2/6 FOB

Ok. Now now this should be better to explain now after the first one already running..

This is the second of six contests. All using titles taken from the three Fall Out Boy albums.
I will be judging each contest separately, so there will be winners and HM's who will receive comments and then there will be an overall top three when all the contests are done who will win the biggest prizes.

Now you don't have to enter all six contests to win the top prize, (although you will have a bigger chance) You just have to blow me away with your talent. =)

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Each contest will have twenty titles. The first two will be from the first album, the second two from the second album and the last two from the third album. So i will be using a lot of titles to choose from =)

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Not a lot of rules..

1) Try not to swear, it's allowed but no over the top cursing.
2) Try to keep profanity to a minimum. I don't mind it but don't write a porno, lol
3) If you write a specific format, explain it when you're finished
4) Can be old or new, i don't mind but impress me =)
5) Max of three poems per person and a max of three poets per titles (towards the end, this may be increased so keep an eye out if a title you like is full)
6) Have fun.

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Titles:

* Sending postcards from a plane crash
- JustSayGoodbye - Reserved
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* My insides are copper, I'd kill to make them gold
- Prophecies In Kodak -Reserved
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* Thank your lucky stars that everything I wish for will never come true
- xPinkDizzyTeacupx - Reserved
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* When I go I will forget everything about you
- aDORKable x3 - Reserved
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* There's a light on in Chigago
- The Queen of Spades - Reserved
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* Boys/Girls like you are overrated
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* Curse on your lips (hope they taste of me forever)
- Britt - Done
- Beautiful Chaos - Reserved
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* Loaded words and loaded friends are loaded guns to our heads
- Britt - Reserved
- HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG - Reserved
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* The Pro's and Con's of Breathing
- HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG - Reserved
- Prophecies In Kodak -Reserved
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* Calm before the storm
- The Queen of Spades - Reserved
- Allison - Reserved
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* I want to hate you half as much as I hate myself
- NyellMoonlight - Reserved
- Decay In The Dark - Reserved
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* My pen is the barrel of the gun; remind me which side you should be on
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* I wish I was as invisible as you make me feel *FULL*
- NyellMoonlight - Reserved
- HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG - Reserved
- The Devils Own Bitch - Done

* Between your smiles and regrets *FULL*
- Beautiful Chaos - Reserved
- XD Fight For Whats Right XD - Reserved
- Allison - Reserved

* There's one born every minute
- XD Fight For Whats Right XD - Reserved
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* Reinventing the wheel to run myself over
- NyellMoonlight - Done
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* Tell me your sorry with a straight face
- xPinkDizzyTeacupx - Reserved
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* Take this to your grave and I'll take it to mine
- ReproducedByIntelligence - Done
- Decay In The Dark - Reserved
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* Hate the way you say my name like it's something secret
- The Queen of Spades - Reserved
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* I still know the way to make your make-up run *FULL*
- I R Jordannn - Done
- Britt - Reserved
- xPinkDizzyTeacupx - Reserved

Deadline for the these contests is 1st January so plenty of time!
Good luck everyone and have fun!

*Gem*

Thank your lucky stars that everything i wish for will never come true, tell me you're sorry with a straight face, &&I still know the way to make your make up run.

Reinventing the wheel to run myself over
I wish I was as invisible as you make me feel
I want to hate you half as much as I hate myself

Thanks!

-There's a light on in Chicago
-Hate the way you say my name like it's something secret
-Calm before the storm

Thank you!

Between Your Smiles & Regrets, Curse on your lips (hope they taste of me forever) please and thank you :)

When I go I will forget everything about you

please :]

<33

Between your smiles and regrets and There's one born evey minute please :D

Take this to your grave and I'll take it to mine

The Pros and Cons of Breathing
plz!

*ME*

Loaded Words and Loaded Friends are Loaded Guns to Our Heads,
I Wish I was as Invisible as You Make Me Feel,
The Pros and Cons of Breathing .

Take this to your grave and I'll take it to mine
I want to hate you half as much as I hate myself

please.. :)

I Wish I was as Invisible as You Make Me Feel, please.

Thanks

Josie

* My insides are copper, I'd kill to make them gold

* The Pro's and Con's of Breathing

Please reserve me:
Calm before the storm
Between your smiles and regrets

Thanks! ^_^

I Wish I was as Invisible as You Make Me Feel {ACROSTIC}

If ever I had felt alone, today

Was the day. You made me feel like
I wasn't even there; like you never
Saw me standing there
Holding out my hand to be saved.

I felt so invisible.

Weren't you the one who
Asked me to be yours,
Saying you want more than just a fling?

