Calling all critical reviewers

Hey there, I don't really ask for this all too often. However, I would like to request that all of you out there who read and honestly critique poems read my poem "They Just Fade Away." It is sorta down their on my list of poems, but I want some advice/opinions on it. Any comments it does have are relatives of the "that was great!" comment. If you wish, I'll return the favor.

Thanks for giving it a shot :-)

hey, Sean, I guess I should have said something here, too... I sent some suggestions to you via private message... so if you have filters set up, it probably went to your junk mail... let me know if you didn't get it...

~Ann