in my heart it will be forever

Before I met him, my life was hell
All my life I did nothing but rebel
I had bad friends who ruined my life
And than one day I picked up a knife

I started hurting myself all the time
Hoping one day happiness will be mine
My life was a complete mess
And this is a thing I could never confess

We became good friends, as close as could be
Than I realized something new was happening to me
On the outside I was perfect, nothing wrong
I knew I loved this man all along

He saw through my anger, saw through my hate
Somehow in my heart I knew it was fate
He is so perfect, he has such a beautiful mind
I knew I could leave my past behind

He was sent to me from the heavens above
He was sent to me, to keep me faithful
That's the reason that I know
Heaven must be missing an angel

# 6 Fallen Angel please....I actually have this as a trilogy...

Fallen Angel by Debbylyn

The Angel and Mystic
With poems and notes
Crossed patterns and sorrows
With words they each wrote

The twig and the topaz
Of fiber and fire
Burned in their hearts
Lit a funeral pyre

No mercy, lost Angel
The iceberg too steep
Heart torn, the Mystic
In blood snow he weeps

Fallen the Angel
Wanders once more
Searching each grain
As it washes to shore

The Mystic he promised
To meet her again
But billions of echoes
Float through the glen

As emptiness fills her
She makes her descent
Cursed her soul cries
An eternal lament

2) Angels with Dirty Faces

please and thank-you. :]

Thank you Britt it's fine!

Oh and Britt and DarkSpirit I didn't update the reserves right away so you guys are an exception and the only people who can do the same poem and its actually fine because Britt tweaked the title a little bit. Sorry about that!

I want to reserve "Angel of Mine", please.

When is the contest over?

Calling All Angels

Calling All Angels.

From somewhere in the darkness,
there lies a burdened heart -
fearful for the life that is
so gracefully torn apart.
Hoping for a miracle,
praying for defeat -
Calling on Angels
to their feet.

Perfection in each fall: She dies.
And nobody ever tries,
to save one life to live,
to mend a heart, to give.
She's broken now, I know,
dead within the ground -
Calling all Angels
to come and surround.

With broken lives and hearts galore
we hear the angels whisper "forevermore".
And, dandelions grow so high,
flying with angels in the sky.
Lonely times she has lived
with crimson colors about her skin.
Calling all Angels
to fly within.

- - - - -

Reserve "Lost Angel"

Pleeze and Fanks

~Pete.

All done, great contest!

Wow...there are still so many poems left! feel free to take two! don't let these beautiful titles get left to waste! lol just kidding

Not my best work for sure, but hey - no ones perfect (although some deny that).

Lost Angel

The dark side ensnares this strayed lonely entity.
Jealousy, Lust and Pride roam its identity.
Sinister thoughts of the sins you'd perform.
Plaguing those thoughts is a lack of reform.

~~~~~~~~~~~Jealousy~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Needing to gaze at her soul through human eyes.
Of your desperate desire you wish to apprise.
You wish to be mortal, content in her embrace.
Loathingly; loyalties bitterly misplaced.

