The *COLOR* Contest <lovelon/style>

  • Lovelon Rules
    17 years ago

    This is Laura Lovelon bringing you another themed contest!

    All of these titles involve colors and you MUST incorporate some sort of imagery in your poem!

    -One person per title (unless I say so)
    -Must be at least 8 lines
    -Any style/rhyming is optional
    -Ends November 20th so you've got a little over a week!

    Open:
    1) Paint It Black-RESERVED (HollywoodxBangbang)
    2) Brown-Eyed Girl
    3) Purple Haze
    4) I'm Blue-RESERVED (Gabriellaxlovesxavampire)
    5) Behind These Hazel Eyes
    6) Forever Yellow Skies-RESERVED (Britt)
    7) Back in Black-RESERVED (NyellMoonlight)
    8) Purple Rain
    9) Blue Monday
    10) Red Red Wine-RESERVED (Allison)
    11) Blue Orchid
    12) Ebony and Ivory
    13) Chartreuse
    14) Little Pink Houses
    15) Violet
    15) Devil with the Blue Dress On
    16) Black and White
    17) Black Magic Woman
    18) Pale Blue Eyes-RESERVED (BeautifulChaos)
    19) It's Not That Easy Being Green-RESERVED (Jay)
    20) Little Red Corvette
    21) Yellow Butterfly

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    How many can we have?

    Paint it Black,
    Devil with the Blue Dress on
    Pale Blue Eyes.

    But if we`re only allowed one, just the first one please. :]]

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    Back in black
    Ebony and Ivory

    Thanks!

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    Pale Blue Eyes please

  • Allison
    17 years ago

    Red Red Wine please >>

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    Red, Red Wine
    By: Allison

    Natural sugar, tastes so sweet
    Set upon my rosy lips
    Blurring the edges of my thoughts
    Red, red wine

    Crystal glass with lipstick stains
    Smooth delight, pure ecstasy
    Seeing you with time well bought
    Red, red wine

    Love filled whispers, tingling flesh
    Sighing minds, fantasies met
    Images carved in gleaming stone
    Red, red wine

    Fingers laced, bodies near
    Happiness we've longed to share
    We will never be alone
    Red, red wine

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    I'm blue please

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    I'm Blue

    A little gasp escapes my lips
    as the green-yellow grass touches my fingertips
    my tongue engulfed in what seems violet fire
    how could it be possible for me to rise any higher?

    Your earthy smell, like crystal water
    the ripple that's my heart gets hotter
    my skin aflame, with memories
    cooled off by the shade of forgiving trees.

    A meadow of your mind, I'm in
    the breeze is every touch of your skin
    and though I stumble, I still run
    for birds forever flock to the sun.

    The rays of light carrying me
    shimmering with happiness for I'm finally free
    but even perfection has it's faults
    my walls collapse with a shuddering halt.

    I'm broken, hitting the cold concrete
    a violent shade of azure is defeat
    these tears rolling down my face now blue
    as I stand alone, for there was never you.

  • Lovelon Rules
    17 years ago

    Only one for right now so those who have put more than 1, I'll take the first one unless you tell me so, ok? Thank you!

  • Liquid Dreams
    17 years ago

    I'll reserve Behind These Hazel Eyes. thanks

  • Gem
    17 years ago

    Any chance of changing Blue orchid to blue chalk? lol

  • Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child
    17 years ago

    I want "devil with a blue dress on" THANK YOU!

    oh, and if it turns out we can do two, i want blue monday as well. IF IF IF.

  • Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child
    17 years ago

    Devil With The Blue Dress On

    Manicured fingers and French-tipped toes,
    Board straight hair and an artificial nose.
    Purple eye shadow and liquid black liner,
    60 pairs of shoes and all of them designer.
    Pounds of pale concealer and lip gloss out the @$$,
    Thinking she's the princess with the tiny shoes of glass.

    She's just the type of girl to kiss [your] boyfriend on [your] lawn,
    She's nothing but the devil with a blue dress on.

    Strutting down the halls in her bright blue mini skirt,
    Wearing something much to small to even call a shirt.
    Gucci black stillhetos and an bust the size of cars,
    She doesn't wanna listen, just talk about the stars.
    Detecting moral actions? On the radar, not a blip.
    They're wrapped around her finger as she cracks her little whip.

