Vampire Contest. >.<

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    I just had to make one. lol.
    and soooo....
    rules:
    only one poet for title, one title for poet, unless i change that later on. it has to be new, and about vampires, but it can be any like genre you want. just to tell you though, i don't like love poems as much unless they're REALLY good. so yea.
    it doesn't have to ryhme or have some sort of structure, you choose.
    ho humm

    titles:

    Reserved:
    ~Preying on Fear-Jessica
    ~Angel of pure black-Nyell Moonlight(DONE)
    ~Winged Hunters-Darkspirit(DONE)
    ~Temptation is a Color-(Forever Anonymous) Mina(DONE)
    ~Perfection was a Drop of Blood-The Queen of Spades(DONE)
    ~Innocence is Red-HollywoodxBangbang
    ~Hunger-Beautiful Chaos(DONE)
    ~A Melody of Thirst-Slave to the music(DONE)
    ~Cursed Minds-Bittersweet Decay
    ~A non-existent Heart-GothicVampyress(DONE)
    ~Traces of Blood-(Crystal gaze)Elaine
    ~Crimson Blossoms-Sarenightmarexx
    ~Tears of Molten Gold-David Wilson

    I will put more prizes in later. lol.

  • Jessica
    17 years ago

    Can I have "Preying On Fear" Please? I'll try and get it done tomorrow. :]

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    There you go. ^.^

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    ~Angels of Pure Black, Thanks!

  • Nix
    17 years ago

    ~Winged Hunters, pease

  • omgitsmina
    17 years ago

    Temptation is a Color.

  • The Queen of Spades
    17 years ago

    Perfection was a Drop of Blood, please and thank you!

  • HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG
    17 years ago

    Innocence is Red, please :]

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    Hunger please

  • Beautiful Chaos
    17 years ago

    Hunger

    A vampire's kiss,
    The sweetest pain,
    Losing your blood,
    Feeling it drain.

    His eyes are dark,
    His skin is cold,
    He sees your heart,
    He's taking hold.

    He lives in darkness,
    He takes you there,
    A sunless cavern,
    Of despair.

    You feel his lips,
    Still on your neck,
    Though they're not,
    You feel a wreck.

    Blood is dripping,
    Down your clothes,
    You feel this lust,
    As it flows.

    You wonder where,
    And why it comes,
    This want you have,
    What it becomes.

    He calls you forth,
    There is no fear,
    You go to him,
    He holds you near.

    He whispers now,
    You are his slave,
    You tilt your chin,
    For what he craves.

    You burn like fire,
    Such deadly lips,
    Which drain your life,
    And light your hips.

    You are his,
    No turning back,
    Your heart is slowly,
    Turning black.

  • Melpomene
    17 years ago

    A Melody of Thirst
    Please

  • Melpomene
    17 years ago

    A Melody of Thirst

    The melody of Manson wisps though out the air,
    "If I was your vampire" plays upon the atmosphere,
    Trickles down the spine the thirst for lusting blood,
    Puncturing the flesh with a stench of desire rising.
    Her lips of crimson colored gore, upon a paled face.

    "I am no Dracula" she whispers into blood rushing ears,
    "How cliche of you" wiping her only life force away,
    Turning the radio up "Death waits for no one." strikes a cord,
    Humming along with Manson, Again she repeats the song,
    "If I was your vampire" what other song could possibly play?

  • BittersweetDecay
    17 years ago

    Cursed Minds please ^^. Thank you
    PS: When does it end? O.o

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    Umm... sometime around December 1st. i will either shorten or lengthen the deadline depending on how it's going. ^.^

  • RobinAnn13
    17 years ago

    I'll take a shot at A Non-Existent Heart please. <3

  • Crystal Gaze
    17 years ago

    Hey Gab, can I try `Traces Of Blood.