Aren't you the on who
Said to me that

I am everything you want in a woman? And
Now, you pretend that what we had has
Vanished into thin air.
I no longer exist to you do I? Your
Savage,
Insensitive,
Brutalness has
Left me wishing that I had never
Even been born.

After all the things you've
Said and done, I believed that

Your words would
One day come true.
Unfortunately that was never to be.

My heart has been violently
Abused by someone who I thought would
Keep it safe,
Even when the skies turned black.

My soul was destroyed by you,
Even though I somehow knew it would be. I

Feel as if I am invisible. The
End has come way too soon. I believed this would be an
Endless love. But it was a stupid thing to hope for. You have
Left me wishing I was as invisible as you make me feel.

Copyright©JosieWentzel21November2007

Acrostic poetry is where the first letter of every line spells out the title.

Take this to your grave and i'll take it to mine.

Just a few last words to calm my soul.
I'm aware the truth shall set me free.
So, here it goes; one last time, darling:

Words aren't enough to tell you, what you mean to me.
The pain that I felt the day you left me,
and the joy that overcame me the day we began.

It's as if it all happens for a reason, all but this - that is.
The feelings I feel as of now - they're just agonizing pain.
tearing me apart, ruining all that I barely have left.

Like a scavenger searching for something more than I have.
because, that's what I am but a wreck living on the streets,
Beliving there's someone, something - somehow it's out there.

I can feel it from my toes to my finger tips, and I'm just so sorry
that the someone, something - somehow isn't you.
I've prayed each night for it all to be a facade, a truthful lie.
filled with bliss and love, the joy that overcame me that day -

And, I wish to feel it again, somehow, someday I know I will.
But I pray to god it's with you, the love of my life.
I can't, I never will love someone the way that I have loved you.

But, it seems as if I'm lost, broken this very day; left with nothing
Yet, I still promise you my life, my soul -until the very end.
So, darling let's leave it at that, nothing more to be said.
Just, take this to your grave, and I'll take it to mine.

Reinventing the wheel to run myself over

The seconds ticking backwards inside the head
outlined with yellow shades of withered moments
slowly kill tattered sweetness of dreams,
awaking the mockingbirds to wave starless requiems.
Imagination's running between sunflowers and insects.

Depraved games are coming back to haunt me,
entwining with diseases and foreseen catastrophes;
tired eyes long to be exiled of twisted perception
while the heart echoes sorrow within every beat.
My footsteps lead to bloodstained gallows.

The reinventions of acridness became overwhelming
with every breath colored like fallacies of deceptions.
Burden laid on the soul cannot be burned down again
(the flames stifle under the floods of tears).
I'm begging for one more hour of serene ignorance.

All updated =)

Curse On Your Lips (Hope They Taste of Me Forever)

Forever used to be,
Now a distant thought,
There was no holding on,
No matter how I fought.

Each day your eyes grew weaker,
I knew you didn't care,
I blamed myself for everything,
My mind in disrepair.

But now I'm thinking clearly,
Seeing all you hide,
Drinking in your madness,
I hex those lips that lied.

Always shall they yearn,
And taste my subtle breath,
Never to forget,
Your final thought in death.

If you get to heaven,
By the gates you'll wait,
In hopes I will forgive you,
And forevers not too late.

Hate the way you say my name like it's something secret
My insides are copper, I'd kill to make them gold
Curse on your lips (hope they taste of me forever)

ta, xx

I wish I was as invisible as you make me feel

Ponder the rhythms of my running feet
through the fogs painted with frequencies
of delicate distances; Forgive my ignorance

but I can't find the words for this state of mind...
...traces of insecurities corrupt numbed tongue
forcing me to drown in the sea of mute smiles.

Tribulations overcome fatal fantasies molding them
into cold substance of this pastel morning-
our eyes meet over woods of facial expressions;

Endless questions burn blocked mind, compress innerness
with complex labyrinth of absurdities; breathing slows down
as you walk through my thoughts, turning the head away.

Between Your Smiles & Regrets

Serenity has fallen over me,
I am neither here nor there,
His nor hers,
I am nothing.

Energy floating on the mist,
The world cascades away,
Flowing over the edge of the universe,
Beyond my sight.

No sadness or fear as I watch it go,
No happiness,
No regret,
Just peace...

Alone,
A world of silence,
The construction of wisdom,
Moments of insight.

Destruction would be letting go,
Letting go of that freedom,
Relinquishing the solace,
Dependent on fallacies.

World or no world,
You are never alone,
Each being possessing,
A world within themselves.

Too often unexplored,
Taken for granted,
Feared,
There should be no fear in truth.

