Scarlette
19 years ago
Hey, if you're still willing to read and review poems (honestly), could you check out mine? I have a few, but the one I want reviewed is "Untouched". It'll be much appreciated. And if you're also up for it, I have another called "Satan's Prayer", someone gave it a 3 and I'm curious to know what people actually think of it, instead of just rating it low and running off. |
SCARECROW
19 years ago
Also I would like to mention that Belle Misericordia (aka Tiffany) is dead, though not literally in the reality form of death. I felt the dire need to sacrifice her on the altar of my now purely Satanic existence. She had to die to make way for me. That is the circle of our heirachy, it always will be. I am not sorry to say that Belle Misericordia is now no more. Indeed, my placement in her body makes me purely the undead, purely what I need for the newest reincarnation. The apocalypse is born when Destiny weds Death. |
Scarlette
19 years ago
You're hilarious |
SCARECROW
19 years ago
Ok, done and done. Btw, you guys do realise I'm a very into-dark-poetry person, so if you have ANY dark poems you want me to check out, don't hesitate. I'd love to see them. All other poems are welcome too, but I just wanted a change from all the love poems I've been seeing lately. I'll check out anything you want me to, but just if you do have a dark poem that you think is really good, I'd appreciate if you told me so I could check it out. |
SCARECROW
19 years ago
I read your new poem and the writing style was good and all, but the only reason I didn't comment or vote was because I'm not a huge George Bush fan. I actually hate him for trying to ban gay marriages, because I believe people should have the freedom to do what they want as long as they don't harm each other. I'm also not very happy about America voting for him as president. Still, I only didn't comment and vote because it's a totally different viewpoint from mine and I don't agree. I don't want to go on about this, but good poem, and nicely written. |
SCARECROW
19 years ago
Actually, Belle is dead. I should know. First, she's my sister, and second, I killed her. Death for me is a laughing matter. If it isn't the same for you, well, we've got different viewpoints, period. |
SCARECROW
19 years ago
She says "If he's not insensitive, why is he racist? He's most certainly narcissistic and shallow. Also, from what I have gathered if I did know him it'd most certainly not be a pleasure. I don't want to waste my time on such self-orientated decadent nonsense. Please do not reply to this as you shall get no response. Besides, your self-obsession has chased River off this post." Wow, she's never said this sorta stuff to anyone before. She must really hate you. And as for all those girls who think you're so sweet, well have you heard that for every positive action there's a negative reaction? Well, Cara's that negativity all over. |