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  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    TITLE: Dead On Arrival
    BY: SarahDale

    As my heart then ripped by a sudden change of stare
    Glares revealing reality along the edge of despair
    Confusion heightened, shattered truth I cannot ignore
    His hands entangled with yours, cold tears flow for more
    Raised the pain so deeply, lost in hearts pieces I declare

    Memories that have come to past, you don't bother to care
    Those sweet kisses of love in the dark, finger tips on your hair
    Preceding the altar, pledged to live life together forevermore
    As my heart then ripped

    Void road I'll stroll, to the seen reality I'm now aware
    Memories will be buried, will remain forgotten, I swear
    Pictures soon to be scattered and torn along our floor
    Smokescreen of distrust will glide as you open our door
    Leaving promises rotten and broken, suspicion to wear
    As my heart then ripped

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    Rondeau
    A Rondeau is a French form, 15 lines long, consisting of three stanzas: a quintet, a quatrain, and a
    sestet with a rhyme scheme as follows: aabba aabR aabbaR. Lines 9 and 15 are short - a
    refrain (R) consisting of a phrase taken from line one. The other lines are longer (but all of the
    same metrical length).

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    Don't forget everyone, new deadline is Febuary =)

  • I Seem to be the Heartless
    16 years ago

    When I said I Loved You, I Swear I Lied.

    When I first met you,
    I could never have known
    That I would feel this way -
    That I could now feel this alone.

    When we first got together
    And you held me so tight,
    I could never have guessed
    How lonely I'd be tonight.

    And when you first kissed me,
    Pressed your lips against mine,
    I never realised
    That I'd never again find a love so kind.

    But when I said I loved you,
    I swear I lied.
    Love could never explain
    This pain I feel inside.

    I swear I lied.
    What else could I do?
    You no longer wanted me -
    You said we were through.

    I thought I could make you stay
    With that one simple phrase.
    Thought I could keep you with me
    For a couple more days.

    But I don't feel
    As I did a couple of days before -
    I don't love you.
    No, I don't love you anymore.

    Copyright©JosieWentzel02January2008

  • Kenny
    16 years ago

    By the way, , , Gem, , i'm done! thanks. . .

  • I Seem to be the Heartless
    16 years ago

    I Wrote This for You

    This is just a short poem,
    A little note
    That I wrote just for you.

    I want to tell you
    Just how I feel;
    How you make me feel;
    How I'm hurting;
    How I'm dying.
    I need you in my life,
    But yet you are the one
    Who causes all this heartache.

    But how can this be?
    I cannot live with you,
    But I will be sure to die
    If I spend one more day
    Without you...

    Copyright©JosieWentzel02January2008

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    When I Said I Loved You, I Swear I Lied

    When I told you I was falling for you
    You bought so easily into my lies
    You never once doubted my feelings
    Or saw the hatred concealed in my eyes

    When I told you I cared for you
    Your stupid ego was far to big to see
    That I was lying right through my teeth
    For you, I was planning endless misery

    When I kissed you softly on the lips
    Never once did you seem to believe
    That I was messing with your heart
    And sweetheart, you were so naive

    When I nestled into your embrace
    Thought you again controlled my heart
    Never questioning if I was being true
    Oblivious that I wanted to tear you apart

    When I whispered those three little words
    You bought so easily into my false disguise
    Never guessed everything was about revenge
    Here's the truth...everything I said was lies.