When I Go I Will Forget Everything About You

A clean break was what I was hoping for;
I couldn't hold onto these feelings anymore.
Moving would be hard, but I knew it was right,
I could keep losing this useless fight.

So I pack my treasures carefully away,
The memories flood back to each special day:
Christmas, Valentine's, and each day in between -
Each sharing the secrets no one has seen.

I smile with the laughs as I pack the things -
I had forgotten how much happiness you bring.
Each "I love you" holds onto something we had -
But then it was time to relive the bad.

You broke my heart when you said we were done,
We were once two, now I'm just one.
You left me for her, how I almost forgot!
You said you'd always love me but I think not.

But before I left, I did something I'll never regret;
I gave you something, just so you'd never forget.
I kissed you again, for the very last time -
It felt so good that for one second, you were mine.

With resolve in my eyes and a smile on my face,
I was able to let go of this place.
I laughed as I knew exactly what to do:
When I Go I Will Forget Everything About You

Take this to your grave and I'll take it to mine.

Plethora of lies estranged from the insipid stare of your eyes,
taunting my tender sentiments and our porcelain minds.
The arrant violence between us left caustic aspersions,
which fervently masticate the abode of our deceptions.

Castigate these ample tears invoking ardent sorrows,
which stalk my footsteps and linger endlessly in shadows.
Replacing flagrant longing with scar-stained eulogy,
we are lost in the lovelorn of our arcane purgatory.

The breath of your face sets me into lucid euphoria,
diverting my secrecy upon a curse to remember.
Tonight we reside in ephemeral Elysium,
before the dawn of a dream ends our elusive requiem.

The silence exchanged and affections too stubborn to be said,
you are the iris of my heart and I will never let you fade.
Embrace this ghastly feint of evading emotions,
and let the abundant scars of frail regret be a distraction.

Renegade the disguise that mask our prided ascendancy,
revealing wistful tears enshrined by a heart of elegy.
Depart form this illusive moment, out memories intertwined.
Hush my dear, take this to your grave and I'll take it to mine.

I want to hate you half as much as I hate myself.

Your cannibal gaze penetrates into my muted eyes,
savoring the epitome of deceit in mock disguise.
There is no more quiet feint or enlightened sympathy,
I'd rather you taint my reflection with your hypocrisy.

Let this felony of pretense burn and slide away,
to unveil a vulnerable heart that silently fades astray.
Embrace this misery that drapes over your smile,
shut your eyes and allow the curtains to close for a while.

The frisson of my emptiness replaced by abhorrence,
slowly consumed by ascending abode of our ignorance.
This morose lovelorn turns fervently into hostile enmity,
after relishing your arrant act of verbal treachery.

Your artifice reflects my face of shrouded desolation,
mirrored by the perfidy that taunted our aversion.
I can't find a single reason to consign forgiveness,
when you have been so brutally thoughtless.

With your imprudent affections, I let them impale.
I furiously chided my odium for being so frail.
After you drained my mere sanity until there's nothing left,
I want to hate you half as much as I hate myself.

I want to hate you half as much as I hate myself

I was in love with a dream, lost the mind
played with cliches that wildly pranced...
promises were laid in porcelain bowls filled
with bewitchments and lonesome madness.

...the story unfolded within your echoing laughter,
tortured pupils with broken light of fairytales
as my self-esteem melted in front of catastrophic beauty...

I was captured within hateful visions of loneliness,
trapped between walls of grasping silence...
Disappointment recited lyrics of brutal defeat-
"I want to hate you half as much as I hate myself"

Can I have this ??"Calm before the storm"

Please and thank you!

TITLE: Calm Before the Storm (Villanelle)
BY: SarahDale

Our souls intertwine as we taste the crisp of ocean dew
Across the vast shoreline of heartfelt emotions
Carefree and calm before the storm, like butterflies we flew

Along the white sands of time, our love has eventually grew
Strong winds gliding on our face, we remain sturdy and firm
Our souls intertwine as we taste the crisp of ocean dew

Blood red sun descends, severe warmth it blew
Beneath the whirlpool of danger, we proceed with ignorance
Carefree and calm before the storm, like butterflies we flew

Waves crushing and wrecking sailing boats, only few
Breeze getting colder, igniting our hearts loving passion
Our souls intertwine as we taste the crisp of ocean dew

I foresee no harm within your presence, one thing I knew
Wrapped with your delicate arms, I feel secured and safe
Carefree and calm before the storm, like butterflies we flew

In the midst of looming death, along the air our names we drew
Lacing each others hand with a love so vivid and forever true
Our souls intertwine as we taste the crisp of ocean dew
Carefree and calm before the storm, like butterflies we flew

Take This to Your Grave and I'll Take it to Mine please...

