Pink titles contest last round

Ok, the final three people in this round are,

1. Gem
2. Jenna
3. Pete

This is going to be a kind of collab poem. So each of you take it in turns Gem, Jenna then Pete to write a stanza in the poem. Once you all have wrote 3 stanzas, I will deconstruct what I liked and disliked about every stanza and pick a winner that way.

Make sense? If not pm me and I'll elaborate a bit more....

After this round is finished you are all welcome to post it as a collab on your poetry. (Please give recognition to the people who helped you though)

I will start a stanza then Gem writes the next, then Jenna then pete etc..

*POEM*

A wealthy family sits together at night,
Talking about their eventful day.
A Lady; clutching her knees outside,
Closing her eyes as she prays.

A wealthy family sits together at night,
Talking about their eventful day.
A Lady; clutching her knees outside,
Closing her eyes as she prays.

Prays to the stars shining above
As they cast their sweet light upon her face
She huddles inside her dull threadbare coat
Sitting on top of a battered suitcase

Edit... LoL

A wealthy family sits together at night,
Talking about their eventful day.
A Lady; clutching her knees outside,
Closing her eyes as she prays.

Prays to the stars shining above
As they cast their sweet light upon her face
She huddles inside her dull threadbare coat
Sitting on top of a battered suitcase.

Tick . Tock . Time is slipping away,
And as she screams into the stars,
She cries for the memory of yesterday --
Fading into the footsteps of her lonely scars.

This is great, lol. C'mon Pete, your turn =)

OOps, sorry it's taken me so long - I'm in the process of moving house so didn't notice my turn had come around...

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A wealthy family sits together at night,
Talking about their eventful day.
A Lady; clutching her knees outside,
Closing her eyes as she prays.

Prays to the stars shining above
As they cast their sweet light upon her face
She huddles inside her dull threadbare coat
Sitting on top of a battered suitcase.

Tick . Tock . Time is slipping away,
And as she screams into the stars,
She cries for the memory of yesterday --
Fading into the footsteps of her lonely scars.

A once charming, carefree, contented creature
Now just a sullen, sorry, shattered soul.
Forced on by painful dreary memories.
Trudging toward a new found goal...

A wealthy family sits together at night,
Talking about their eventful day.
A Lady; clutching her knees outside,
Closing her eyes as she prays.

Prays to the stars shining above
As they cast their sweet light upon her face
She huddles inside her dull threadbare coat
Sitting on top of a battered suitcase.

Tick . Tock . Time is slipping away,
And as she screams into the stars,
She cries for the memory of yesterday --
Fading into the footsteps of her lonely scars.

A once charming, carefree, contented creature
Now just a sullen, sorry, shattered soul.
Forced on by painful dreary memories.
Trudging toward a new found goal...

Catching her case on the corner of despair
Her whole life tumbles onto the ground
Memories scattered amongst the debris
She falls to her knee's as tears rain down

I've waited long enough for my turn - I skipped ahead.

A wealthy family sits together at night,
Talking about their eventful day.
A Lady; clutching her knees outside,
Closing her eyes as she prays.

Prays to the stars shining above
As they cast their sweet light upon her face
She huddles inside her dull threadbare coat
Sitting on top of a battered suitcase.

Tick . Tock . Time is slipping away,
And as she screams into the stars,
She cries for the memory of yesterday --
Fading into the footsteps of her lonely scars.

A once charming, carefree, contented creature
Now just a sullen, sorry, shattered soul.
Forced on by painful dreary memories.
Trudging toward a new found goal...

Catching her case on the corner of despair
Her whole life tumbles onto the ground
Memories scattered amongst the debris
She falls to her knee's as tears rain down

The family she sees have no way to know,
As they sit inside and enjoy their feast
Her family's gone to where she couldn't go
Alone and deserted by her recently deceased...

*Sorry it took a rather morbid turn*

So when it is my turn? Where's Jenna? I'm lost, lol

I`m sorry, I`ve been super busy and
haven`t really been getting onto the
computer lately . So uhm, since he took
my part am I supposed to write after
what he said, or . . . ? =\