~~~~~~~~~~~~Lust.~~~~~~~~~~~~
Lips so full and rich, ones you long to kiss
Held lovingly together in such taboo bliss.
Naked bodies cling like fresh shooting vine,
Writhing in passion bodies intertwine.

~~~~~~~~~~~~Pride.~~~~~~~~~~~~
You're above being subjected to such desperate urges.
Out of spite for all humans, your prides re-emerges.
A human doesn't deserve your discard from Eden.
Why suffer a place where all beings are even?

Emotions not associated with this spiritual being,
Feelings that a fall from grace is guaranteeing.
Despair at the passion and the wishes thereof,
Share some compassion for a lost angel in love.

~Pete.

Angels Wanna Wear my Red Shoes

by NyellMoonlight

Apocalyptic signatures fascinate doorsteps
of my black-hearted, damned nature;
dictionaries with symbols hide paranoia,
disordering sounds that flooded empty crates.

Tip- toeing through lunatic realms of destruction,
exchanging wings for myopic pleasures-
angels wanna wear my red shoes,
want to wildly prance between hoops of fire.

Gently I laid the head down on pillow,
leaving swords and daggers in mist of dreams.
Libraries and highways recolored substations
of already wounded, shivering conscience.

Looking sea-serpents straightly in the fangs ,
morphing temptations into shattering disasters-
angels wanna wear my red shoes,
want to feel secret blisses of pain.

Thirteen bloody eyes guard my bed tonight,
blinking hauntingly from the deepest obscurity;
sordid stars pour poisons from the sky,
washing away materials of perfect mistakes.

Hiding behind sights sublime, unseen,
elegantly absorbing four raging elements-
angels wanna wear my red shoes,
want to, for the first time, taste virtual darkness.

A Sinner Kissed an Angel

by NyellMoonlight

Blood on the hands, back against the wall,
bleak hopes die, story's ready to unfold;
craving for precise yet fragmented ecstasy
endlessly bound, chained to ebony.

Maneuvers of his spirit implore for solace,
under peaceful sunrises, in her loving arms;
encounters with hysteria are emblems of his past
behind crimson curtains and destroyed paths.

A sinner who kissed an angel he was,
irreversibly lost between her purple smiles,
condemned to drink all memories at once
behind the horizon of fragrant ballads.

A sinner raised through havoc and brutality he was,
inevitably convicted in her hazel eyes,
soulless product of darkened hues,
learned to walk alone, in the shadows to hide.

Once he exchanged obscurity for brightness
cigarette smoke for cinnamon kisses,
wounded heart for bouquets of scarlet roses
without learning how to avoid the thorns...

"I'm no angel" please

~The Angels Lullaby~

Soft whispers; The wind of death.
Approaches the area more than often,
An inevitable fate lies in store for most
Too many lives it is costing.

Poverty; An unnecessary disease
The angels lullaby is never a step too far,
Whispers of death nearer than ever.
Children; losing mind. In state of who they are.

On his little broken knees at night,
A frail child prays a plea.
'Please angel, take my unworthwhile life',
'Set my torn, bruised heart free'.

'Dream a Dream of love
May heaven now release your soul.
Another world is now upon you',
The angel's lullaby sung.

Walking three miles each day,
Her fractured little toes stumble slowly,
Reaching the water, dirty, contaminated.
Mysterious faces glaring as she creeps boldly.

A camp; The red cross patrol.
Fighting the battle, to save innocent lives,
Insides bleeding tears however,
For their release; The angel's lullaby.

'Dream a Dream of love
May heaven now release your soul.
Another world is now upon you',
The angel's lullaby sung...

Contest ends tomorrow so please get those poems in!

All the poems look great!!!

Heya, you still have reserved next to my name, i've done all my poems now. Just letting you know.

I'm No Angel

Painting on a beautiful smile, pretending to care
Acting innocent, in reality I'm harsh mean and unfair
Glowing eyes that sparkle, covering up all the lies
Everyone loves me, but I'm happily living in disguise

Thinking I'm so sweet, when all I do is play mind games
Taking pleasure in shame, purposely causing pain
A flawless exterior, hides all the evil that I hold inside
Relishing in the fact, that so many people have cried

Getting high of pain, enjoying all of the misery
Watching other's slowly fall apart, to me is ecstasy
Playing people of on each other, laughing inside
It's so easy to cause trouble, barely have to try

Yet no one knows, "Such an angel," they smile
No idea behind my disguise, mind is full of guile
Wish someone would play, that would be just fine
Make it a little harder, to outwit them everytime

Intricately spun lies, spinning rapidly out of control
Such a long time ago, that darkness took my soul
Enjoying all of the drama, and many tears that fall
No one ever guesses, I'm the one who caused it all

Just a few more hours! I hope everyone got theirs in because I'm going to be closing the contest soon and the winners will be announced tomorrow!

You're my angel
And I need you
You were sent from up above
To watch over me

The first times we went out
I just took you for granted
I didn't want anything to grow between us
And now we are happily engaged

I was blessed from up above
Never thought I'd find find this angel of mine
But you came into my life
And gave me all your love

I can never live without you
Because I got you in my heart
We will always be together
Because I need you from now and forever

You never leave my side
Except when you have to work
I don't have much to offer
But you depend on my love

Winners have been announced! See above ^^^

Thanks for the placing! Congrats to all the winners and other entries....great stuff!!!!

Ooh thank you so much for the placing :) do you want us to pm you the poems, or are you choosing at random? either way works for me. && congratulations to all the winners!

Wow... Thanks a lot! :)

Thanks for the placing!

Just pick whichever five take your fancy =)

Thanks x