Thanks

Josie

Take This to Your Grave and I'll Take it to Mine (Office Romance)

When we started this,
You said we had to keep it low.
You said we had to ensure
That not one single person knows.

I've kept to your request,
Although it has been difficult
But I swear to you,
Not a word, have my lips spilt.

But why do we
Have to run around and hide?
I know I am just your "mistress" -
Your little 'thing' on the side,

But I don't care
If the others at work know.
I have fallen in love with you
And it's something I want to show.

An office romance -
I guess it was never a good idea.
Having the one you've fallen for
Being so distant, but oh so near.

You may be a director,
But I get no financial gain from this!
All I want is to taste
The flavour of your lips.

I want to feel your arms
Wrapped tightly around me.
I want to hold you now,
For everyone to see.

But I have stuck to my promise,
Like you've asked me to.
If you swear to take this to your grave,
I'll take it to mine too.

Copyright©JosieWentzel02January2008

Thank Your Lucky Stars That Everything I Wish For Will Never Come True

After everything we went through, all the pain you caused
You're fortunate I haven't made you pay dearly in blood
Every time I close my eyes, picture your disgusting smile
And I'm so overcome with rage I can barely think straight

Picturing your body lying completely still in front of me
Your eyes wide, unseeing; body as cold as you are now
Imagining satisfaction I'd feel to erase your existence
Visualizing hands around your neck, there'd be no higher pleasure

For all the suffering you caused, made me feel I was going insane
Yet all the time you were constantly professing your love for me
Every word that you uttered was just another spiteful lie
Taking delight in knowing I was falling hook line and sinker

But I'm telling you now darling, one day I'll have revenge
And you'll finally pay for everything that you did to me
Just be grateful that the one thing I wish for the most
Is the one thing that will fortunately never come true

Tell Me You're Sorry With A Straight Face

Seems every single day you're apologizing
Yet I'm still dubious about your words
For you can't even look me in the eyes
And enjoy it immensely when I hurt

Seems every time I'm yelling at you
You're laughing right in my face
No longer do you claim to love me
In your life and heart I have no place

Yet you're still uttering those words
Like they'll magically fix everything
Never caring about the pain I feel
Or all of the tears that you bring

Can't you show any compassion
Instead of only anger and distaste
Prove that once you did care for me
Apologize to me with a straight face

Loaded Words and Loaded Friends are Loaded Guns to Our Heads [Triquatrain]

At the count of three we`ll hold our breath, fight this down to the death;
Let the gunpowder rise and the tears dry so that we can see:
Loaded words and loaded friends, they`re loaded guns to our heads;
And I let your excuses take down the very best of me.

Through tired eyes it`s hard to see, the people we used to be;
So innocent and carefree, we hadn`t met the world yet,
But people come and people go, it`s a fact that we all know;
Unwilling to risk your unscathed back, you put me out like a cigarette.

High as hell I look to a picture carefully framed, a memory left unnamed;
But the smoke will clear and my head will pound,
Actions come with consequences I know, so I`ll be the first to go;
Because you couldn`t accept the real person that you found.

The roads we`ve walked on, they`re tainted with the blood we`ve drawn;
We took it all in vain, throwing fuel on this fire,
But I`m not ashamed of who I`ve become, you win some and you lose some;
And I`d rather lose a friend than win a liar.

-Jenna Elphick
January 28, 2008

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The Triquatrain form was created by Robert L. Huntsman. It is a quatrain poem in tri-rhyme where lines 1 and 3 have internal rhyme and lines 2 and 4 do not.
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I Still Know The Way To Make Your Makeup Run

{And as mascara stains your cheeks...I smile.}

Didn't you realize that eventually one day, sweetheart
Someone would tire of your idiotic stories and games?
That maybe one day, someone would do something
And make you appreciate that "paybacks a b.itch?"

If only you'd realized, you wouldn't be in this mess
Look at that; you're drowning, didn't you learn to swim?
The boot's on the other foot, you've become the toy
And oh how it amuses me to make you so ashamed

Look, I'm taking so much pleasure in your pain
Enjoying the fact you have no idea I'm causing it all
Whispering false words of comfort when you weep
Inside I'm reveling in the fact you're falling apart

Shouldn't play games with someone who can play better
You never stopped to think about that did you, honey?
Oh isn't it a shame you've fallen into your own deceit
Can you see the surface yet, do you know which way is up?

I'm guessing that the answer is no, you have no idea
It's a dangerous seductive game in the world of betrayal
But I guess you just never thought that far ahead
Oh sweetheart, don't you wish you'd learned to swim now?

They have super original titles.

Can I reserve theres a light on in Chicago?