    She's just the type of girl to kiss [your] boyfriend on [your] lawn,
    She's nothing but the devil with a blue dress on.

    Brain the size of cashews with an ego big as hell,
    I was quite excited when the Queen of Drama fell.
    She held her head so high, and we'd kill to see her fall,
    And when we saw the tail, the Devil's female after all.
    And Satan's fear is karma, and karma, she's my girl.
    I always knew us losers would go on to rule the world.

    She was just the type of girl to kiss [your] boyfriend on [your] lawn,
    She was nothing but the devil with the bluest dresses on.

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    Brown-Eyed Girl for me please.

    Thanks.

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    17 years ago

    Brown Eyed Girl

    I'm that brown eyed girl
    That you fell in love with
    You fell in love with me
    And my pretty brown eyes

    I never give up on you
    And I never tell you lies
    You don't ask for much
    Because I always give you all my love

    I'm always down for you
    No matter the situation
    Whether it's something goos or bad
    I'll always be by your side

    I show you respect
    Even when we fight
    I never disrespect you
    And I'm glad you don't either

    I'll never change you for anyone
    Because you're very special to me
    I'll always be the brown eyed girl
    You fell in love with that night

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    --Back in Black--

    There's some stellar light under my eyelids
    quivering and making the shades so bright
    I'm starting to walk away from insanity of fallacies
    insatiably pondering waves of inner temptations.

    Oh, so lost (mistakes repeated under ebbs and tides)
    so scared and shattered- back in black,
    touched by the allurements of gorgeous dark angels
    and heretic thoughts that slipped from the demon's lips.

    There's unexplainable stupor inside the head,
    twirling and making the darkness so frail.
    I'm starting to fly away from toxic emeralds
    avidly drinking from the well of inner peace.

    Oh, so lost (mistakes repeated under the frozen moonlight)
    so sad and tattered- back in black,
    hands of obscurity forced me to dance twisted tango
    and maledict symphonies wrapped around the soul.

    There's some happiness etched on my palms,
    illuminating the paths through the deepest ebony.

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Paint it Black [Trijan Refrain]

    Ceramic hearts, they softly cry;
    From the pain they endure,
    A crack: from every good-bye --
    Nit-picking at the pure.
    Paint it black now, to match your heart,
    Whisper your lies, tear me apart;
    ................................Paint it black now,
    ................................Paint it black now,
    Pick the candidate for the part.

    Ceramic hearts, they softly cry;
    In the dead of the night,
    With every beat, they bleed dry;
    Building this obscene sight.
    Paint it black now, symbolize death;
    Choke me of my words and my breath.
    ................................Paint it black now,
    ................................Paint it black now,
    And sing sweet lullabies of death.

    Ceramic hearts, they softly cry;
    From silly teenage games,
    Hold me close to you, watch me die,
    As my tears douse the flames.
    Paint it black now, to match the day,
    It wreaks of death, these games we play;
    ................................Paint it black now,
    ................................Paint it black now,
    Laugh, as you lead my heart astray.

    -Jenna Elphick
    November 19, 2007

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    The Trijan Refrain, created by Jan Turner, consists of three 9-line stanzas, for a total of 27 lines. Line 1 is the same in all three stanzas. The first four syllables of line 5 in each stanza are repeated as the double-refrain for lines 7 and 8. The Trijan Refrain is a rhyming poem with a set meter and rhyme scheme as follows:
    Rhyme scheme: a/b/a/b/c/c/d,d refrain of first 4 words of line five /c
    Meter: 8/6/8/6/8/8/4,4 refrain/8

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    Sorry I completely gapped this one, i will have it done tonight.

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    Pale Blue eyes

    They glowed each time she smiled,
    They whispered by the fire,
    Lost behind her soulful gaze,
    Burning with desire.

    She was your siren on the rocks,
    Destined to strike land,
    No more floating on the clouds,
    Alone you've come to stand.

    You took for granted everything,
    She ever gave to you,
    Now cursed to hold the memory,
    Of eyes so pale and blue.