    Im might not be able to do it, but I will attempt:)

    Luv ya

    --Elly

  • The Queen of Spades
    17 years ago

    Perfection Was A Drop of Blood

    Perfection was a taste
    Of your ivory skin
    Breaking quietly
    In my hungry mouth
    I felt the world
    Spinning fast
    A whirling void
    Of dark crimson
    The shade of night

    Perfection was the smell
    Of your luscious presence
    Drawing me in,
    Keeping me captivated
    I lost my will
    To run away to the moon
    For your scent
    Kept me warm
    I wanted to be near

    Perfection was your eyes
    That enrapturing glint
    Hypnotizing the organ
    Where my heart would be
    The sensations
    Of human mortality
    Still linger, still dwell
    Leaving me frightened
    In a stage of red liquidation

    Perfection was, a drop of blood
    In my mouth
    From your enthusiastic corpse
    Giving me heat, giving me life
    In such beautiful ways
    A dichotomy of innocence and evil

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    Wow, this is going quite fast. i'm happy!!!
    >.<

  • omgitsmina
    17 years ago

    I finished mine.

    Temptation is a Color

    You see, temptation is a color
    That comes in many shades
    And its beauty remains pure
    Because it never ever fades

    It's etched with white lies
    And outlined with a black heart
    Seducing you with crimson sin
    Begging you to tear them apart

    Because temptation is a color
    That comes in many shades
    And its beauty remains pure
    Because it never ever fades

    Teasing you with an innocent gesture
    A flick of the wrist, a turn of the head
    Before you know it, you've lost control
    Before you know it, they're already dead

    Because temptation is a color
    That comes in many shades
    And its beauty remains pure
    Because it never ever fades

    It paints the perfect picture
    Of all the things that I desire
    And no matter how much it hurts
    I cannot change what I require

    Because temptation is a color
    That comes in many shades
    And its beauty remains pure
    Because it never ever fades

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    Would you mind if i posted it here?

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    Oh, thank you!!!!
    ^.^

  • sarenightmarexx
    17 years ago

    Crimson Blossoms please

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    One more left!!!
    lalallalaallaa

  • Nix
    17 years ago

    Winged Hunters

    They flied, deathly-
    black- winged silhouettes, executers of darkness,
    leaving their bloody traces-
    highlighting crimson beauty of the sky.

    Soul- thieves cry above the abyss
    so powerless, motionlessly they stare
    in the game of survival-
    winged hunters seduced their victims.

    The Duke- Malediction- reaches for the knife
    and pulls it from the dream's substance,
    now he can join the audience
    while they watch collided thirst and blades.

    Hunters demand vengeance,
    prey falls into the night's embrace;
    invincibly divine, they rupture necks-
    that's what their red quest is about.

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    Angel of pure black

    He carried shades of crystallized damnation
    etched on the pale skin, entwined with fingertips,
    he melted my frosty movements with just one gaze
    trapping the mind into the webs of blazing allurements.

    Crimson seduction danced above bloodstained sheets
    hypnotizing the soul with every fragrant note
    of the melody cursed, melody plunged in malediction
    that replayed between sweet, deathly kisses.

    Elegant ecstasy mirrored in the blackened eyes
    while the shattering demise crawled down the body,
    deceivingly ticking within fastened heartbeats-
    Scarlet visions overwhelmed my craving senses.

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    Edit.

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    Okay, if the same thing happened to everyone else that happened to me, it's obvious that the deadline is going to be extended lol. so i'm going to say about December 20th for now and see how that goes. ^.^

  • RobinAnn13
    17 years ago

    Kk, here's mine now that this works again

    A Non-Existent Heart

    The glimmer of her fangs
    piercing through the night
    her ethereal blue eyes
    inspiring fright

    The screams of her victims
    as she starts to feed
    the satisfying sigh
    silencing her need

    The copper taste of blood
    feeling of power
    her mixing emotions
    bitter and sour

    Living in the darkness
    of which she can't part
    she slowly tries to fix
    her non-existent heart

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    Thank you!

  • BittersweetDecay
    17 years ago

    Is the contest still on? I just wanna know if I can write the poem I reserved. Thanks.

  • firexdancer
    17 years ago

    Yes it's still on.
    please write it. lol