PLZ TAKE A LOOK AT MY POEM

Its the only one called untitled........ I just finished writing it today and I would really like it if you took the time to read it and comment on it.. if u have any idea as to what I should call it then plz post the title here and I will consider it.

it's awesome. the vivid imagery, word choice, passion, everything was on point. i don't want to name your poem b/c i feel that it should be derived from the feeling that you get when you read it. but i will say that it's an excellent poem. great job. i just hope you didn't really mean everything you said in it. take care. ;-)

hey jay thanx a lot for your comment.. but if you vould just take what you said here and post it under my poem I would be very greatful.. thanx a lot