Australians

Hey Aussies
I'm Incognito, a Melbournian. I just wrote a poem called 'Welcome to sweet Australia' I wanna know what you guys think, and i put it in the nature section, dunno why, couldn't really find anywhere else for it. But please read it and comment I would be grateful I have never really written a poem like this and it took me hours so please check it out and see if u agree.

Hey,
I'm a Melbournian too. So I definetely will check it out and leave my honest comment... but I love this country heaps, so I will be brutally honest with it :)
But I'm sure it'll be great, I'll go check it out now.