Anyone care for more viewers?

I'll check out your poems if you leave a comment here, with hopefully a recommended poem to make the job easier coz I can't sift through everything written by everyone. Also if you want me to check out a friend's work or something, I will so just let me know. Ok? I'll check out at least one poem by everyone who replies, promise.

But just so you know, i do leave honest comments and I won't flatter your work if I don't like it. It doesn't mean your work is bad or anything, it just might not appeal to me. Still, I promise I'll check it out no matter what.

Thanks for the reply, will check out your stuff. Actually, I'll do so now...

can u check out my stuff too. tell me what u think about the rhyme scheme on "defenition of a Friend"

Thanks for the reply Kia. I read your poem and it was great. I love the fact that you weren't restricting yourself by trying to rhyme through the whole thing. Well done, I really understand the emotion there. Rock on.

can you read my most recent one, "What You Left Behind", I need some serious comments on it, it's about my deceased grandmother. Thanks a lot, I will make sure to check out some of yours! much love,
-Cheerfully Cynical

Wow, emma, your poem Lines was incredible, like vix's The Lost Boys. Totally awesome. Cheerfully, your poem was good, and quite touching. I loved reading these, they were so awesome. You guys are incredible poets!

If anyone wants more stuff to be checked out, go ahead, tell me. I have plenty of time to spend.

It's cool.

do you think you could check out "conspiracy theory" and any others you want of mine, it would be greatly appriciated

Can you check out some of my poems? "The Two Trees" or " A Poem for a Friend" or any that "jump out" to you, thanks so much!

Any of mine that haven't been voted for or commented please if you have time =)

can you please comment and rate my poems, one i particularly want 2 be commented is "Missing So Much of My Heart" thanx i really appriecate it

First of all, thank you to EVERYONE who checked out my stuff. I have replied to every comment here, and if I missed one, it was purely accidental and just tell me so I can fix it. I've been lucky coz everone who posts here has incredible work and thanks for letting me know what to read, makes my job a lot easier.

Also, I realise everyone has a right to their opinion and to have it heard, but people also must watch what they say or other's feelings get hurt. Don't wanna get all mushy here, but I reckon if you don't have anything good to say on the comments or discussion boards, don't say anything. It's a permanent mark that'll scar all their reviews. I personally NEVER give anyone a rating below 3, or post a critical comment. I just send a small message by email and if I'm ignored, then ok, not my problem. Also, not everyone writes basing all work on grammer. Emotion knows no rules remember?

Keep scribbling and I'll keep reading!
P.S. I repeat, to all whose stuff I checked (which is everyone) :- You guys are awesome. Some of you should try getting published!

could you please check out my childish fears poem

thanks for looking at my poem. it means alot. and i agree with you about if you dont like something dont be mean about it, suggest something better or go away. i will look into your poems now too, thank you.

Done and done John, and it was awesome. Like I said on your comments post, you've got a nice way of using imagery.

To Logan, you're welcome, and thanks.

I read some of your stuff, and I'm very sorry about what happened to you. My heartfelt apologies.

OOoh me me me pick me.
Ok my poem is called 'gone'
if ya don't like sad poems i have a few happy ones too.
Thanx so much, i love it when people actually read what i have written.
-Incognito

Incognito, your poem was awesome and I loved the repetiton. Also loved Leanne's poems. Both certain 5's from me. Coolness

If anyone wants more stuff read please say so, I've quite a bit of free time on my hands.

I checked out your poem Dying Rose and it was quite good. Not the best thing I ever read, but hey, the best stuff is either written by people who are now dead or have been writing for longer than us. So, well done.

hi, me again.. could you please read any other poems of mine. i need more comments and such to work on getting better.. if not ok

any of my poems on the top half.

Please check out my poem "dry you eyes"
it would mean a lot to me!

hugs

Id like you to read any of my poems if you didnt mind. Never and Forever is a good one... but I would appreciate any and all reading that you do! Thank you very much! :)

Tyler

hi

em, like it says in my bio, i know nothing about poetry, would appreciate the opinions of those who know. i have not written many, and my love poems are similar so, if i could have feedback on any of these. if not, thanks for reading this anyway. ~ Jay

Ps. I read other peoples and comment if i like them, but as for advice or critiscism...I don't think I am qualified to make it myself.

Ok, I'll get to work rightyway. I'll check out everyone's stuff, just need a few hours.....

Whew! Done. Awesome work people. So far, a huge thanks to everone who posted here, I appreciate you letting me read your work, and also quite stunned by the pretty pieces most of you have scripted. An even bigger thanks for everyone who commented/voted on my work. I appreciate your favour and it has been returned. If not, it will be.

Also, this by no means is a sign that I stopped. Keep posting here and I'll check out your work. Peace, love and empathy.

If anyone feels like checking out some good work, I'd recommend Masaki Ito, Sadowed Poet, Jacki Ford, Unseen Exposure and Shadowmaker. They're all incredible writers and I really do recommend their work for the reading.

Liked the new piece. Was it a follow-up for the my father series?

So, anyone else?

hi belle been gone from the site for a while, would you like to check out my series in features? I have some new ones but like these the best in feature: The happiest day of my life(1st) Honeymoon on the beach(2) The honeymoon isnt over..6 months later(3) and Daddys girl(4) Thanks..will check you out too ! :)Michelle

Hey =) I'd love it if you could check out some of mine, especially either my very old or very new ones... i'll return the favour...

xx, PorteR

Ok, working on it.........

Done, and that was totally awesome. Can't wait to read some more......